MAA KA DIL......SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on November 05, 2012, 08:27:49 PM
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ek aisi kahani share karne ja raha hoon jise suna to sabne hee hoga par mann kar raha tha isliye aap sabse share kar raha hoon jinhone kabhi na suna na padha ho isko to jarur gour farmayega

isse badh ke koi sheh bhi komal nahi
maa ke dil jaisa duniya mein koi dil nahi
MAA KA DIL ....MAA KA DIL

maa ke bhaktjanoO thaam ke dil sunoo
maa ke dil ki kahaani sunata hoon main
peeda dukh se ghiri  aasuon se bhari
sachchi mamata ke darshan krata hoon main...
dukhiya ek naari thi bhagya ki maari thi
sukh devi tha naam par sukh na mila
uske sindoor ko bindiya ke noor ko
haaye zaalim muqadar ne cheen tha liya
ek noor-e-nazar pyaara lakthe jigar
uski mamta ki chaao mein palta raha
ma ki ungli pakad chalke idhar udhar
kabhi girta kabhi woh sambhalta rha
maa ko rehta tha darr koi lage na nazar..
kaala gaal pe teeka lagati thi woh
hoke bas pyaar ke mircho ko waar ke
jalte chulhe mein nis din girati thi woh
use aankhon se karti woh ojhal nahi..-2
maa ke dil jaisa duniya mein koi dil nahi

kapde see see ke woh aansu pee pee ke woh
apne bete pe khushiya lootati rahi
abLa kee bebasi karke maatha kashi
bhukHi khud reh ke usko khiltai rahi-2
din guzarte rahe ro ro ke kat te rahe
kabhi bacche ko gum na tha karne diya
chaahe lachaar thi dukh se do chaar thi
saaya dukho ka uspe naa padne diya
mann mein tha hausla tha kal ko hoke bada
mere kadmo pe khushiyaan bicha dega yeh
achche din aayenge duur gum jaayenge
mere kaanto ko kaliyaan bana dega yeh
ambe maiyaa ke darr uska karne shukra
saath bete ke ek din jaaungi main
ghar mein aaye bahu pariyon si hubahu
maang mannat bhawani se aayungi main
duur mujhse meri ab toh mazil nahi-2
maa ke dil jaisa duniya mein koi dil nahi.....
deke mata dulaar jaag kar beshumaar
roz sapne hi sapne sanjoti rahi
kabhi mooh chhomti usko le jhumti
chaahe parde mein nis din hi roti rahi
tara aakhon ka wo maa ko pyara tha jo
waqt ke sath ek din bada ho gayaa

maa ke balidan ki koi qadar na rahee
buri sangat ki daldal mein wo kho gayaa
aibon se ghir gaya is qadar gir gaya
galiyan tak tha maa ko sunane lagaa
mehanton ka jo dhan ek chandal ban
behayaee se wo tha lutaane lagaa
maiyaa roti rahi aahein bharati rahi
haye socha tha kya aur kya ho gayaa
sapna tuta hai kyun bhagya futa hai kyun
kyun bhalaaiyon ka badla bura ho gayaa
chaha jo tha hua usko hasil nahee
maa ke dil jaisa dunia mein koi dil nahee
..............continue......
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«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2012, 08:41:52 PM »
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very heart touching
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«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2012, 09:10:32 PM »
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Wo durachari ban ho gaya badchalan
Fas gaya galat ladki ke premjaal mein
Jitna chilaati maa usko samjhati maa
Utna jyada duba thaw o janjaal mein
Roj ladki se mil uska kehta tha dil
Tujhse shadi rachane ko jee chahta
Tujhe dulhan bana doli mein bitha
Ghar apne le jaane ko jee chahta
Tere sar ki kasam mere  pyare sanam
Tere bin mujhse ab to jiya jaye naa
Tum kaho jo karun tujpe jaan vaar doon
Par judai ka vish yeh piya jayee naa
Ladki ne kaha gar mujhse waffaa
Dil apni tu maa ka mujhe  laa ke de
Jo tu itna kare mera waada hai yeh
Bade sham sejaoungi ghar mein tere
Bada aasan hai kaam mushkil nahee
Maa ke dil jaisa dunia mein koi dil nai
Andha ho pyar mein jhuthe aietbar mein
Haye le ke chhuri apne ghar aa gaya
Maa ko kuch na pata hone wala hai kya
Beta dhaane ko kya hai qehar aa gaya
Maa ne roj ki tarah khana laa ke diya
Aur sou sou duyaein thi dene lagee
Laal samjho mere  sadke jaoun tere
Sachi mamta balaein thee laene lagi
Eta shaitan tha hua haiwan thaa
Jhuthi ulfat mein maa ki khushi chal gai
Janam jisne diya doodh jiska piyaa
Uske dil pe hi uski chhuri chal gaii
Khoon maa ka piyo beta jug jug jiyo
Teri harqat se maa ka mann khil gaiya
Marte marte yahi maa ne aawaj diii
Meri mamta ka mujhko sila mil gaya
Apne qatil samjhe jo qatil nahi
Maa ke dil jaisa dunia mein koi dil nahi
Behayaa berahm karke aisa karam
Bhaaga ladki ke ghar tha chala jar aha
Jo tha waada kiya wo nibha ha diya
Apni maqaqari par thaw o itra rha
Chalte chalet tabhi usko thkar lagi
Aur dharti pe muh ke  bal wo gir gaya
Hathon se fisal gaya wo maa ka dil
Itna maa ki duaon ka fal gir gayaa

