Bhatka Hua Naavik (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on March 04, 2006, 05:53:26 AM
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jatin1101
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«Reply #15 on: April 12, 2006, 11:21:23 AM »
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good work, shikha and bs
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«Reply #16 on: April 12, 2006, 11:43:54 AM »
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Thnx Jatni ji and welcome to yoindia....

Dekho aaj Lehron pe kya Rang chaya hai.....
Samander ki gehraayi me maine apna harr Gum chupaya hai....
Bewafa Mahobbat nahi Waqt hua karta tha....
Isiliye aaj maine Maut ke haathon me haath thamaya hai.....
Doob chuka hoon ab toh main Zindagi ke Dard-O-Gum mein.....
Ab jaa ke kahin bhatakte naavik ko Manzil ki yaad aayi hai......
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«Reply #17 on: April 13, 2006, 07:01:45 PM »
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bahut achha reply hai badnaam ji....wah wah

Teri yaad-e-patwar ka sahara,
is dil-e-navik ko, de raha hai hosla jeeney key wastey,
Door nikal aaya hu main,
phir kinaro sey, ishq-e-samunder main nahin mil rahey rastey...
leel naa jaye mujhey kahin,
yeh gehra samunder,
thaam lo hath mera khuda key waastey........
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gumnam
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«Reply #18 on: April 14, 2006, 03:00:15 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB

INTEZAR RAHTA HAI SHAAM TERA,
KATTI HAIN RAATE LE-LE KE NAAM TERA.
MUDDAT SE HU DIL MEIN YE AAS PAALE,
SHAYAD AB AA JAAYE PAIGAM TERA.
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_Vicky_
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«Reply #19 on: April 17, 2006, 08:53:41 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob GUNAM JI, BADNAAM JI AUR SHIKHA JI.. sab ne bahut khoob likha hai
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #20 on: April 17, 2006, 02:49:33 PM »
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bahut achha reply hai badnaam ji....wah wah

Teri yaad-e-patwar ka sahara,
is dil-e-navik ko, de raha hai hosla jeeney key wastey,
Door nikal aaya hu main,
phir kinaro sey, ishq-e-samunder main nahin mil rahey rastey...
leel naa jaye mujhey kahin,
yeh gehra samunder,
thaam lo hath mera khuda key waastey........



Haath tumhara hum thaam ke......
Tumhe harr samander se paar lagayenge.....
Agar kabhi uthai iss Dunia ne ungli hamare Rishte pe....
Toh harr Bewafai me Naam apna likhayenge.....
Kinaron ke kya Raaste dhoondte ho.....
Dil me jagah do apne toh hum tumhe Saahil se milayenge.......!!!!!!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #21 on: April 17, 2006, 02:51:06 PM »
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Shukriya Shikha ji....Gumnam Ji and Vicky bhai...... Usual Smile
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gumnam
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«Reply #22 on: May 11, 2006, 03:12:36 PM »
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bahut achha reply hai badnaam ji....wah wah

Teri yaad-e-patwar ka sahara,
is dil-e-navik ko, de raha hai hosla jeeney key wastey,
Door nikal aaya hu main,
phir kinaro sey, ishq-e-samunder main nahin mil rahey rastey...
leel naa jaye mujhey kahin,
yeh gehra samunder,
thaam lo hath mera khuda key waastey........



Haath tumhara hum thaam ke......
Tumhe harr samander se paar lagayenge.....
Agar kabhi uthai iss Dunia ne ungli hamare Rishte pe....
Toh harr Bewafai me Naam apna likhayenge.....
Kinaron ke kya Raaste dhoondte ho.....
Dil me jagah do apne toh hum tumhe Saahil se milayenge.......!!!!!!!
KYA BAAT HAI
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Shikha12
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«Reply #23 on: May 19, 2006, 12:06:42 PM »
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Haath tumhara hum thaam ke......
Tumhe harr samander se paar lagayenge.....
Agar kabhi uthai iss Dunia ne ungli hamare Rishte pe....
Toh harr Bewafai me Naam apna likhayenge.....
Kinaron ke kya Raaste dhoondte ho.....
Dil me jagah do apne toh hum tumhe Saahil se milayenge.......!!!!!!!

