ki kariyee' ?

by Be_loved on January 15, 2008, 07:38:21 PM
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Rog avalle dil nu hon ta ki kariye,..? 
Chup chapeete akhiyaan ron ta ki kariye,..?
Rehndi aa sajjna di udheek ihna akhiyaan nu,..?
sajjan je bhul jaan ta ki kariye?Huh?
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2008, 07:46:51 PM »
Nonia ji kaya app apni shayri likh rahe hai?Huh?

Nice lines
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2008, 07:53:07 PM »
jii, pooja ji,. some lines are my own and some by my frnd..

and it's really nice to hear that u like the shairy
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«Reply #3 on: January 15, 2008, 07:59:42 PM »
nonia ji agar app apni shayri nahi likh rajhe then pls shayri likhne ke baad (NM) Not mine jaroor likhe..
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