Nadaan Zinda Kyo Hai ?

by Nadaan Alone on October 19, 2009, 04:46:13 PM
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Koi Ye Kaise Bataye Ke Wo Tanha Kyo Hai,
Wo Jo Apna Tha Wohi Aur Kisi Ka Kyo Hai ??

Yahi Duniya Hai To Phir Aisi Ye Duniya Kyo Hai,
Yehi Hota Hai To Aakhir Yehi Hota Kyo Hai ??

Zindagi Se Jo Anban Si Chal Rahi Hai Muddat Se,
Phir Bhi Woh Nadaan Ab Tak Zinda Kyo Hai ??

Ek Zara Haath Badha Do To Pakad Lein Daaman,
Unke Seene Mein Sama Jaye Hamari Dhadkan,
Itni Qurbat Hai To Phir Faasla Itna Kyo Hai  ??

Tum Musarrat Kaho Ya Ise Gam Ka Rishta,
Kehte Hain Pyaar Ka Risha Hai Janam Ka Rishta,
Hai Janam Ka Jo Ye Rishta To Badalta Kyo Hai ??
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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2009, 06:06:16 PM »
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MA MA MA
pehli baar itni dil kash shayri padri, keep it up
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«Reply #2 on: October 20, 2009, 08:39:17 AM »
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Is post mein ek galti thi ....aap ne waah waah to kar diya ....lekin bataya nahi .....acha hota agar waah waah karne ke saath saath aap galti ko theek karne ko bhi kehte .....thnxxx
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«Reply #3 on: October 20, 2009, 04:27:45 PM »
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Is ghazal ko Jagjit Singh ne bohot hi khoobsurti se gaaya hai.....mujhe bohot pasand hai

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/aexV0A7HwwI&rel=1" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/aexV0A7HwwI&rel=1</a>

Quote from: Nadaan Alone on October 19, 2009, 04:46:13 PM

Zindagi Se Jo Anban Si Chal Rahi Hai Muddat Se,
Phir Bhi Woh Nadaan Ab Tak Zinda Kyo Hai ??

Ye lines is ghazal ka hissa nahin hain !
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2009, 04:42:42 PM »
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Quote from: Shayara on October 20, 2009, 04:27:45 PM
Is ghazal ko Jagjit Singh ne bohot hi khoobsurti se gaaya hai.....mujhe bohot pasand hai

<a href="http://www.youtube.com/v/aexV0A7HwwI&rel=1" target="_blank">http://www.youtube.com/v/aexV0A7HwwI&rel=1</a>

Ye lines is ghazal ka hissa nahin hain !

aapne poori ghazal kahan padi hai ??
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«Reply #5 on: October 20, 2009, 07:26:55 PM »
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Bahoot Khoobsurat likhte hain aap
Keep It Up  Applause Applause Applause

Very Nice Nadanji
Maf Karna Nadan ji kuch galti se dad delete kar baithe the
fir se kabool kijiye
becoz aapne wakayi bahoot khubsurat gazal yahan hamare sath share ki hai

Rahi baat Galtiyan Dhundhane Ki
Vo to gazal ki khubsurati me chip jaya kartin hain

~Pank~
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2009, 07:25:19 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on October 20, 2009, 07:26:55 PM
Very Nice Nadanji
Maf Karna Nadan ji kuch galti se dad delete kar baithe the
fir se kabool kijiye
becoz aapne wakayi bahoot khubsurat gazal yahan hamare sath share ki hai

Rahi baat Galtiyan Dhundhane Ki
Vo to gazal ki khubsurati me chip jaya kartin hain

~Pank~

ok dost ...shukriya ....!!
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«Reply #7 on: October 26, 2009, 08:30:13 AM »
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Quote from: pankshivam on October 20, 2009, 07:26:55 PM
Very Nice Nadanji
Maf Karna Nadan ji kuch galti se dad delete kar baithe the
fir se kabool kijiye
becoz aapne wakayi bahoot khubsurat gazal yahan hamare sath share ki hai

Rahi baat Galtiyan Dhundhane Ki
Vo to gazal ki khubsurati me chip jaya kartin hain

~Pank~

Sahi kaha pank ji aapne ki humsesha galtiya dard ke piche chup jati h
and thnx for sharing this gajal nadan ji
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«Reply #8 on: October 26, 2009, 11:28:00 AM »
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muhje nai maloom, kya ghalti hai?
Quote from: Nadaan Alone on October 20, 2009, 08:39:17 AM
Is post mein ek galti thi ....aap ne waah waah to kar diya ....lekin bataya nahi .....acha hota agar waah waah karne ke saath saath aap galti ko theek karne ko bhi kehte .....thnxxx
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