Apna Saaya Bhi Hamesha Apne Saath Nahi Hota....

by khwaish on March 17, 2009, 03:25:47 PM
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Palkon Par Aansuo Ka Manzar Dekhiye,
Inn Raahon Par Do Kadam Hi Sahi Par Chal Kar Dekhiye....

Pehle Dariya Se Guzarna Seekhlo,
Phir Kahin Jaakar Samundar Dekhiye....

Khushnuma Rehna Bahut Acha Hai Lekin,
Paau Failaa kar Kabhi Chaadar Bhi Dekhiye....

Kitne Tammanao Ka Qatl Karta Hai Woh Shaks Roz-Aana!!
Kabhi Kisi Aur Ke Jazbaat Mein Beh Kar To Dekhiye.....

Haste-Haste Ro Dena Asaan Hai Eh Dost!!!
Kabhi Rote Hue Bhi Has Kar Dekhiye....

Uski Baatein Dil Ko Chuu Leti Hai "KHWAISH"
Par kabhi Uske Halaat Se Koi Guzar Kar Dekhiye....

Bebasi Ek Jurm Hai Aur Majboori Ek Sazaa,
Kabhi Inn Baaton Se Bhi Hatkar Dekhiye.....

Aandhiyon Ka Ab Koi Mausam Nahi,
Udd Na Jaaye Sar Se Chaadar Dekhiye....

Sach To Yeh Hai Ke Apna Saaya Bhi Hamesha Apne Saath Nahi Hota,
Kabhi Inn Sachaiyo Se Bhi Ladkar Dekhiye....

Kisi Aur Ke Khaamiyon Par Guftugu Karne Walo,
Kabhi Khud Ko Bhi Aaene Mein Utaarkar Dekhiye.....

Aag Ke Tufaan Mein Qaid Hai Har Shaks Iss Jahan Ka,
Ab Kab Aayega Yahan Par Samundar Dekhiye....

            ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 17, 2009, 03:37:42 PM »
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Wah Wah bahut khoob Khwaish ji  Applause
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«Reply #2 on: March 18, 2009, 07:42:25 AM »
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Wah Wah bahut khoob Khwaish ji  Applause

Thankyou So Much Roja....
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«Reply #3 on: March 18, 2009, 07:54:10 AM »
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Subhan_allah khwaish jitni tareef ki jaye kam hain mere dost wahhhh maza aa gaya.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 18, 2009, 08:11:37 AM »
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mindblowing Khwaish ji.

Meaningful Poetry with supperb lines.......
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«Reply #5 on: March 18, 2009, 08:15:16 AM »
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Bahut Bhadiya Khwaish Ji,

Sorry par kuch likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi ho,

Bahut aasan hai kehna ki mohabbat bhula do,
Kabhi khud apni rooh ko bhula kar to dekhiye.

Lout aayenge ham bhi uss din aapke khawab-gah me,
Kabhi hame ek baar pyaar se awaaj lagakar to dekhiye.

Ta-umar na hogi jaroorat kisi aur aahiyaa.n ki,
Mere dil me ek baar ghar bana ke to dekhiye.

Saari pareshaniya, gamm aur kaam door ho jayenge,
Ek baar mujhe gulaam bana kar to dekhiye...

Shally.
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«Reply #6 on: March 18, 2009, 03:17:56 PM »
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Subhan_allah khwaish jitni tareef ki jaye kam hain mere dost wahhhh maza aa gaya.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Sajid Bhai..
Aapne Itni Tareef ki Ab yakeen Sa Ho Gaya hai Ke Maine Kuch acha Hi likha hoga.. Thumbs UP  Teh dil se shukriya
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«Reply #7 on: March 18, 2009, 04:58:35 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Khwaish ji!!!! bahoot khoob... her ek shabd ek such, her ek line kamaal ki....
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«Reply #8 on: March 18, 2009, 05:22:42 PM »
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WAH WAH KHWAISH, BAHUT KHOOB , WAH



BEECH BHAWAR MEH HUMNEY KHUDD KOH DEKHA HAI
HAR RISHTA YAHA SIRF EK BHARAM AUR DHOKHA HAI
AUROH SEY TOH TAB UMEED LAGAYE HUM JASBIR
APNEY SAYEH KOH BHI BICHADTEY HUMNEY DEKHA HAI




JASBIR SINGH

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«Reply #9 on: March 18, 2009, 06:32:01 PM »
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mindblowing Khwaish ji.

Meaningful Poetry with supperb lines.......


Thankyou so much Sophi..
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«Reply #10 on: March 18, 2009, 06:51:11 PM »
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Really too good Khwaish ji..

nowords to appreciate..

Just AWESOMEEEEE
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«Reply #11 on: March 18, 2009, 07:19:31 PM »
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Bahut Bhadiya Khwaish Ji,

Sorry par kuch likhne ki gustakhi kar rahi ho,

Bahut aasan hai kehna ki mohabbat bhula do,
Kabhi khud apni rooh ko bhula kar to dekhiye.

Lout aayenge ham bhi uss din aapke khawab-gah me,
Kabhi hame ek baar pyaar se awaaj lagakar to dekhiye.

Ta-umar na hogi jaroorat kisi aur aahiyaa.n ki,
Mere dil me ek baar ghar bana ke to dekhiye.

Saari pareshaniya, gamm aur kaam door ho jayenge,
Ek baar mujhe gulaam bana kar to dekhiye...

Shally.

Bahut Bahut shukriya Shally,Par Gustaaki kis baat ki,aapne iss thread ko apni kavita se sajaya hai,yehi meri khus-kismati hai..aur sach mein bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause

Jawaab mein kuch likh raha hoon....

Khud Ko Mita Dena Bahut Asaan hai,
Par Kisi Aur ki Yaadon Ko Dil se Mitaa Kar To Dekhiye...

