aaraam karna hai......

by SURESH SANGWAN on August 06, 2010, 04:40:13 PM
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Musafir ki taqdeer mein kahan aaram karna hai.
Chalte chalte zindzgi ki sham karna hai.
Jo sabak zindagi deti jaaye leta ja.
Safar mein har ek tarha ka kaam karna hai.

Khoob milenge rahon mein pathar, gir bhi jayega.
Thokaron se mil jate hain jo jakhm sikha dete hain.
Dard sehna ,dawa karna,sisakna aahen bharna.
Isliye unn patharon se pyar karna hai.

Jo dard zindagi deti jaye sehta chal.
Safar mein har dard ka ilaaz karna hai.
Chalte chalte zindagi ki sham karna hai,

Muskaraate phool ko dekh muskaraana aa jayega,
kisi koyal ko geet gata dekh gungunana aa jayega.

Seekh lena sabak billi se peid pe chadhne ka.
Har waqt ,har pal sheron se kyun darna hai.

Jo saaz zindagi deti jaye gaata ja.
Na jaane kitna gham aur khushi geet sunanaa hai.
Chalte chalte zindagi ki sham karna hai,


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«Reply #1 on: August 06, 2010, 05:01:26 PM »
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Musafir ki taqdeer mein kahan aaram karna hai.
Chalte chalte zindzgi ki sham karna hai.
Jo sabak zindagi deti jaaye leta ja.
Safar mein har ek tarha ka kaam karna hai.

Khoob milenge rahon mein pathar, gir bhi jayega.
Thokaron se mil jate hain jo jakhm sikha dete hain.
Dard sehna ,dawa karna,sisakna aahen bharna.
Isliye unn patharon se pyar karna hai.

Jo dard zindagi deti jaye sehta chal.
Safar mein har dard ka ilaaz karna hai.
Chalte chalte zindagi ki sham karna hai,

Muskaraate phool ko dekh muskaraana aa jayega,
kisi koyal ko geet gata dekh gungunana aa jayega.

Seekh lena sabak billi se peid pe chadhne ka.
Har waqt ,har pal sheron se kyun darna hai.

Jo saaz zindagi deti jaye gaata ja.
Na jaane kitna gham aur khushi geet sunanaa hai.
Chalte chalte zindagi ki sham karna hai,




Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sureshji...

bahut Hi inspiring Aur Gehrai Se Bhari Yeh Kavita Mann Ko Bhaa Gayi..

bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: August 06, 2010, 05:04:30 PM »
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Bahot achhi nazm likhi hai Suresh ji. Zindagi ka ek falsafa aapne bayaan kiya. Khoobsurat creation.
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«Reply #3 on: August 06, 2010, 05:13:59 PM »
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Musafir ki taqdeer mein kahan aaram karna hai.
Chalte chalte zindzgi ki sham karna hai.
Jo sabak zindagi deti jaaye leta ja.
Safar mein har ek tarha ka kaam karna hai.

Khoob milenge rahon mein pathar, gir bhi jayega.
Thokaron se mil jate hain jo jakhm sikha dete hain.
Dard sehna ,dawa karna,sisakna aahen bharna.
Isliye unn patharon se pyar karna hai.

Jo dard zindagi deti jaye sehta chal.
Safar mein har dard ka ilaaz karna hai.
Chalte chalte zindagi ki sham karna hai,

Muskaraate phool ko dekh muskaraana aa jayega,
kisi koyal ko geet gata dekh gungunana aa jayega.

Seekh lena sabak billi se peid pe chadhne ka.
Har waqt ,har pal sheron se kyun darna hai.

Jo saaz zindagi deti jaye gaata ja.
Na jaane kitna gham aur khushi geet sunanaa hai.
Chalte chalte zindagi ki sham karna hai,




kuch sikhati hui kuch samjhati hui kavita hai ye suresh ji....zindagi ka ek aur rang saamne aagaya
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«Reply #4 on: August 06, 2010, 06:28:01 PM »
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tons of shukriya khwaishji. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Waah Waah Waah!!!!!

