Apni Hi Kismat Apni Majbooriyon Par Muskuraati Hai "Khwaish"

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Zindagi Kuch Yuh Bhi Humein Nazar Aati hai
Apni Hi Kismat Kabhi Apni Majbooriyon Pa muskurati Hai

Bebas Sa Dil,Bojhal si Nazrein Naa Jaane Kya Talaashti Rahi!!
Yuhi Chalte-Chalte Har Ek Aas Dil Ki Toot Jaati Hai

Kabhi Paakar Tujhko Khona To Kabhi Khokar Tujhko Paa Lena!!!
 Zindagi Har Ek Mod Par Rang Naye Dikhlaati Hai

Ek Dhoondhli Si Tasveer Naa Jaane Mujhse Kya kehti Rahi!!!
Waqt Guzar Jaaye To kya!!! Peeche Yaadein Reh Jaati Hai

Tasalli Itni Hi Bahut Hai Ke Woh Aaj Bhi Aas-Paas hai
 Varna Dooriyan Insaan Ko Yahan Tootkar Sataati Hai

"Khwaish" Gham-e-Ulfat Ke Haathon Kuch Yuh Be-Aasra Hua!!!
Mushkile Bhi Mujhe Ab Dekhkar Ghabraati Hai..

Zindagi Kuch Yuh Bhi Humein Nazar Aati Hai
Apni Hi Kismat Apni Majbooriyon Par Muskuraati Hai

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~
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«Reply #1 on: March 10, 2011, 09:29:17 AM »
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kya baat hai khwishji... kurban is par to... sach main kya kaha hai aapne... bahut gahari baat haiji.... ek dam dil tak......

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«Reply #2 on: March 10, 2011, 09:30:04 AM »
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wonderfull poetry khwaish ji.........

"Apni Hi Kismat Apni Majbooriyon Par Muskuraati Hai"

isi me sabkuch aa gaya..........bahot khoob aur bahot hi behtareen likha he ........sukun mila padkar ........ese hi likhtey rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2011, 10:04:11 AM »
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bht umda khwaish ji....
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2011, 11:02:32 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Wah..!

Bilkul halaat ko bayan karti hui nazm hai yeh..
Mere dil kay behad kareeb rahi..
Saanson ne parra aur dhadkanon ne samjha hai isse..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2011, 03:44:30 PM »
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kya baat hai khwishji... kurban is par to... sach main kya kaha hai aapne... bahut gahari baat haiji.... ek dam dil tak......

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«Reply #6 on: March 10, 2011, 05:12:14 PM »
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Bahut wadiya khwaish ji..
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«Reply #7 on: March 10, 2011, 05:49:51 PM »
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Badiya Peshkash Khwaish Ji
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«Reply #8 on: March 11, 2011, 09:08:55 AM »
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wonderfull poetry khwaish ji.........

"Apni Hi Kismat Apni Majbooriyon Par Muskuraati Hai"

isi me sabkuch aa gaya..........bahot khoob aur bahot hi behtareen likha he ........sukun mila padkar ........ese hi likhtey rahiye

Humesha Ki tarah Aapka Tehhh Dilll Se Shukriya Uthkarshji..

Aapne huemsha Se Mera Huasla Badhaya Hai..Yuhi saath Dete Rahieyga icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: March 11, 2011, 09:18:26 AM »
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bht umda khwaish ji....

Thankyou Soooooooo Much Priyaji..
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«Reply #10 on: March 11, 2011, 09:55:35 AM »
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Wah Wah Wah Wah..!

Bilkul halaat ko bayan karti hui nazm hai yeh..
Mere dil kay behad kareeb rahi..
Saanson ne parra aur dhadkanon ne samjha hai isse..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!

Bhai Rahim!!! Kya kahoon..aapke Comments naa aaye to yakeen maniye darr lag jaata hai, ke sahi to likha naa??

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«Reply #11 on: March 11, 2011, 10:48:00 AM »
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Bahut hi khoob Khwaish ji,dard bhari peshkash,apne ehsaaso ko bahut khoobi se likha.hats off icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: March 11, 2011, 11:58:53 AM »
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Good padhke maja aagaya Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: March 11, 2011, 05:50:34 PM »
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Zindagi Kuch Yuh Bhi Humein Nazar Aati hai
Apni Hi Kismat Kabhi Apni Majbooriyon Pa muskurati Hai

Bebas Sa Dil,Bojhal si Nazrein Naa Jaane Kya Talaashti Rahi!!
Yuhi Chalte-Chalte Har Ek Aas Dil Ki Toot Jaati Hai

Kabhi Paakar Tujhko Khona To Kabhi Khokar Tujhko Paa Lena!!!
 Zindagi Har Ek Mod Par Rang Naye Dikhlaati Hai

Ek Dhoondhli Si Tasveer Naa Jaane Mujhse Kya kehti Rahi!!!
Waqt Guzar Jaaye To kya!!! Peeche Yaadein Reh Jaati Hai

Tasalli Itni Hi Bahut Hai Ke Woh Aaj Bhi Aas-Paas hai
 Varna Dooriyan Insaan Ko Yahan Tootkar Sataati Hai

"Khwaish" Gham-e-Ulfat Ke Haathon Kuch Yuh Be-Aasra Hua!!!
Mushkile Bhi Mujhe Ab Dekhkar Ghabraati Hai..

Zindagi Kuch Yuh Bhi Humein Nazar Aati Hai
Apni Hi Kismat Apni Majbooriyon Par Muskuraati Hai

                   ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Arse baad yha aana hua....uss par inn majburiyon ka kismat mein aana jaana hua........bahut khoob khwaish ji.....suna hai...ghamon ki jab ati ho jaati hai toh dard ka aehsaas hona band ho jaata hai...shayad aisa nahi hai...isliye  2nd last line ko samjhna mushkil ho rha hai.....
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Bahut wadiya khwaish ji..

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