hamari dastan ka aagaz-e-anjaam

by ripan dev on October 14, 2012, 11:24:21 AM
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hum huye mashur thode, thoda wo badnaam hua,
aise hamari dastaan ka aagaz-e-anjaam hua.

gar wafadaari nibha lete , to phir kya baat thi
ek waada tak nibhaane mein bhi wo to naakam hua.

rabt kya hai, zakhm kya hai, humse na puchho yaron,
silseela jo saans tak tha,ab se lo, benaam hua..

mil gaya tha zindgi ki aapa-dhaapi mein kahin,
aadmi jo khaas tha wo hote hote aam huaaaa.

waqt ki kamsin adaa par achhe achhe mar chuke,
shaam-o-shoukat se gheera tha wo shayar gumnaam hua.



aagaz -e- anjam= khatam hone ki shuruaat
rabt= rishta
aapa-dhaapi= apni apni chinta , pareshani
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«Reply #1 on: October 14, 2012, 11:44:21 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: October 14, 2012, 12:42:57 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 14, 2012, 01:43:22 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 14, 2012, 02:04:48 PM »
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Quote from: ripan dev on October 14, 2012, 11:24:21 AM
hum huye mashur thode, thoda wo badnaam hua,
aise hamari dastaan ka aagaz-e-anjaam hua.
waah waah waah waah
gar wafadaari nibha lete , to phir kya baat thi
ek waada tak nibhaane mein bhi wo to naakam hua.
waah kyaa baat kahi hai aapne
rabt kya hai, zakhm kya hai, humse na puchho yaron,
silseela jo saans tak tha,ab se lo, benaam hua..
shaandaar sher
mil gaya tha zindgi ki aapa-dhaapi mein kahin,
aadmi jo khaas tha wo hote hote aam huaaaa.
Jidagi ki ye to karwi sachchai bayaan kar di aapne
waqt ki kamsin adaa par achhe achhe mar chuke,
shaam-o-shoukat se gheera tha wo shayar gumnaam hua.
shaam yaa shaan

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aagaz -e- anjam= khatam hone ki shuruaat
rabt= rishta
aapa-dhaapi= apni apni chinta , pareshani
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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2012, 03:00:13 PM »
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Quote from: ripan dev on October 14, 2012, 11:24:21 AM
hum huye mashur thode, thoda wo badnaam hua,
aise hamari dastaan ka aagaz-e-anjaam hua.

gar wafadaari nibha lete , to phir kya baat thi
ek waada tak nibhaane mein bhi wo to naakam hua.

rabt kya hai, zakhm kya hai, humse na puchho yaron,
silseela jo saans tak tha,ab se lo, benaam hua..

mil gaya tha zindgi ki aapa-dhaapi mein kahin,
aadmi jo khaas tha wo hote hote aam huaaaa.

waqt ki kamsin adaa par achhe achhe mar chuke,
shaam-o-shoukat se gheera tha wo shayar gumnaam hua.



aagaz -e- anjam= khatam hone ki shuruaat
rabt= rishta
aapa-dhaapi= apni apni chinta , pareshani



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«Reply #7 on: October 14, 2012, 03:20:57 PM »
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boht khub ripan ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 16, 2012, 02:22:29 AM »
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thanx to all
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