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aaj tujh ko jo falak par hain bithaane waale (zarraa)

by zarraa on September 08, 2012, 08:53:55 AM

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«Reply #15 on: September 09, 2012, 03:33:25 PM »

saini sahab ....waqt dene ka aur sarahne ka shukriya. apki baath ekdum sahi hai. waqai ghazal lambi ho gayi hai. agar chhote behr ki ghazal ho to zyada sher ek baar parhe bhi ja sakte hain, lekin agar medium ya long behr bhi ho to waqai padhne mein bahaut heavy ho jaatee hai. apka mashwara bahaut acchaa hai. is par zaroor gaur karoonga. shukriya.

Quote from: sksaini4 on September 08, 2012, 12:29:36 PM

Zarraa bhai logon ne doghazlaa bhee kahaa hai meree ek ghazal men ek baar 42 sher ho gaye tab maine use 7 alag alag ghazlon me todaa agar aap is khoobssorat ghazal ko do ghazlon men alag alag post karte mazaa dobala ho jataa khair meree dheron da qubool karen


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Re: aaj tujh ko jo falak par hain bithaane waale (zarraa)

«Reply #16 on: September 09, 2012, 03:37:02 PM »

aadaab hassan sahab .... waqt dene ka aur daad dene ka shukriya. jaisa ki maine saini sahab ke reply mein kaha, ye mashwara bilkul sahi laga mujhe. bas, ab 1 naya matla aur 1 naya makta soch raha hoon Usual Smile

Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 08, 2012, 01:22:29 PM

zarra saheb . bahut achhi ghazal hai . lekin main bhi
aapko yahi salaah dena chahunga ki itni lambi ghazal
ki jagah aap 2 ya 3 ghazlon mein break kar ke pesh
karein to itne khubsurat ashaar zyada tawajjo aur
dilchaspi se parhe jaayeinge.


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Re: aaj tujh ko jo falak par hain bithaane waale (zarraa)

«Reply #17 on: September 09, 2012, 03:38:09 PM »

shukriya nandbahu ji

Quote from: nandbahu on September 08, 2012, 01:38:47 PM

Bahut khoob, dhero dad


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Re: aaj tujh ko jo falak par hain bithaane waale (zarraa)

«Reply #18 on: September 09, 2012, 03:39:24 PM »

shukriya anmol ji

Quote from: anmolarora on September 08, 2012, 03:17:43 PM


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Re: aaj tujh ko jo falak par hain bithaane waale (zarraa)

«Reply #19 on: September 09, 2012, 03:40:00 PM »

inayat azeem ji

Quote from: Azeem on September 08, 2012, 05:59:00 PM

Bohat Achcha Kalaam Hai, Yunhi Likhte Rahe,.


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Re: aaj tujh ko jo falak par hain bithaane waale (zarraa)

«Reply #20 on: September 09, 2012, 03:40:51 PM »

thank you suman ji

Quote from: suman59 on September 09, 2012, 12:01:18 AM

very nice


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