वाह–वाह देखनी है................saru................

by SURESH SANGWAN on December 11, 2013, 04:02:57 AM
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ए ज़िंदगी मुझको  तेरी रस्म- ओ- राह देखनी  है
उठाए दिल में क़सक जब  उठे वो निगाह देखनी है

वक़्त जहाँ जा के ठहरता है मुझे वो शै दिखा  दो
तैयार हूँ  तस्वीर  सफ़ेद -ओ- सियाह  देखनी है

समंदर  के  तूफ़ानों  से घबरा के दौड़कर  आती
लहरों  की  ख़ातिर वो साहिल की पनाह देखनी है

सुकूने दिल लूटकर किसी का वो दर्द-ए-जिगर जहाँ
चैन    से   सोता  है  वो  आराम - गाह  देखनी  है

इंसान  की  इंसानियत  पर  जां-निसारी  देखकर
खुदा  झुकता  हो  जहाँ  वो इबादत-गाह देखनी है

वार  ख़ाली  नहीं  जाता  कभी सच्ची मोहब्बत का
दिल  की  गहराई तक पुर-असर वो आह देखनी है

खुद  अपने ही ज़ख़्मों पर ग़ज़ल लिखनेवालों की 'सरु'
कैसे   होती   है  महफ़िल  में  वाह – वाह  देखनी  है




E  zindagi  mujhko teri  rasm- o- raah  dekhni  hai
Uthaye dil mein kasak jab uthe vo nigah dekhni hai

Waqt jahan ja ke thaharta hai mujhe vo shai dikha do
Taiyaar  hoon  tasveer  safeid- o - siyaah  dekhni hai

samander ke  toofanon se Ghabra  ke  daudkar aati
Lehron ki khatir vi saahil ki panaah dekhni hai

Sukoone dil lootkar kisi ka vo dard-e-jigar jahan
Chein se sota hai vi aaraam-gaah dekhni hai

Insaan ki insaaniyat par jaan nisaari dekhkar
Khuda jhukta ho jahan vo ibaadat-gaah dekhni hai

Vaar khali nahin jaata kabhi sachhi mohabbat ka
Dil ki gehraai tak pur-asar vo aah dekhni hai

Khud apne hi jakhmon par ghazal likhnewalon ki’saru’
Kaise  hoti  hai  mehfil mein  wah waah dekhni hai



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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2013, 04:36:46 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 11, 2013, 04:43:39 AM »
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aapki hausla afzahi yahan tak le aai hai.
verna hum kahan iss qaabil the
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boss!!!!!!!!!!!!!! RAU due hua.

ek baat bataao itnee bhetreen ghazal kaise likhne lage aap really amezing


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«Reply #3 on: December 11, 2013, 05:14:34 AM »
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वार  ख़ाली  नहीं  जाता  कभी सच्ची मोहब्बत का
दिल  की  गहराई तक पुर-असर वो आह देखनी है

खुद  अपने ही ज़ख़्मों पर ग़ज़ल लिखनेवालों की 'सरु'
कैसे   होती   है  महफ़िल  में  वाह – वाह  देखनी  है

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«Reply #4 on: December 11, 2013, 05:16:57 AM »
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Wahhhhhh!!!!!!!! wahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!! wahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!

Kya baat hai...
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«Reply #5 on: December 11, 2013, 07:01:32 AM »
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wha wha bhut khub
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«Reply #6 on: December 11, 2013, 07:32:41 AM »
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ए ज़िंदगी मुझको  तेरी रस्म- ओ- राह देखनी  है
उठाए दिल में क़सक जब  उठे वो निगाह देखनी है

वक़्त जहाँ जा के ठहरता है मुझे वो शै दिखा  दो
तैयार हूँ  तस्वीर  सफ़ेद -ओ- सियाह  देखनी है

समंदर  के  तूफ़ानों  से घबरा के दौड़कर  आती
लहरों  की  ख़ातिर वो साहिल की पनाह देखनी है

सुकूने दिल लूटकर किसी का वो दर्द-ए-जिगर जहाँ
चैन    से   सोता  है  वो  आराम - गाह  देखनी  है

इंसान  की  इंसानियत  पर  जां-निसारी  देखकर
खुदा  झुकता  हो  जहाँ  वो इबादत-गाह देखनी है

वार  ख़ाली  नहीं  जाता  कभी सच्ची मोहब्बत का
दिल  की  गहराई तक पुर-असर वो आह देखनी है

खुद  अपने ही ज़ख़्मों पर ग़ज़ल लिखनेवालों की 'सरु'
कैसे   होती   है  महफ़िल  में  वाह – वाह  देखनी  है




