Baandhkar rakh saka hai kaun...

by daljeet_faqeer on February 12, 2010, 05:10:06 PM
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Baandhkar rakh saka hai kaun aawara hawa ke jhokhe ko,
ye woh panchhi hai jo pinjra lekar udd jaata hai.

Saari tamanna sab umeedein jahan aakar khatam hoti hain,
aadmi us aakhri pal mein khuda se judd jaata hai.

Kisi khawab ki tabeer ko haasil karne ke liye,
woh shaks manzil ke kareeb raah se mudd jaata hai.

Bewafai ka sila wafa se sadaa yun hi dete rahenge,
woh insaan nahin jo dariya ke bahav se rudd jaata hai.

                       Daljeet'faqeer'
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2010, 05:29:55 PM »
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Mindblowing creation Daljeet ji,bahut bahut khoob.excellent
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2010, 07:13:01 PM »
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Bahut Khoob!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2010, 07:46:38 PM »
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Daljeet ji aapki ye creation bahut achhi lagi. Nice very nice.
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«Reply #4 on: February 12, 2010, 07:55:36 PM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2010, 11:24:31 PM »
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ary wha ji wah kya baat hai jii.... love4

chak de pady.... love9

keep posting.. Clapping Smiley

i like itt jiii sunny sunny
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«Reply #6 on: February 13, 2010, 12:07:37 PM »
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Bahut Khub Daljeet JI
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