My Favorite Poetries

by khushi4pari on December 07, 2009, 05:59:55 PM
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~Main ek ghazal likhna chahti hu~

Main ek GaZaL likhna chahti hoon
kuch soch k ruk jati hoon
main usse Bhool jana chahti hoon
kuch soch k ruk jati hoon

ye kaisa dar hai jiska koi naam nahi
ye kaisa rishta hai jiska koi anjaam nahi

Bohat socha maine iss soch ko
bohat chaha maine unke aagosh ko

Mushkil hai iss darr se dur jana
Mushkil hai iss pyar ko bhool pana

Ye darr Din Ba Din Badta jata hai
Pyar bhi rukta nahi bas ho sa jata hai

GaZal likhne ka ehsaas ab mujhe darata hai
Ankhen band karoon to unka chehra hi nazar aata hai

Darr lagta hai mujhe ke ab likh na paongi
Agar Unka ehsas na raha,main reh na paongi
main to marr hi jaongi
main to mitt hi jaongi...!!!

Main ek GaZaL likhna chahti hoon
kuch soch k ruk jati hoon
main unhe Bhool jana chahti hoon
kuch soch k ruk jati hoon........ tearyeyed tearyeyed

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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2009, 07:15:26 PM »
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Very nice sharing Khusi Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: December 08, 2009, 06:36:11 AM »
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Thanks for sharing Khushi ji.lovely creation by the author, Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 08, 2009, 09:43:44 AM »
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Aapki ye poem bahut achhi lagi Khushi Ji.
Wordings bahut khushnuma hai. Aala darje
ka kalaam hai. Thanks for sharing. Main
bhi apni ek most favourite ghazal share
kar raha hun, ummeed hai sabko pasand
aayegi:


Kisi ki yaad mein palken zara bhigo lete
Udaas raat ki tanhaaiyon mein ro lete
Dukhon ka bojh akele nahin sambhalta hai
Kahin wo milta to usse lipat ke ro lete
Agar safar mein hamaara bhi hamsafar hota
Badi khushi se unhi pattharon pe so lete
Tumhari raah mein shakhon pe phool sukh gaye
Kabhi hawa ki tarah is taraf bhi ho lete
Ye kya ke roz wahi chaandni ka bistar ho
Kabhi to dhoop ki chaadar bichha ke so lete.
(---NM---)
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #4 on: December 08, 2009, 02:31:27 PM »
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Thxxx alottttt rajesh ji ,madhu ji aur riyaz ji really thxx...riyaz ji aap ki sharing bohat achi hai sach me ek ek lafz dil ko chuta hai....thxxx for sharing...
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #5 on: December 08, 2009, 08:40:43 PM »
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               ~Unki kami~         
 

         Phir chand khila phir raat
                    thami!
         Phir dil ne kaha hai unki
                    kami!     
          Phir yad ke jhonke mehek
                      gye!
           Phir pagal arman behek
                      gye!
            Phir jannat si lagti hai
                  zameen!
         Phir dil ne kaha hai unki
                    kami!
             Phir guzre lamho ki
                  batain!
             Phir jagi jagi si hai
                  ratain!
          Phir ther gyi palko pe
                     nami!
     Phir dil ne kaha hai unki kami!!!! tearyeyed tearyeyed

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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #6 on: December 08, 2009, 09:04:16 PM »
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Wonderful sharing Khusi Ji
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khushi4pari
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2009, 09:53:50 PM »
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Thxx alottttt
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2009, 09:56:15 PM »
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Itni suhani raat mein kyun na ho unki kami
Aise mein yaad ayenge aur armaan satayenge
Sara vatavaran mehak uthega jannat ki tarah
Phir dil to dil hai mahssos karega unki kami
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«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2009, 10:00:25 PM »
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Wah wah Bohat khoob likha hai aap ne very nice thxxx Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: December 08, 2009, 10:09:39 PM »
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Riyaz ji,Khushi ji,beautiful sharing,Rajesh ji wonderful lines by you. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #11 on: December 08, 2009, 10:13:49 PM »
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Shukriya Khusi Ji

N Thanx Madhu
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riyaz106
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«Reply #12 on: December 09, 2009, 12:24:13 PM »
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Rajesh Ji and Madhu Ji meri share ki hui ghazal
pasand aai, aapka bahut bahut shukriya.Rajesh
Ji aapki poem bhi bahut achhi lagi. Khushi
ji ki poem ke to kya kahne.Apne aap mein bemisaal
poetry hai aapki. Main apni ek aur fav. ghazal share
kar raha hun:

Ae maut ! unhein bhulaaye zamaane guzar gaye
Aa jaa ki zahar khaaye zamaane guzar gaye
O jaane vaale aa ki tere intazaar mein
Raste ko ghar banaaye zamaane guzar gaye
Gham hai na ab khushi hai na ummid hai na yaas
Sab se nijaat paaye zamaane guzar gaye
Kya laayaq-e-sitam bhi nahin ab main doston
Patthar bhi ghar mein aaye zamaane guzar gaye
Jaane bahaar phuul nahin aadmi hun main
Aa jaa ki muskuraaye zamaane guzar gaye
(---NM---)
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«Reply #13 on: December 09, 2009, 02:07:47 PM »
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Thxxx alotttt jo aap ko meri sharing itni pasand aayi...aur aap ki ghazal ek baar phir behtareen hai its really very nice thxxxx for sharing Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: December 09, 2009, 02:38:07 PM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah pariji bahut hi badhiya pasand hai aur bahut hi umda thread open kiya hai apne.....
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