God

by Preety kathuria on January 30, 2010, 04:52:59 PM
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At midnight., a thought came to mind;
to write something which is inside me;
Lets recall our creator,
and leave everything behind..


Oh Lord! I know its empty;
The smile that we wear;
Real is in your arms;
And no cost for your care..

My God you are always with us;
A real friend of our own;
Don't know why people say;
I m all alone..

You are in height;
and we are so small;
to become your favorite;
Thought is so Delight..

Oh father, promise your PREET,
that daily come to my dream;
and hide all our fears;
give smile and shed all fears..
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thinkhattk
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«Reply #1 on: January 30, 2010, 05:09:02 PM »
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very nice preety ji. icon_thumleft

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lovely_nancy
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«Reply #2 on: January 30, 2010, 05:36:41 PM »
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very nyc
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Preety kathuria
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«Reply #3 on: January 30, 2010, 07:35:26 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause awesome poem Preety ji
Applause Applause Applause awesome poem Preety ji
At midnight., a thought came to mind;
to write something which is inside me;
Lets recall our creator,
and leave everything behind..

Oh Lord! I know its empty;
The smile that we wear;
Real is in your arms;
And no cost for your care..

My God you are always with us;
A real friend of our own;
Don't know why people say;
I m all alone..

You are in height;
and we are so small;
to become your favorite;
Thought is so Delight..

Oh father, promise your PREET,
that daily come to my dream;
and hide all our fears;
give smile and shed all fears..
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #4 on: January 31, 2010, 10:38:11 AM »
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Too good Preet ji,great creation.excellent.God bless you. Hats off to you! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley icon_thumleft
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malli
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«Reply #5 on: January 31, 2010, 10:40:20 AM »
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Very good work Preety ji
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Rishi Agarwal
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«Reply #6 on: February 01, 2010, 07:59:23 PM »
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Excellent creation Preety Ji
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S.hashmi
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«Reply #7 on: February 02, 2010, 03:30:38 PM »
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very beautiful creation

God is omnipresent n along with us every time
May God bless all of us........ Ameen
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Preety kathuria
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«Reply #8 on: February 08, 2010, 03:20:50 PM »
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Thankss to my creative frndss
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