Adhura kalaam...Geet...

by brokenbyluv on February 11, 2011, 06:18:22 PM
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Main kya hu siwae ek naam k,
khali si botal hu bagair kisi jaam k,

na koi rang hai merra na koi roshni hai merri,
kuch bhi nhi main siwa suni si shaam k,

kisi k layak nhi hai merra wajud,
merri hasti bhi nakara hai bina kisi kaam k,

kuch nhi de saki hu aaj tak main apno ko,
bus khaya piya aur kuch nhi kiya siwa aram k,

aksar galat raaho ko hi chuna hai maine,
thami nhi bus chalti rahi bina kisi anjam k,

main kis haq se uska hath apne khuda se mangu,
jab ki adhuri rahi hai merri zindgi..
aur main kuch bhi nhi siwa ek adhure kalaam k.........
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«Reply #1 on: February 11, 2011, 06:29:31 PM »
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Shurkiya shihab ji..
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2011, 12:42:35 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 11, 2011, 06:18:22 PM

Main kya hu siwae ek naam k,
khali si botal hu bagair kisi jaam k,

na koi rang hai merra na koi roshni hai merri,
kuch bhi nhi main siwa suni si shaam k,

kisi k layak nhi hai merra wajud,
merri hasti bhi nakara hai bina kisi kaam k,

kuch nhi de saki hu aaj tak main apno ko,
bus khaya piya aur kuch nhi kiya siwa aram k,

aksar galat raaho ko hi chuna hai maine,
thami nhi bus chalti rahi bina kisi anjam k,

main kis haq se uska hath apne khuda se mangu,
jab ki adhuri rahi hai merri zindgi..
aur main kuch bhi nhi siwa ek adhure kalaam k.........

Good One ...... broken Ji !
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2011, 07:53:24 AM »
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bht khoob geet ji.....
hats off to u for dis wonderful creation....
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2011, 08:02:24 AM »
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Very Nice...
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2011, 09:07:15 AM »
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ehsaas achhe hai--
BBL ji--ek baat kahunga uske liye sorry pahle se.
aapke shabdo me jo wajan aksar hota hai jo feel mai mehsoos karta hun hamesha.
iss kalaam ke kuch shabd wese nahi hain--
jaise wo line--khali botal wala,
nakara kaam wala, khaya piya aaram wala--
inn lines ka feel to hua aur aapke kahne ka matlab bhi samjha par alfazon ka wajan kam laga.
ye mat samjhiyega mene burai ki hai--plzz
aur kalaam ke madhaym se aapke dil ki baat bakhoobi feel karata hai aapka peshkash.
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sory kuch galt kaha to
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2011, 09:35:39 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on February 11, 2011, 06:18:22 PM



Main kya hu siwae ek naam k,
khali si botal hu bagair kisi jaam k,

na koi rang hai merra na koi roshni hai merri,
kuch bhi nhi main siwa suni si shaam k,

kisi k layak nhi hai merra wajud,
merri hasti bhi nakara hai bina kisi kaam k,

kuch nhi de saki hu aaj tak main apno ko,
bus khaya piya aur kuch nhi kiya siwa aram k,

aksar galat raaho ko hi chuna hai maine,
thami nhi bus chalti rahi bina kisi anjam k,

main kis haq se uska hath apne khuda se mangu,
jab ki adhuri rahi hai merri zindgi..
aur main kuch bhi nhi siwa ek adhure kalaam k.........







good confession broken ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2011, 11:37:20 AM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya naresh ji,priya ji,kamlesh ji,nirala ji n sheba ji...
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«Reply #8 on: February 12, 2011, 11:47:06 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #9 on: February 12, 2011, 12:32:27 PM »
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Shukriya ..
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«Reply #10 on: February 12, 2011, 02:55:16 PM »
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hmmm.....nice one Clapping Smiley but ye baat yaad rakh k mehnat bhi kiya karo icon_thumright
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«Reply #11 on: February 12, 2011, 03:04:44 PM »
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Quote from: ruku on February 12, 2011, 02:55:16 PM
hmmm.....nice one Clapping Smiley but ye baat yaad rakh k mehnat bhi kiya karo icon_thumright

I knw thnx dear...
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«Reply #12 on: February 13, 2011, 06:15:36 PM »
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Bahut Khub Geet JI
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«Reply #13 on: February 13, 2011, 06:22:59 PM »
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Shukriya rishi ji..
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Ki Kavan!!!! Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!!
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