batwara maa baap ka karne lage kapoot

by soudagar on April 11, 2012, 03:03:16 AM
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dosto kal sham phir ek aam dastan dekhi mere desh ki.... mere hi pados mein beta baap ko jhidak raha tha...wahi baap jisne 2 saal pehle ke qareeb retire hone ke baad apni sari retire punji se apne bete ki badi dhumdham se shadi ki thi .. par ab wo ghar par hi rehte hai kuch kamate nahi to unke bete aur bahu ko bahut akhrte hai ...chhoti chhoti  baton par unhe sunate hai kal to hadh hi kar di...yeh sirf mere pados ka hi kissa nahi aaj jyadtar yahi ho raha hai....isi par kuch khayal aap sab se share kar raha hoon..


Rishto Ko Yun Todte,Jaise Kaccha soot
Batwara Maa-Baap Ka,Karne Lage Kapoot

Kaise Beto Par Kare Mata-Pita Abhimaan
Apne Ghar Me Hi Bane,Anchahe Mehmaan

Mata-Pita Me Bas Rahe,Sakshaat Bhagwaan
Mandir-Masjid Dhoondta,Manav Hai Naadan

Patthar Ko Poojte Aur Navaate Sheesh
Pani Mange Baap To,Nakhre Karte 20

Mandir Me Pooja Kare,Ghar Me Kare Kalesh
Bapu Tu Bojha Lage,Patthar Lage Ganesh

Prem Aastha Tayag Hue,Beete Yug Ki Baat
Bacche Hi Karne Lage,Maata-Pita Se Ghaat

Pani Aankho Me Meri,Meri Sharm-O-Laaj
Kahe Bahu Ab Saas Se,Ghar Me Mera Raj

Nayi Sadi Se Mil Rahi,Dard Bhari Saugat
Beta Kehta Baap Se,Kya Teri Aaukat

Kama Akele Baap Ne,Bete Pale Chaar
Ek Akeli Jaan Ab,Chaaro Per Hai Bhaar
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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2012, 04:01:59 AM »
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bahut gahre aur heart touching ehsaas ham maan baap ke liy waqai painful hardi badhaai. aur haan aap achhe shaayar hai bhaai ham aap dono ek hee kashtee men sawaar hain kalaam meraa hai yaa aapkaa daad kaa haq rakhtaa hai to aap koi sankoch (chhote yaa bade) hone kaa na  rakkhe keep it up God bless you.
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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2012, 05:38:08 AM »
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Soudagar ji.Bahut hi dard bhari , haqiqat per mabni ,
khubsurat  nazm pesh ki hai. Kaise taareef  karuun .
Bahut bahut badhaai deta hoon aur dua karta hoon ki
aap ke qalam se aisi hi khubsurat rachnaayein nikalti
rahein aur Yoindia Shayariadab pe aati rahein.
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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2012, 06:20:47 AM »
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bahut hi maarmik prasang....bahut ache se express kiya apne jazbaton ko...bahut umda....
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2012, 08:36:12 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2012, 11:18:42 AM »
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Soudagar Ji, First of all my heartiest congratulations to you for writing on the subject which is most crucial phase of any parents. we on behalf of all human being should take a pledge that we will never ever do any bad deeds towards our parents who have given us everthing we require in our life.
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2012, 01:38:41 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat andaaz me aapni sachchaai ko pesh kiya hai.. sach me yahi haal hai aajkal ... bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne....!!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2012, 01:43:55 PM »
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bahut khoon... no word for explane it...
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«Reply #8 on: May 04, 2012, 01:17:17 PM »
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aap sabka  bahut bahut dhanywad
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