thareef ki layak

by sanjo on September 16, 2009, 06:02:47 AM
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thareef ki layak kabhi nahi tha
hum kabhi na tha thareef ki layak
hum to har khoobiyat ka gulam hi
bas jariyaan hoon
thareef ki layak kabhi nahi tha

labz bas barasthe hi kagaz par
jo theri husn paaker javan hotehi
mein to bas jariyaan hoon
thareef ki layak kabhi nahi tha

-santhosh
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«Reply #1 on: September 16, 2009, 07:22:24 AM »
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Santoshji bura n lagayen par hindi ka aapne kachra kar diya hai... Shocked Even More sad7 sad11
tareef k layak kabhi nahi tha
hum kabhi nahi they tareef k layak
hum to har khoobi k gulam hi they
bas jariyaan hoon (sentence pura nahi huaa)
tareef k layak kabhi nahi tha
Hum bahu-vachan hai...ek se jyada...

Quote from: sanjo on September 16, 2009, 06:02:47 AM
thareef ki layak kabhi nahi tha
hum kabhi na tha thareef ki layak
hum to har khoobiyat ka gulam hi
bas jariyaan hoon
thareef ki layak kabhi nahi tha

labz bas barasthe hi kagaz par
jo theri husn paaker javan hotehi
mein to bas jariyaan hoon
thareef ki layak kabhi nahi tha

-santhosh
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Roja
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«Reply #2 on: September 16, 2009, 07:34:48 AM »
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Welcome to Yoindia Santosh.... and Enjoy your Stay. Usual Smile
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sanjo
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«Reply #3 on: September 16, 2009, 08:56:40 AM »
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i will try to improve ....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #4 on: September 16, 2009, 09:14:51 AM »
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Thats like a good student...try try you will succeed...just take care read twice before typing...

Quote from: sanjo on September 16, 2009, 08:56:40 AM
i will try to improve ....
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«Reply #5 on: September 16, 2009, 09:18:10 AM »
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actually i  write in  telugu  & i try in  hindi
check this  .....http://sangahita.blogspot.com/
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«Reply #6 on: September 16, 2009, 09:44:14 AM »
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 Sanjo ji aapka blog dekha bahut sunder hai...achha sajaya hai aapne...Aap jaroor Telgu mai bahut achha likhte hain par mujhe Telgu aati nahi... sad7
Aap seekaiye mujhe blog banana v sajaana... icon_flower

Quote from: sanjo on September 16, 2009, 09:18:10 AM
actually i  write in  telugu  & i try in  hindi
check this  .....http://sangahita.blogspot.com/
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sanjo
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«Reply #7 on: September 16, 2009, 09:50:02 AM »
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sure ... send ur  gmail id
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: September 17, 2009, 02:52:36 AM »
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Welcome to yo Sanjo. hello
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Roja
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«Reply #9 on: September 17, 2009, 05:21:13 AM »
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Quote from: sanjo on September 16, 2009, 05:18:10 AM
actually i  write in  telugu  & i try in  hindi
check this  .....http://sangahita.blogspot.com/


Sanjo.... you are not supposed to post any link. I request you to
delete the above said thread.

(I saw your creations... some are too good to read. You write very good in telugu. Keep flowing)
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: September 17, 2009, 12:23:00 PM »
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wow...Rojaji aapko telgu aati hai....aur kaun kaun se language aati hai.?
Meri kuhu kuhu aati hai kya..?!!!

KUHU KUHU kuhu kuhu kuhu kuhu....bolo mai kya boli...


Quote from: Roja on September 17, 2009, 05:21:13 AM
Quote from: sanjo on September 16, 2009, 05:18:10 AM
actually i  write in  telugu  & i try in  hindi
check this  .....http://sangahita.blogspot.com/


Sanjo.... you are not supposed to post any link. I request you to
delete the above said thread.

(I saw your creations... some are too good to read. You write very good in telugu. Keep flowing)
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«Reply #11 on: September 17, 2009, 12:58:01 PM »
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Kiun Roja Sahiba
Kiun Delete Karey Link?
Any problem?
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