Akhir kyun...

by brokenbyluv on March 05, 2010, 06:22:34 PM
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Maine aaj tak kisi ka dil nhi toda,
phir kyun merre dil se khelte hai log,

maine kabhi kisi ko tanha nhi chhoda,
phir kyun merra har sapna todte hai log,

maine kabhi kisi ko beizzat nhi kiya,
phir kyun merri shakhsiyat pe ungliya uthahte hai log,

maine kabhi kisi ki zindgi mein dakhal nhi diya,
phir kyun merri zindgi ka mazak banate hai log,

maine tou bus khushiya dena sikha hai..
phir kyun merri muskan ko nazar lagate hai log.......
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2010, 07:03:38 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI     BROKENBYLUV JI.....


AKHIR KYUN LOGON KO TAKLEEF HOTI HAI MERE JEENE MEIN
AKHIR KYUN DHAKAL DETE HAI LOG MERE ZINDAGI MEIN....
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«Reply #2 on: March 05, 2010, 08:31:54 PM »
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thnx alot cara ji..
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«Reply #3 on: March 05, 2010, 11:12:04 PM »
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Nice creation BBL ji. Achha likha hai. Do sher yaad aa raha hai:

Log har mod pe ruk ruk ke sambhalte kyon hain
Itna darte hain to ghar se nikalte kyon hain
Main na jugnu hun, diya hun, na koi tara hun
Roshni wale mere naam se jalte kyon hain
(N.M.)
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«Reply #4 on: March 05, 2010, 11:14:07 PM »
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thnx alot riyaz ji aur waah bahut khoob likha hai apne...
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2010, 12:19:29 AM »
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2010, 12:26:04 AM »
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2010, 12:42:31 AM »
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Bahut khoob Geet Ji

Nasamajh hai aap ko sataane wale
Jalte hain ye nazar lagane wale
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2010, 12:43:21 AM »
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Nice creation BBL ji. Achha likha hai. Do sher yaad aa raha hai:

Log har mod pe ruk ruk ke sambhalte kyon hain
Itna darte hain to ghar se nikalte kyon hain
Main na jugnu hun, diya hun, na koi tara hun
Roshni wale mere naam se jalte kyon hain
(N.M.)


Wonderful sharing Riyaz Ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 06, 2010, 01:00:01 AM »
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Bahut khoob Geet Ji

Nasamajh hai aap ko sataane wale
Jalte hain ye nazar lagane wale

bahut bahut shukriya apke comment aur apki lines k liye rajesh ji...
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«Reply #10 on: March 11, 2010, 11:32:18 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: March 12, 2010, 02:46:03 PM »
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thnx alot padma ji...
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«Reply #12 on: March 12, 2010, 03:20:12 PM »
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Wah wah Geet ji,excellent creation.bahut hi khoob.really touched.beautiful lines by Cara ji,Riyaz bhai,Rajesh ji. :hatsoff Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 12, 2010, 04:49:27 PM »
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brokenbyluv apke bate sunkar apke upar bhi ek shayari likhne ko jee karra insha allah kal sham tak post kardunga. only for you
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«Reply #14 on: March 12, 2010, 07:17:01 PM »
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waah waah bokenbylove ji.
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