 
Puzzled ! SORRY FOR REPLYING SO LATE... for SUCH A GOOD REPLY..

log baatey kartey hai khoob badi badi, lekin phir sath chod jaatey hai...
kehtey hai ki duniya ki har rasm todegey, lekin dil hi tod jaatey hai...
humey bhi intezaar hai uska jo milwa dey mazil-e-sahil sey humey,
shayad hum mey hi kami hai koi, ki sab bhatakta hua chod jaatey hai....
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«Reply #24 on: May 19, 2006, 12:14:12 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB

INTEZAR RAHTA HAI SHAAM TERA,
KATTI HAIN RAATE LE-LE KE NAAM TERA.
MUDDAT SE HU DIL MEIN YE AAS PAALE,
SHAYAD AB AA JAAYE PAIGAM TERA.
khoob likha hai gumnaam ji.....

tum apney dil main intezaar ko kabhi bhi kum na honey dena,
yeh shama jo roshan hai muhabbat sey roshan hi rehney dena.
hanstey huey maut ko galey lagana isi ko kehtey hai shayad,
martey hue bhi naam apney mehboob ka letey rehna....
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jatin1101
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«Reply #25 on: May 20, 2006, 09:22:41 AM »
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bahut achha reply hai badnaam ji....wah wah

Teri yaad-e-patwar ka sahara,
is dil-e-navik ko, de raha hai hosla jeeney key wastey,
Door nikal aaya hu main,
phir kinaro sey, ishq-e-samunder main nahin mil rahey rastey...
leel naa jaye mujhey kahin,
yeh gehra samunder,
thaam lo hath mera khuda key waastey........


Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Haath tumhara hum thaam ke......
Tumhe harr samander se paar lagayenge.....
Agar kabhi uthai iss Dunia ne ungli hamare Rishte pe....
Toh harr Bewafai me Naam apna likhayenge.....
Kinaron ke kya Raaste dhoondte ho.....
Dil me jagah do apne toh hum tumhe Saahil se milayenge.......!!!!!!!


Quote from: "shikha12"
SORRY FOR REPLYING SO LATE... for SUCH A GOOD REPLY..

log baatey kartey hai khoob badi badi, lekin phir sath chod jaatey hai...
kehtey hai ki duniya ki har rasm todegey, lekin dil hi tod jaatey hai...
humey bhi intezaar hai uska jo milwa dey mazil-e-sahil sey humey,
shayad hum mey hi kami hai koi, ki sab bhatakta hua chod jaatey hai....


kya baat hai. ek sey badkar ek.
 Puzzled ! waisey yeh ho kya raha hai.

Anyways.... lagey raho. Atleast likh to achha rahey ho :wink:
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«Reply #26 on: May 22, 2006, 12:41:01 PM »
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Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Haath tumhara hum thaam ke......
Tumhe harr samander se paar lagayenge.....
Agar kabhi uthai iss Dunia ne ungli hamare Rishte pe....
Toh harr Bewafai me Naam apna likhayenge.....
Kinaron ke kya Raaste dhoondte ho.....
Dil me jagah do apne toh hum tumhe Saahil se milayenge.......!!!!!!!

 
Puzzled ! SORRY FOR REPLYING SO LATE... for SUCH A GOOD REPLY..

log baatey kartey hai khoob badi badi, lekin phir sath chod jaatey hai...
kehtey hai ki duniya ki har rasm todegey, lekin dil hi tod jaatey hai...
humey bhi intezaar hai uska jo milwa dey mazil-e-sahil sey humey,
shayad hum mey hi kami hai koi, ki sab bhatakta hua chod jaatey hai....


Kya baat hai Shikha ji........Gud Reply

Sahil pe haath thaam ke tumhara.....
Hum har Leher se lad jayenge.....

Jo roka rasta kisi ne bhi humara....
Use samander me bhatakta chor jayenge......

