26/11 phir na ho koi yakin karaaye mujhe... ! NARESH MEHRA

by Anshumali on August 10, 2010, 12:18:40 PM
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Koi shehar aisa nazar aaye mujhe
Jo jurm ka chehra dikhaaye mujhe...

Woh dost hai toh bolta kyon nahi
Gar adaawat hai bataaye mujhe...

Akela khanzar liye dhund raha hu
Maut ka saudagar takraaye mujhe...

Dehshadgard sare aam ghum rahe hai
Siyasatdaan chup hai koi samjhaaye mujhe...

Halaat badlenge yeh shubha zehn mai hai
26/11 phir na ho koi yakin karaaye mujhe...

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«Reply #1 on: August 10, 2010, 12:30:06 PM »
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Wah wah Mehra ji badi khoobsurat takhleeq hai aapko. Halaat-e-hazra par likhi is poem ko padhkar koi bhi sochne par majboor ho jayega. Ek fikrangez takhleeq ke liye daad hazir hai.
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«Reply #2 on: August 10, 2010, 01:20:20 PM »
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minblowing creation naresh ji....
aese hi likhterahiyega...icon_thumleft

 Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  Applause
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«Reply #3 on: August 10, 2010, 01:50:21 PM »
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Ess daur ka chitran karti joshilee rachna hai aapki....daad kabul farmaaiye.... Applause Applause Applause

Wo garib qurbaan hone kyu aate hain
Unki kya mazburi koi samjhaye mujhe

Kyu behkaate hain ulma naujawano ko
Kyu bali wo chadhate hai insaano ko


Koi shehar aisa nazar aaye mujhe
Jo jurm ka chehra dikhaaye mujhe...

Woh dost hai toh bolta kyon nahi
Gar adaawat hai bataaye mujhe...

Akela khanzar liye dhund raha hu
Maut ka saudagar takraaye mujhe...

Dehshadgard sare aam ghum rahe hai
Siyasatdaan chup hai koi samjhaaye mujhe...

Halaat badlenge yeh shubha zehn mai hai
26/11 phir na ho koi yakin karaaye mujhe...


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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2010, 06:19:46 AM »
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bht hi dil ko chhuti peshkash naresh ji...aaj k haalaton ko kya khubi se utara hai shabdon me.... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2010, 08:23:35 AM »
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ha mere dost yeh baat to sach hai par ham sab aise halat ko sudhar ne ke badale ho hota hai isse apana naseeb man ke asie halat se samjhota kar ke apani apani zindagi jeene me masgul ho jate hai... thode din sab desh wasiyo mil ke aise halat pe ladate hai aur aisa fir se na hone dene ki kasam khate hai... par fir se ham sab apni apani zindagi itane masgul ho jate hai ki fir kuchh sochte nahi hai... ham sab desh wasi aisa na hone dene ki kasam kha lete hai man hi man me par ham sab ki zindagi hi itani ulaji huyi hoti hai ki hame apana ghar ya parivar chalane se hi kuchh soch ne ki fursad hi nahi milati hai...

kash ham sab aise mahol se ladane ki himmat rakhate aur ham sab aisa na hone dene ki apane apane dilko yeh samjhaye...

halaki yeh baat umskil jarur hai par na mumkin nahi hai...

Hamara Bharat Desh aaj kitana aage nikal chuka hai duniya ki iss tarkki ki race me par ham sab desh washiyon ki zindagi bahot pichhe chhut gayi hai...

kash ham sab isse sudhar paate aur desh ko aur aage le jaate...


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«Reply #6 on: August 13, 2010, 07:19:51 PM »
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Wah wah Mehra ji badi khoobsurat takhleeq hai aapko. Halaat-e-hazra par likhi is poem ko padhkar koi bhi sochne par majboor ho jayega. Ek fikrangez takhleeq ke liye daad hazir hai.
Riyaz Sahab ........aapka purkhuloos isteqbaal ka bahut bahut shukriya .....khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #7 on: August 16, 2010, 08:16:25 PM »
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Naresh Jee Bahut khoob aur sahiN kaha hai aapne...... Waqt guzar gaya per dil per asar aaj bhi hai........ aur aankhoN meiN woh manzar jab bhi ubharta hai sihran si daud jati hai pure jism meiN.....

Aur aisa na ho bus yehi dua karte hai ......
Kabhi aisi khaufnak raat aur manzar naa aaye..... sad5
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«Reply #8 on: August 18, 2010, 01:38:06 AM »
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minblowing creation naresh ji....
aese hi likhterahiyega...icon_thumleft

 Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  Applause


Bahut bahut shukriya...... aapki daad ka !
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«Reply #9 on: August 18, 2010, 01:08:38 PM »
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Ess daur ka chitran karti joshilee rachna hai aapki....daad kabul farmaaiye.... Applause Applause Applause

Wo garib qurbaan hone kyu aate hain
Unki kya mazburi koi samjhaye mujhe

Kyu behkaate hain ulma naujawano ko
Kyu bali wo chadhate hai insaano ko



Bahut bahut shukriya.... Koyal Ji ! aapki daad aur khayal pesh karne ka !
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