~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

by thinkhattk on January 08, 2010, 10:56:02 AM

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thinkhattk

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WO DETA HE DARD BAS HAMI KO,
KYA SAMJEGA WO IN AANKHO KI NAMMI,
LAKHO DIWANE HO JIS KE,
WO KYA MEHSUS KAREGA EK HAMARI KAMMI KO....

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baadal102

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Re: ~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

«Reply #1 on: January 08, 2010, 10:57:35 AM »

bahut khoob ji kya baat hai

har insaan ki alag ahmiyat hoti hai,koi kisi ki kami ko poora nahi ker sakta hai


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thinkhattk

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Re: ~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

«Reply #2 on: January 08, 2010, 11:05:46 AM »

sukriya badal ji..

or bilku sahi kaha aap ne....


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arac

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Re: ~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

«Reply #3 on: January 08, 2010, 11:20:52 AM »

WAH........

JISKE KHUDKE PAER NA HO ZAMMI PAR
USKI KYA NAZAR PADEGI HAMI PAR
KHUD AASMAN KI KHAWISH RAKHTA HAI
AUR HAMARI KAMMI MEHSUS KARTA HAI....


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riyaz106

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Re: ~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

«Reply #4 on: January 08, 2010, 11:30:20 AM »

Wah Dev. ji bahut achhi lines likhi hain. Nice creation. Do mash-hoor sher pesh hain:

Shor barpa hai khana-e-dil mein
Ek deewar si giri hai abhi
Bhari duniya mein jee nahi lagta
Jane kis cheez ki kami hai abhi


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_Vicky_

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Re: ~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

«Reply #5 on: January 08, 2010, 12:17:18 PM »

Bahut accha Likha Hai Devangi.. aapki Yeh 4 line mujhe bahut acchi lagi..

**~** Mann **~**


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mrZakram

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Re: ~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

«Reply #6 on: January 08, 2010, 03:13:32 PM »

i think main bata nahi sakta k mujhe yeh shayri kitni Achhi lagi.dev nice


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samir_bc

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Re: ~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

«Reply #7 on: January 08, 2010, 04:27:28 PM »

nice sharing dev ji....


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: ~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

«Reply #8 on: January 08, 2010, 06:28:26 PM »

Nice lines Deevangi Ji


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thinkhattk

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Re: ~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

«Reply #9 on: January 09, 2010, 07:26:16 AM »

aap sabhi ka bahot bahot sukriya.......

Quote from: arac on January 08, 2010, 11:20:52 AM

WAH........

JISKE KHUDKE PAER NA HO ZAMMI PAR
USKI KYA NAZAR PADEGI HAMI PAR
KHUD AASMAN KI KHAWISH RAKHTA HAI
AUR HAMARI KAMMI MEHSUS KARTA HAI....

Quote from: riyaz106 on January 08, 2010, 11:30:20 AM

bahot hi aachha reply diya he....


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KOYAL46

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Re: ~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

«Reply #10 on: May 12, 2010, 11:13:22 AM »

Good lines Devangi-di..... Applause

Jo jaisa jiska naseeb hota hai usse wahi milta hai
Lakho Diwane jis ke usse sacha saathi kab milta hai

Quote from: thinkhattk on January 08, 2010, 10:56:02 AM

WO DETA HE DARD BAS HAMI KO,
KYA SAMJEGA WO IN AANKHO KI NAMMI,
LAKHO DIWANE HO JIS KE,
WO KYA MEHSUS KAREGA EK HAMARI KAMMI KO....


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brokenbyluv

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Re: ~ * KAMMI * ~ _DEV

«Reply #11 on: May 12, 2010, 12:30:00 PM »

Moved to appropriate section!

Thnx!


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thegrimreaper

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«Reply #12 on: May 12, 2010, 12:33:13 PM »

good sharing


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