Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaan baar baar kyun

by prashantsingh on November 03, 2012, 11:18:48 AM
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Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaa.n baar baar kyun
khauf ki yeh daastaa.n baar baar kyun
ishk ka anzaam aakhir dard bhara kyun
hansta hai mujh par yeh jahaa.n baar baar kyun
deewaar koi kaam aakhir kyun nahi aati
ujadta hai mera ghar yaa.n baar baar kyun
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«Reply #1 on: November 03, 2012, 11:48:24 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: November 03, 2012, 12:30:45 PM »
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Nice...
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«Reply #3 on: November 03, 2012, 03:13:41 PM »
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deewaar koi kaam aakhir kyun nahi aati
ujadta hai mera ghar yaa.n baar baar kyun
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«Reply #4 on: November 03, 2012, 04:43:16 PM »
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Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaa.n baar baar kyun
khauf ki yeh daastaa.n baar baar kyun
ishk ka anzaam aakhir dard bhara kyun
hansta hai mujh par yeh jahaa.n baar baar kyun
deewaar koi kaam aakhir kyun nahi aati
ujadta hai mera ghar yaa.n baar baar kyun

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«Reply #5 on: November 03, 2012, 07:07:51 PM »
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bahut khoob

note: Poetry lounge where you have posted, that is meant for sharing other's creation only. I hope you get my point)
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«Reply #6 on: November 04, 2012, 12:53:34 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #7 on: November 04, 2012, 01:19:49 AM »
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Uthta hai mere ghar se dhuaa.n baar baar kyun
khauf ki yeh daastaa.n baar baar kyun
ishk ka anzaam aakhir dard bhara kyun
hansta hai mujh par yeh jahaa.n baar baar kyun
deewaar koi kaam aakhir kyun nahi aati
ujadta hai mera ghar yaa.n baar baar kyun
bohut khoob umda peshkash aur is shair ke liye khusoosi daaad qubool kijiye


deewaar koi kaam aakhir kyun nahi,

aati ujadta hai mera ghar yaa.n baar baar kyun
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«Reply #8 on: November 04, 2012, 01:53:31 AM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #9 on: November 04, 2012, 03:58:25 PM »
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bahut khoob jaanb bahut hi khub
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