bachpan sy burhaapa(gul)

by gulzargul on July 30, 2008, 04:20:54 PM
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haan mujh ko khilaa do garmi ki raaton main
barf main lgy thandy sy aam

haan mujh ko sulaa do chaarpaai pe baan ki
kachi chaton per paani ka chirkaao
wp matti ki bheeni si khushboo

wo takiya bichona aor phir sona

wp doodh ka dalyaa shouq sy khaana
aik pankhy ke neechy sab ka beth jana
wo ghazlien wo naghmy wo kahaani sunana
wo bhai ka behnon sy her baat pe larna
un hi behnon se phir hans ke baat kerna
 
subhaa ko behna ka paani giraana
herbara ker uthna aor nahaana
ammi ka chooleh pe paraatha pakaana
jaldi jaldi chaay paraadha khaana
basta uthaa ker scool ko jaana

bara yaad aata hy guzra zamaana
bara yaad aata hy bachpan suhaana

wo sardi ki raaten wo moong phali aor chalghozy khaana
baar baar chaay ki piyaali ly aana

wo khirki sy sard hawa ka guzarna
wo rooi ke gaddy razaai main ghusna

wo raatein bhi lambi wo baatein bhi lami

wo ammi abbu ka daant ker sulaana
kuch der younhi kerke bahaana
nawal uthaana parhty hi jaana

bari piyaari raatein
bari piyaari baatein

na koi khuwahish zameen o makaan ki
bady ho ker paaeen rasmein jahaan ki

kisi ny kaha ohdaa ho bada
kasi ny kaha pesaa ho bada
kisi ny kaha makaan ho bada

isi soch main uljha apna larakpan
pessy ki dor main guzri jawaani
na bachpan na larakpan na rahi jawani
haan mager reh gai guzry waqt ki kahaani
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«Reply #1 on: July 30, 2008, 04:36:09 PM »
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Gulzar bhai,,aapka ye kalaam badaa Taweel Hai,,aur Zindagi Ki Har Har Shaii Ko aapne Bade Hi Khoob andaaz Se Milaya Hai...

waqt Ki killat Hai Dost..Insh-allaah Jaise Hi free Hota Hun Reply deta Hun aapko

Jo Sabeeq Reply Diya Tha Wo padha Ki Nahi kal wali post ka ..??
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«Reply #2 on: July 30, 2008, 04:41:19 PM »
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wah wah wah gulzar bhai.....bahoot achcha likhte hain aap....padhkar wo bachpan suhaana yaad aaya,
       aankh bhigi..na jaane kya kya yaad aaya
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«Reply #3 on: July 30, 2008, 04:55:04 PM »
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shukriyaa bhai raza

main ny aapka email parhaa aor kal hi usska jawab dy diya tha aap zaroor check kerna 

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«Reply #4 on: July 30, 2008, 04:57:20 PM »
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shukriyaa sanjeev bahi

aap ke email ka jwab main diya hy zaroor check karen

thanks for friendship dear friend

gulzar love4
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«Reply #5 on: July 30, 2008, 07:42:13 PM »
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good one gulzargul  ji!!
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«Reply #6 on: July 31, 2008, 08:12:41 PM »
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shukriya pooja ji

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«Reply #7 on: October 19, 2009, 09:22:48 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2009, 08:25:18 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khooob Gulzar bhai..

Vaakai Padhkar-Padhte Apna GuzarE Zamaane ki Tasveer Si Aankhon Ke Saamne Ban Gayi

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: October 25, 2009, 07:27:05 PM »
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thank u khwaish ji

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«Reply #10 on: October 25, 2009, 07:41:43 PM »
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Wah wah Gul ji bahut umda kalam pesh kiya hai aapne ... Applause
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«Reply #11 on: October 25, 2009, 07:55:51 PM »
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Bahoot Bahoot Gul ji.. Bahoot Khoob!

Waah bahoot Hi khoobsoorti se byaan kiya hai aapne.. Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #12 on: October 28, 2010, 03:16:12 PM »
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hi
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