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बैठा  हुआ हूॅ बनके घटा काली
जाम था वो भी हुआ खाली
आज न छेडो मैं रो दूॅगा
जो न चाहुॅ  मैं वो कह दूॅगा

रेत के ढेर से ,अरमान मिलेंगे
बिखरे हुवे से, सामान मिलेंगे
घुल जाने दो बनके धुॅआ फिजा में
कई बेहतर मुझसे, मेहमान मिलेंगे

दबी रेत के निचे, वो इमारतहूॅ मैं
तबाह करदे जीना,वो शरारत हूॅ मैं
न माॅगना दुआओं में फिर मुझे
पूरी न होगी ,वो इबादत हूॅ मैं

आज न छेडो मैं रो दूॅगा
जो न चाहुॅ मैं वो कह दूॅगा


 
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«Reply #1 on: February 16, 2016, 12:35:57 PM »
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Quote from: Pramod singh on February 16, 2016, 11:51:22 AM
बैठा  हुआ हूॅ बनके घटा काली
जाम था वो भी हुआ खाली
आज न छेडो मैं रो दूॅगा
जो न चाहुॅ  मैं वो कह दूॅगा

रेत के ढेर से ,अरमान मिलेंगे
बिखरे हुवे से, सामान मिलेंगे
घुल जाने दो बनके धुॅआ फिजा में
कई बेहतर मुझसे, मेहमान मिलेंगे

दबी रेत के निचे, वो इमारतहूॅ मैं
तबाह करदे जीना,वो शरारत हूॅ मैं
न माॅगना दुआओं में फिर मुझे
पूरी न होगी ,वो इबादत हूॅ मैं

आज न छेडो मैं रो दूॅगा
जो न चाहुॅ मैं वो कह दूॅगा


 









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«Reply #2 on: February 16, 2016, 01:09:22 PM »
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Actually kahe dena chahiye.....pramodji...

Shayar ka yahi to hoonar hai ki vo apne dil ki khushi ya durd dono ko alfazo Mai Bahot aasani se saja lete hai.......Bahot badhiya
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«Reply #6 on: February 17, 2016, 06:53:29 AM »
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Actually kahe dena chahiye.....pramodji...

Shayar ka yahi to hoonar hai ki vo apne dil ki khushi ya durd dono ko alfazo Mai Bahot aasani se saja lete hai.......Bahot badhiya
shukriya  sikha ji ... bilkul keh dena chahiye keh diya jaayega bhi
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