Asaan Hai Kisi Aur Ko Apni Nazro Se Gira Dena,
Par Kisi Aur Ki Nazro Mein Khud Ko Uthaa Kar To Dekhiye....

Log Kehte Rahenge, Logon Ka Kaam Hai Kehna,
Par Kabhi To Apne Dil Ki Dhadkan Ko Apni Awaaz Bana Kar Dekhiye....

Yahan Har Shaks Ke Chehre Par Naqaab Dikhta Hai,
Ek Sar Ke yahan Sainkdo Sar Dekhiye....

Andhero Mein Rehne Walo Ko Puchna Kabhi Ujaalo Ki Tadap!!!!
Keh Dena Asaan Hai par Kabhi Andhero Se Guzar kar To Dekhiye....

"Shally" Sirf Mohabbat Ko Hi Zindagi Ka Naam Naa Do,
Aur Bahut se Gham hai Zindagi Mein,
Kabhi Inse Bhi Ulaj Kar Dekhiye.....

Tere Dil Mein Ghar Bana Bhi Loon To Kya Haasil,
Kabhi Dard Ka Koi Karidaar Nahi Hota!!!
Kuch Hi Pal Mein Kaise Hote Hai Hum Be-Ghar Dekhiye....

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~
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«Reply #12 on: March 19, 2009, 02:48:46 AM »
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Bahut Bahut shukriya Shally,Par Gustaaki kis baat ki,aapne iss thread ko apni kavita se sajaya hai,yehi meri khus-kismati hai..aur sach mein bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause

Jawaab mein kuch likh raha hoon....

Khud Ko Mita Dena Bahut Asaan hai,
Par Kisi Aur ki Yaadon Ko Dil se Mitaa Kar To Dekhiye...

Asaan Hai Kisi Aur Ko Apni Nazro Se Gira Dena,
Par Kisi Aur Ki Nazro Mein Khud Ko Uthaa Kar To Dekhiye....

Log Kehte Rahenge, Logon Ka Kaam Hai Kehna,
Par Kabhi To Apne Dil Ki Dhadkan Ko Apni Awaaz Bana Kar Dekhiye....

Yahan Har Shaks Ke Chehre Par Naqaab Dikhta Hai,
Ek Sar Ke yahan Sainkdo Sar Dekhiye....

Andhero Mein Rehne Walo Ko Puchna Kabhi Ujaalo Ki Tadap!!!!
Keh Dena Asaan Hai par Kabhi Andhero Se Guzar kar To Dekhiye....

"Shally" Sirf Mohabbat Ko Hi Zindagi Ka Naam Do,
Aur Bahut se Gham hai Zindagi Mein,
Kabhi Inse Bhi Ulaj Kar Dekhiye.....

Tere Dil Mein Ghar Bana Bhi Loon To Kya Haasil,
Kabhi Dard Ka Koi Karidaar Nahi Hota!!!
Kuch Hi Pal Mein Kaise Hote Hai Hum Be-Ghar Dekhiye....

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~


Wah wah Bahut khoob bahut khoob.... Applause Applause
Last three lines...... simply good Khwaish ji... daad kabool kijiyega
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«Reply #13 on: March 19, 2009, 05:12:08 AM »
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Bahut Bahut shukriya Shally,Par Gustaaki kis baat ki,aapne iss thread ko apni kavita se sajaya hai,yehi meri khus-kismati hai..aur sach mein bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. Applause Applause Applause

Jawaab mein kuch likh raha hoon....

Khud Ko Mita Dena Bahut Asaan hai,
Par Kisi Aur ki Yaadon Ko Dil se Mitaa Kar To Dekhiye...

Asaan Hai Kisi Aur Ko Apni Nazro Se Gira Dena,
Par Kisi Aur Ki Nazro Mein Khud Ko Uthaa Kar To Dekhiye....

Log Kehte Rahenge, Logon Ka Kaam Hai Kehna,
Par Kabhi To Apne Dil Ki Dhadkan Ko Apni Awaaz Bana Kar Dekhiye....

Yahan Har Shaks Ke Chehre Par Naqaab Dikhta Hai,
Ek Sar Ke yahan Sainkdo Sar Dekhiye....

Andhero Mein Rehne Walo Ko Puchna Kabhi Ujaalo Ki Tadap!!!!
Keh Dena Asaan Hai par Kabhi Andhero Se Guzar kar To Dekhiye....

"Shally" Sirf Mohabbat Ko Hi Zindagi Ka Naam Do,
Aur Bahut se Gham hai Zindagi Mein,
Kabhi Inse Bhi Ulaj Kar Dekhiye.....

Tere Dil Mein Ghar Bana Bhi Loon To Kya Haasil,
Kabhi Dard Ka Koi Karidaar Nahi Hota!!!
Kuch Hi Pal Mein Kaise Hote Hai Hum Be-Ghar Dekhiye....

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~~


Shukriya Khwaish Ji,

Wah bahut khoob khawish ji,

Saari duniya ke gamm rakhe hai sinne me,
Kabhi hamare aansoo ko pehchaan kar to dekhiye,

Koun kehta hai hamne mohabbat ko hi chaha hai,
Jo jhakam aur sab rishto se mile unse ro-b-ro ho ke dekhiye,

Maana ki ham masroof rehte hai apne me hi,
Ho jayenge aapke bhi kabhi apna kar to dekhiye.


Shally.
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«Reply #14 on: March 20, 2009, 01:01:15 PM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob Khwaish ji!!!! bahoot khoob... her ek shabd ek such, her ek line kamaal ki....

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja..aapne iss poetry ki Gehraai ko samjha..yeh jaankar bahut khushi hui..thankyou icon_salut
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