Bola maa ka dil mere laal sambhal
Koi teri wafaa mein khot to nahee
Tera hoye re bhala mujhe sach sach bta
Kahin tujhko lagi koi chot to nahee
Mere dil ko utha dil se dil ko laga
Is dil mein bada pyar tere liyee
Dil hardum mera deta dil se duaa
Dil yeh qurbaan sou b aar tere liye
Maa rahm dil hai tujh jaisi sangdil nahi
Maa ke dil jaisa dunia mein koi dil nahee
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«Reply #3 on: November 05, 2012, 09:21:30 PM »
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leke thoda sa dum beaqal besharam
dil maa ka utha ke chala wo gaya
khukhaar wo pashu daal maa ka lahu
karna wo roshan chahe wafa ka diyaa
premika ke wo ghar fakr se pahuch kar
bola maa ka dil laya meri jaan
is jahan mein kahin koi mujhs sa nahi
maine kar liya pass yeh imtihan
pagalpan dekhkar boli wo chikhkar
are wehsi darinde yeh kya kar diya
dharti phat jayegi prlaya aa jayegi
tune mamta ko jag mein tabaah kar diya
tere jaise agar huye aur bhi bashar
maa beton ko degi janam na kabhi
rona aata mujhe lakh laant tujhe
mere ghar se zalim tu nikal ja abhi
tu mere pyar ke ab to qabil nahiii
maa ke dil jaisa dunia mein koi dil nahi

uski fatkar se laanton ki maar se
sar peet ke kalanki wo rone laga
maine kya kar diya khoon maa ka kiya
apne kiye pe sharmshar hone lagaa
maa ka dil dekhkar mathe ko tekkar
bola he janni maiya mujhe maaf kar
main hoon papi bada sar jhukaye khada
 ho sake to yeh chola mera saaf kar
ab main jaon kahan muh chhupaon kahan
maine khud ko gunahon mein gark kar liya
tu to nirdosh maa tujhsa koi kahan
maine jeewan yeh apna nark kar liyaa
jo kiya sochkar balon ko nochkar
wo zameen pe tha sar ko patakne laga
log dhikkar the pathar bhi maarte
wo pagal ho darr darr bhatkane laga
sabhi kehte yeh maafi ke qabil nahee
maa ke dil jaisa dunia mein koi dil nahi
bediyon mein jakad police le gai pakad
mout saamne khadi dekh wo darr gaya
khouf itna badha jo wo seh na sakkaa
pagalkhane mein ro ro ke wo marr gaya


maa ke bhakto suno isse kuch sabak lo
dil bhule se maa ka kabhi dukhana nahii
yeh samjh lo sabhi maa ne jo aah bhari
lok parlok phir kahin bhi thikana nahi
ambe maa ke bhawan pichhe rakhna qadam
pehle ghar baithi maa ke charan chum lo
uski aashish le mamta chunri tale
sachi jannat ke karke darsh jhum lo
ghar mein bhukhi hai maa bahar langar laga
aise insaan kabhi  bakshe jaate nahee
maa ko peeda se  bhar jake daatee ke ghar
sherowali ka wo pyaar paate nahi
maa sa nirdosh guru koi qamil nahee
maa ke dil jaisa duniya mein koi dil nahi

isse badhke koi sheh bhi komal nahee
maa ke dil jaisa dunia mein koi dil nahee
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«Reply #4 on: November 05, 2012, 11:08:52 PM »
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v v nice n v v heart touching....
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«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2012, 06:22:57 AM »
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saudagar ji hats off to you,bohut umda nazm hai,bohut mehnat ki hai aapne,

aapki is mehnat ko salute karta huN, sach maniye dil ko choo jane wali

nazm hai.

nihayat umda tariqe se piroya hai aapne shabdoN Ko. merii dili daad qubool

kareN.........  Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #6 on: November 06, 2012, 07:16:54 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Aarish bhai maine to ise sirf yoindia par likha hai waise to yeh mata rani ki bahut zabardast bhenton mein se ek hai jise balbir nirdoshi ne likha hai aur narender chanchal ne gaya.............
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«Reply #8 on: November 06, 2012, 08:45:16 AM »
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Aarish bhai maine to ise sirf yoindia par likha hai waise to yeh mata rani ki bahut zabardast bhenton mein se ek hai jise balbir nirdoshi ne likha hai aur narender chanchal ne gaya.............
oK but maine pehle nahin suni , but phir bhi umda nazm hai
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«Reply #9 on: November 06, 2012, 08:56:27 AM »
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sach kaha bhai


maa ke dil jaisa dunia

Main Koi Dil Nahin
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waah waah waah laajawaab (immortal) peskash hai Soudagar Sahib,jitnee bhi aapkee taarif kee jaaye kam hai, bahut mabarak.
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