Ajeeb Haal .....................................................Quateel

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Ajeeb haal hai is mehfil ka
musalsal kahe koi
musalsal daad day koi
Ya khuda saans to le koi!

Ajeeb baat hai duniya ki
zulm sahe koi
aah bhare koi
is fareb ko bund kare koi!

Ajeeb hai rivayatein gharon ki
hauslaa kare koi
maslaa bane koi
Seedhi baat bhi kare koi!

Ajeeb raste hain ishq ke
ishaare kare koi
Bechaara mare koi
Is dhong ko khatm kare koi!
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«Reply #1 on: May 01, 2012, 08:53:12 PM »
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Es post ki tareef karne ke liye mere paas lafj nahi h.
Hmari ddad kabool  kare..
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Arre ha ak bat to btana hi bhool gaya...
Aapne last Line me Dhong ko Dhongg likh rakha h usme se ak g remve kar le read karne me aasani ho jayegi
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«Reply #2 on: May 01, 2012, 08:59:23 PM »
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Bahot
Es post ki tareef karne ke liye mere paas lafj nahi h.
Hmari ddad kabool  kare..
....
Arre ha ak bat to btana hi bhool gaya...
Aapne last Line me Dhong ko Dhongg likh rakha h usme se ak g remve kar le read karne me aasani ho jayegi

Bahot Shukriya Masoomji! Aur aapka sujhaaya modification bhi kar liya hai!
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«Reply #3 on: May 01, 2012, 09:06:19 PM »
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Bahut bahut bahut hi khoobsurat kalam, bahut hi khoobsurat andaaz-e-bayaa.n Quateel bhai, Bahut Bahut Mubarakbad.
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«Reply #4 on: May 02, 2012, 03:07:12 AM »
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bohut khub janab bohut umda likha hai
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«Reply #5 on: May 02, 2012, 03:43:10 AM »
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bahut achhaa qaateel bhai daad deta hoon
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«Reply #6 on: May 02, 2012, 03:57:00 AM »
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Bahut  khooburat , munfarid  peshkash , Quateel  saheb .
Bahut  mubaakbaad  aur  daad  qubool karein.HASAN
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«Reply #7 on: May 02, 2012, 04:44:40 AM »
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Bahut bahut bahut hi khoobsurat kalam, bahut hi khoobsurat andaaz-e-bayaa.n Quateel bhai, Bahut Bahut Mubarakbad.

Bahot Shukriya Iftekhar Bhai!
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«Reply #8 on: May 02, 2012, 04:47:43 AM »
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bohut khub janab bohut umda likha hai

Sahill Sahab, Bahot Shukriya!!
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«Reply #9 on: May 02, 2012, 04:51:34 AM »
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bahut achhaa qaateel bhai daad deta hoon

Hausala afzayee ka bahot shukriya Saini Bhai!
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«Reply #10 on: May 02, 2012, 04:54:02 AM »
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Bahut  khooburat , munfarid  peshkash , Quateel  saheb .
Bahut  mubaakbaad  aur  daad  qubool karein.HASAN

Hasan Sahab, Bahot Shukriya hausala afzayee ka!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 02, 2012, 05:19:55 AM »
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Ajeeb haal hai is mehfil ka
musalsal kahe koi
musalsal daad day koi
Ya khuda saans to le koi!

Ajeeb baat hai duniya ki
zulm sahe koi
aah bhare koi
is fareb ko bund kare koi!

Ajeeb hai rivayatein gharon ki
hauslaa kare koi
maslaa bane koi
Seedhi baat bhi kare koi!

Ajeeb raste hain ishq ke
ishaare kare koi
Bechaara mare koi
Is dhong ko khatm kare koi!

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«Reply #12 on: May 02, 2012, 05:35:52 AM »
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«Reply #13 on: May 02, 2012, 07:51:10 AM »
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«Reply #14 on: May 02, 2012, 01:34:43 PM »
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