Bahut Bahut Khoob Sureshji...

bahut Hi inspiring Aur Gehrai Se Bhari Yeh Kavita Mann Ko Bhaa Gayi..

bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #5 on: August 06, 2010, 06:29:46 PM »
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riyaz ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka apna qeemati waqt dene aur daad ke liye. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Bahot achhi nazm likhi hai Suresh ji. Zindagi ka ek falsafa aapne bayaan kiya. Khoobsurat creation.
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«Reply #6 on: August 06, 2010, 06:33:01 PM »
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kasak ji bahut sara shukriya aapka meri kavita ko waqt dene ke liye hausla afzahi karte rahen.  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
kuch sikhati hui kuch samjhati hui kavita hai ye suresh ji....zindagi ka ek aur rang saamne aagaya
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2010, 06:42:55 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bhaut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suresh ji...!!!
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tahee dil se shukriya ki aapne iss kavita padha aur apna waqt diya. icon_flower icon_flower : :icon_flower:kapil ji.
Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bhaut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suresh ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2010, 11:02:55 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI     SURESH SANGWANJI.....

JAB TAK HAI ZINDAGI TAB TAK KAAM KARNA HAI
MANZIL KO PAANE KE LIYE CHALTE RAHENA HAI
KABHI GIRNA HAI KABHI SAMBHALNA HAI
KABHI KUCH KHONA HAI KABHI KUCH PAANA HAI
SHAYAD MAUT KE BAAD HI KUCH "AARAM KARNA HAI".
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2010, 11:42:13 AM »
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bahot hi khoobsurati se zindagi ke safar ko aapne bayan kiya hai Suresh ji... Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2010, 01:31:19 PM »
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wah wah caraji.bahut theek farmaya aapne.
kal hi aapko bahut yaad kiya bade dil se aur dekho na aaj aapka khat mil hi gaya. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
aur bahut bahut shukriya aapka apna qeemati waqt dene ke liye.

WAH KYA BAAT HAI     SURESH SANGWANJI.....

JAB TAK HAI ZINDAGI TAB TAK KAAM KARNA HAI
MANZIL KO PAANE KE LIYE CHALTE RAHENA HAI
KABHI GIRNA HAI KABHI SAMBHALNA HAI
KABHI KUCH KHONA HAI KABHI KUCH PAANA HAI
SHAYAD MAUT KE BAAD HI KUCH "AARAM KARNA HAI".
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2010, 01:32:46 PM »
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Rancho ji aapka bahut sara shukriya . icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
bahot hi khoobsurati se zindagi ke safar ko aapne bayan kiya hai Suresh ji... Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2010, 04:20:26 PM »
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Dear Suresh Sangwan Saheb! Adab! Aik fikr se labrez tehreer jise paRhkar fikr meiN doob gaya. Is hassaas tehreer ke liye daad qubul kijiye.

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Musafir ki taqdeer mein kahan aaram karna hai.
Chalte chalte zindzgi ki sham karna hai.
Jo sabak zindagi deti jaaye leta ja.
Safar mein har ek tarha ka kaam karna hai.

Khoob milenge rahon mein pathar, gir bhi jayega.
Thokaron se mil jate hain jo jakhm sikha dete hain.
Dard sehna ,dawa karna,sisakna aahen bharna.
Isliye unn patharon se pyar karna hai.

Jo dard zindagi deti jaye sehta chal.
Safar mein har dard ka ilaaz karna hai.
Chalte chalte zindagi ki sham karna hai,

Muskaraate phool ko dekh muskaraana aa jayega,
kisi koyal ko geet gata dekh gungunana aa jayega.

Seekh lena sabak billi se peid pe chadhne ka.
Har waqt ,har pal sheron se kyun darna hai.

Jo saaz zindagi deti jaye gaata ja.
Na jaane kitna gham aur khushi geet sunanaa hai.
Chalte chalte zindagi ki sham karna hai,



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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2010, 04:30:03 PM »
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TAHE DIL SE SHUKRIYA WAQIF ANSAARI JI. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
lekin aap fikr mein kyun doob gaye ?
Dear Suresh Sangwan Saheb! Adab! Aik fikr se labrez tehreer jise paRhkar fikr meiN doob gaya. Is hassaas tehreer ke liye daad qubul kijiye.

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