behte hue dariya:Share: Poetry of Pain

Rana Khamose

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Behte hue dariya ki koi bebsi thi sisayad,
paani ke hothon pe tairti tisnagi thi sayad,
Umar talak bhagte rhe jis cheez ke peeche,
Makhmali khabon main lipti khudkusi thi sayad,
Muskuraya wo meri kabr par tabiyat se phir aaj,
Bejan dil ki dhadkanen phir se badhi thi sayad,
Mukkadar ki talas main manjil gumshuda thi ,
Mere hathon ki lakiron main koi kami thi sayad,
kuch is terah se wo samil rha miujh main barson,
Garam ret main jaise koi thandak dabi thi sayad,
Dum tod diya dopeharki kadi dhoop main jisne Rana,
Daudti sadkon pe wo hanfti zindgi thi sayad.


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Re: behte hue dariya

«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2013, 10:06:00 PM »

bahot umda... Applause


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Re: behte hue dariya

«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2013, 11:26:02 PM »

waah waah


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Re: behte hue dariya

«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2013, 11:45:11 PM »

Quote from: Rana Khamose on May 04, 2013, 08:44:10 PM

Wah. Bahut Khoob.


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Re: behte hue dariya

«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2013, 11:57:27 PM »

Quote from: Rana Khamose on May 04, 2013, 08:44:10 PM

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah ek rau ki zaroorat thi isko shayad Applause

( spelling pe dhyaan de.n)


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Re: behte hue dariya

«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2013, 11:10:10 AM »

baht baht hi umdaa kalaam..
spelling aur har ek sher ke baad space dene ka dhyan rakheN

iss umdaa kalaam par daad aur mubarakbaad

aate rahen
likhte rahen
khus rahen


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