bas saans lene ke liye

by vicharika on March 15, 2013, 03:27:44 AM
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har taraf se jab hum nakaam rahe
shaayron mein bahut hum aam rahe

jo log dekh kar bhi nahin dekhte the humein
ter saath judne se mere hum kalaam rahe

bahut door tak dhoop mein tanha chale lekin
ab lagta hai safar bhar shaam  rahe
tere pukarne se apne naam par rashq hota hai
bas ter naam se juda mera naam rahe
bahut dinon ke baad aaj khud apne saath hain hum
macha rahe baahar agar kohraam rahe
hum kaise apni baat sabko batayein
mere sher mere dil ke paigham rahe
bas saans lene ke liye 'noori'      
koi kab tak hawaon ka ghulaam rahe


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«Reply #1 on: March 15, 2013, 11:06:26 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #2 on: March 15, 2013, 12:24:35 PM »
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waah waah bahut khoob
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«Reply #3 on: March 15, 2013, 01:12:31 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: March 15, 2013, 01:40:47 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: March 15, 2013, 06:45:25 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: March 15, 2013, 09:22:21 PM »
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waaaaaah. bahut khoob...
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«Reply #7 on: March 16, 2013, 12:20:47 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: March 17, 2013, 08:45:18 AM »
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ek koshish ko jab daad mmilti hai man karta hai ki kuchh aur bhi likhoon .... bahut bahut shukriya aap sab doston ka
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«Reply #9 on: March 17, 2013, 09:07:31 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #10 on: March 17, 2013, 09:23:28 AM »
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shukriya!!!
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«Reply #11 on: March 17, 2013, 11:26:10 AM »
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bohut khub vicharika ji bohut umda likha hai welcome in yofamily
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