E  zindagi  mujhko teri  rasm- o- raah  dekhni  hai
Uthaye dil mein kasak jab uthe vo nigah dekhni hai
wah wah wah icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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Taiyaar  hoon  tasveer  safeid- o - siyaah  dekhni hai
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samander ke  toofanon se Ghabra  ke  daudkar aati
Lehron ki khatir vi saahil ki panaah dekhni hai
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Sukoone dil lootkar kisi ka vo dard-e-jigar jahan
Chein se sota hai vi aaraam-gaah dekhni hai
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Insaan ki insaaniyat par jaan nisaari dekhkar
Khuda jhukta ho jahan vo ibaadat-gaah dekhni hai
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Vaar khali nahin jaata kabhi sachhi mohabbat ka
Dil ki gehraai tak pur-asar vo aah dekhni hai
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Khud apne hi jakhmon par ghazal likhnewalon ki’saru’
Kaise  hoti  hai  mehfil mein  wah waah dekhni hai
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«Reply #7 on: December 11, 2013, 08:07:51 AM »
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ji bilkul waah waah hogi aisi khoobsurat jazbaat se bhari ghazal par ... dheron daad saru ji !!
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«Reply #8 on: December 11, 2013, 10:15:04 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Saru jee, behad khoob, umda ghazal, gehre jazbaat aur khayaalaat. Ye ashaar behad pasand aaye:

ए ज़िंदगी मुझको  तेरी रस्म- ओ- राह देखनी  है
उठाए दिल में क़सक जब  उठे वो निगाह देखनी है

सुकूने दिल लूटकर किसी का वो दर्द-ए-जिगर जहाँ
चैन    से   सोता  है  वो  आराम - गाह  देखनी  है

खुद  अपने ही ज़ख़्मों पर ग़ज़ल लिखनेवालों की 'सरु'
कैसे   होती   है  महफ़िल  में  वाह – वाह  देखनी  है
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«Reply #9 on: December 11, 2013, 02:26:18 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: December 11, 2013, 04:33:16 PM »
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SS ji ek bat mai bhi puchna chah rha tha Jo ki Qalb sabab ne puch lia hai..
aap wakai me behreen ghazal likhne lage hain aajkal magr Kaise?

pehle ki poetry ar aaj ki me itna diff.
Saahab awsm ghazal
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«Reply #11 on: December 11, 2013, 05:40:58 PM »
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waah....bahut hi umda ghazal...dheron daad aur

सुकूने दिल लूटकर किसी का वो दर्द-ए-जिगर जहाँ
चैन    से   सोता  है  वो  आराम - गाह  देखनी  है

इंसान  की  इंसानियत  पर  जां-निसारी  देखकर
खुदा  झुकता  हो  जहाँ  वो इबादत-गाह देखनी है

inke liye dili mubarkbaad....
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«Reply #12 on: December 11, 2013, 06:00:00 PM »
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E  zindagi  mujhko teri  rasm- o- raah  dekhni  hai
Uthaye dil mein kasak jab uthe vo nigah dekhni hai

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Waqt jahan ja ke thaharta hai mujhe vo shai dikha do
Taiyaar  hoon  tasveer  safeid- o - siyaah  dekhni hai

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samander ke  toofanon se Ghabra  ke  daudkar aati
Lehron ki khatir vi saahil ki panaah dekhni hai

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Sukoone dil lootkar kisi ka vo dard-e-jigar jahan
Chein se sota hai vi aaraam-gaah dekhni hai

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Insaan ki insaaniyat par jaan nisaari dekhkar
Khuda jhukta ho jahan vo ibaadat-gaah dekhni hai

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Vaar khali nahin jaata kabhi sachhi mohabbat ka
Dil ki gehraai tak pur-asar vo aah dekhni hai

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Khud apne hi jakhmon par ghazal likhnewalon ki’saru’
Kaise  hoti  hai  mehfil mein  wah waah dekhni hai

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«Reply #13 on: December 11, 2013, 06:09:52 PM »
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ए ज़िंदगी मुझको  तेरी रस्म- ओ- राह देखनी  है
उठाए दिल में क़सक जब  उठे वो निगाह देखनी है

वक़्त जहाँ जा के ठहरता है मुझे वो शै दिखा  दो
तैयार हूँ  तस्वीर  सफ़ेद -ओ- सियाह  देखनी है

समंदर  के  तूफ़ानों  से घबरा के दौड़कर  आती
लहरों  की  ख़ातिर वो साहिल की पनाह देखनी है

सुकूने दिल लूटकर किसी का वो दर्द-ए-जिगर जहाँ
चैन    से   सोता  है  वो  आराम - गाह  देखनी  है

इंसान  की  इंसानियत  पर  जां-निसारी  देखकर
खुदा  झुकता  हो  जहाँ  वो इबादत-गाह देखनी है

वार  ख़ाली  नहीं  जाता  कभी सच्ची मोहब्बत का
दिल  की  गहराई तक पुर-असर वो आह देखनी है

खुद  अपने ही ज़ख़्मों पर ग़ज़ल लिखनेवालों की 'सरु'
कैसे   होती   है  महफ़िल  में  वाह – वाह  देखनी  है

laajawaab ek rau ke saath daad
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«Reply #14 on: December 11, 2013, 06:59:10 PM »
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