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mere ghar tune diya to kab jalaaya beraham.
koi jugnoo hi wahaan par jagmagaaya beraham.

raah mushqil thee hamaari aur mushqil ho gayi,
waqte rukhsat aankh hi tu bhar jo laaya beraham.

phir wahi aahen suni aur phir wahi aansu dikhe,
kya milaa tujhko jo mera dil dukhaaya beraham.

ret par shabnam giraakar sochta hu baat ye,
is bedardee se hi tune sab bhulaaya beraham.

zikr tera ho kabhi to aankh bhar aaye meri,
dekhne walo ne tujhko na bataaya beraham.

aik sapne ke sahaare kat rahi thee zindagi,
neem-shab kyun neend se mujhko jagaaya beraham.

kya kahu main kyun kahu aur kyun sunu main kya sunu,
baat koi ho bahas ko keench laaya beraham.

aate-jaate sabne thokar barhaan khaai magar,
raah se pathhar kisi ne na hataaya beraham.

sham se phir haay dil maayus apna hai ufaq
sham se phir haay koi yaad aaya beraham.
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2012, 11:18:09 AM »
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mere ghar tune diya to kab jalaaya beraham.
koi jugnoo hi wahaan par jagmagaaya beraham.

raah mushqil thee hamaari aur mushqil ho gayi,
waqte rukhsat aankh hi tu bhar jo laaya beraham.

phir wahi aahen suni aur phir wahi aansu dikhe,
kya milaa tujhko jo mera dil dukhaaya beraham.

ret par shabnam giraakar sochta hu baat ye,
is bedardee se hi tune sab bhulaaya beraham.

zikr tera ho kabhi to aankh bhar aaye meri,
dekhne walo ne tujhko na bataaya beraham.

aik sapne ke sahaare kat rahi thee zindagi,
neem-shab kyun neend se mujhko jagaaya beraham.

kya kahu main kyun kahu aur kyun sunu main kya sunu,
baat koi ho bahas ko keench laaya beraham.

aate-jaate sabne thokar barhaan khaai magar,
raah se pathhar kisi ne na hataaya beraham.

sham se phir haay dil maayus apna hai ufaq
sham se phir haay koi yaad aaya beraham.

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Meri taraf se pehla rau bhi lijiye
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2012, 11:29:22 AM »
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mere ghar tune diya to kab jalaaya beraham.
koi jugnoo hi wahaan par jagmagaaya beraham.

raah mushqil thee hamaari aur mushqil ho gayi,
waqte rukhsat aankh hi tu bhar jo laaya beraham.

phir wahi aahen suni aur phir wahi aansu dikhe,
kya milaa tujhko jo mera dil dukhaaya beraham.

ret par shabnam giraakar sochta hu baat ye,
is bedardee se hi tune sab bhulaaya beraham.

zikr tera ho kabhi to aankh bhar aaye meri,
dekhne walo ne tujhko na bataaya beraham.

aik sapne ke sahaare kat rahi thee zindagi,
neem-shab kyun neend se mujhko jagaaya beraham.

kya kahu main kyun kahu aur kyun sunu main kya sunu,
baat koi ho bahas ko keench laaya beraham.

aate-jaate sabne thokar barhaan khaai magar,
raah se pathhar kisi ne na hataaya beraham.

sham se phir haay dil maayus apna hai ufaq
sham se phir haay koi yaad aaya beraham.

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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2012, 11:34:56 AM »
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*~*~*~SWAGATAM JI~*~*~*
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Pehli hi post kafi asardaar rhi hai...
Very good..
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«Reply #4 on: May 05, 2012, 01:47:33 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: May 05, 2012, 02:02:00 PM »
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waah waah waah welcome
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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2012, 03:10:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: May 06, 2012, 02:45:04 AM »
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Ufaq sahab--
sabse pehle to aapka hardik swagat hai Yoindia Shayariadab par Usual Smile
janaab aapne kamaal ki ghazal share kari hai--
bht khoob--

janaab ek bat puchna chahunga ki--
agar ye aapki khud ki likhi poetry hai to aap ise Share section me q post kie?
aur agr nahi hai to aapne apna naam q mention kia?

jahan tak kosis karen ki apni likhi hui shayri ko proper section me hi post karen--
aur agr dusre shayar ki poetry post karni ho tab poetry launge section me post karen aur uss shayar ka bhi naam likhe--
agar shayr ka naam malum na ho ta NM likha karen--

shukriya
khus rahen
muskurate rahen
likhte rahen
aate rahen
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«Reply #8 on: May 06, 2012, 03:31:09 AM »
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Ufaq sahab--
sabse pehle to aapka hardik swagat hai Yoindia Shayariadab par Usual Smile
janaab aapne kamaal ki ghazal share kari hai--
bht khoob--

janaab ek bat puchna chahunga ki--
agar ye aapki khud ki likhi poetry hai to aap ise Share section me q post kie?
aur agr nahi hai to aapne apna naam q mention kia?

jahan tak kosis karen ki apni likhi hui shayri ko proper section me hi post karen--
aur agr dusre shayar ki poetry post karni ho tab poetry launge section me post karen aur uss shayar ka bhi naam likhe--
agar shayr ka naam malum na ho ta NM likha karen--

shukriya
khus rahen
muskurate rahen
likhte rahen
aate rahen
Ufaq sahab--
sabse pehle to aapka hardik swagat hai Yoindia Shayariadab par Usual Smile
janaab aapne kamaal ki ghazal share kari hai--
bht khoob--

janaab ek bat puchna chahunga ki--
agar ye aapki khud ki likhi poetry hai to aap ise Share section me q post kie?
aur agr nahi hai to aapne apna naam q mention kia?

jahan tak kosis karen ki apni likhi hui shayri ko proper section me hi post karen--
aur agr dusre shayar ki poetry post karni ho tab poetry launge section me post karen aur uss shayar ka bhi naam likhe--
agar shayr ka naam malum na ho ta NM likha karen--

shukriya
khus rahen
muskurate rahen
likhte rahen
aate rahen

aadab , janaab sirfira sahab. sabse phele to aapka shukrguzaar hu ki aapne khaaksaar ki bazm men haaziri darj ki aur is adnaa si koshish ko pasand kiya...........janaab ye ghazal to meri khud ki likhi huyi hi hai aur jahaan tak rahaa ye sawaal ki maine ise share section men kyun post kiya to muaaf kariye lekin aapne mujhe bataaya hai ki ye aik share section hai........main yahaan par nayaa hu aur mujhe ilm nahi hai ki khud ki likhi shaayri ko post karne ke liye proper section kaun sa hai?.........aage se khyaal rakhunga...........aik baar phir se bahut-2 shukria.
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«Reply #9 on: May 06, 2012, 12:21:49 PM »
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bahut bahut khoobsoorat.....bahut umda....
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«Reply #10 on: May 07, 2012, 01:57:18 PM »
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