Bhula denge harr Ranj-O-Gum ko.....
Par aye meri humkalam hum tumhe na bhula payenge.........!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #27 on: May 25, 2006, 05:45:04 AM »
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Quote from: "Shikha12"
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Haath tumhara hum thaam ke......
Tumhe harr samander se paar lagayenge.....
Agar kabhi uthai iss Dunia ne ungli hamare Rishte pe....
Toh harr Bewafai me Naam apna likhayenge.....
Kinaron ke kya Raaste dhoondte ho.....
Dil me jagah do apne toh hum tumhe Saahil se milayenge.......!!!!!!!

 
Puzzled ! SORRY FOR REPLYING SO LATE... for SUCH A GOOD REPLY..

log baatey kartey hai khoob badi badi, lekin phir sath chod jaatey hai...
kehtey hai ki duniya ki har rasm todegey, lekin dil hi tod jaatey hai...
humey bhi intezaar hai uska jo milwa dey mazil-e-sahil sey humey,
shayad hum mey hi kami hai koi, ki sab bhatakta hua chod jaatey hai....


Kya baat hai Shikha ji........Gud Reply

Sahil pe haath thaam ke tumhara.....
Hum har Leher se lad jayenge.....

Jo roka rasta kisi ne bhi humara....
Use samander me bhatakta chor jayenge......

Bhula denge harr Ranj-O-Gum ko.....
Par aye meri humkalam hum tumhe na bhula payenge.........!!!!!!!!
main to ek khwab hu... merey liye lad kar kya payaogey tum,
main gumon key jaal main rehti hu.... kareeb aaogey to ulajh jaogey tum...

tum to apney ho, tumhey naa koi takleef ho kabhi na musibat aaye koi,
yeh sach hai, sach kehtey hai, jo manogey yeh kaha to sawar jaogey tum...

us saagar main hai hum doob rahey, jis sey koi paar na utar paaya,
kaisey haath thamaye tumhey darr hai, sath humare hi bhatak jaogey tum...

main to koi khuda nahin, ek tasveer hu, kuch miti hui kuch dhudhli si,
humkalam hu isliye kehti hu tumsey, kosish karogey to bhool jaogey tum..
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«Reply #28 on: May 25, 2006, 07:19:50 AM »
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Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Quote from: "Shikha12"
Quote from: "badnaam_shayar"
Haath tumhara hum thaam ke......
Tumhe harr samander se paar lagayenge.....
Agar kabhi uthai iss Dunia ne ungli hamare Rishte pe....
Toh harr Bewafai me Naam apna likhayenge.....
Kinaron ke kya Raaste dhoondte ho.....
Dil me jagah do apne toh hum tumhe Saahil se milayenge.......!!!!!!!

 
Puzzled ! SORRY FOR REPLYING SO LATE... for SUCH A GOOD REPLY..

log baatey kartey hai khoob badi badi, lekin phir sath chod jaatey hai...
kehtey hai ki duniya ki har rasm todegey, lekin dil hi tod jaatey hai...
humey bhi intezaar hai uska jo milwa dey mazil-e-sahil sey humey,
shayad hum mey hi kami hai koi, ki sab bhatakta hua chod jaatey hai....


Kya baat hai Shikha ji........Gud Reply

Sahil pe haath thaam ke tumhara.....
Hum har Leher se lad jayenge.....

Jo roka rasta kisi ne bhi humara....
Use samander me bhatakta chor jayenge......

Bhula denge harr Ranj-O-Gum ko.....
Par aye meri humkalam hum tumhe na bhula payenge.........!!!!!!!!
main to ek khwab hu... merey liye lad kar kya payaogey tum,
main gumon key jaal main rehti hu.... kareeb aaogey to ulajh jaogey tum...

tum to apney ho, tumhey naa koi takleef ho kabhi na musibat aaye koi,
yeh sach hai, sach kehtey hai, jo manogey yeh kaha to sawar jaogey tum...

us saagar main hai hum doob rahey, jis sey koi paar na utar paaya,
kaisey haath thamaye tumhey darr hai, sath humare hi bhatak jaogey tum...

main to koi khuda nahin, ek tasveer hu, kuch miti hui kuch dhudhli si,
humkalam hu isliye kehti hu tumsey, kosish karogey to bhool jaogey tum..



Wah kya Likha hai bahut acche......

Tumne bhi baaton ka kya karvaan banaya hai.....
Pehle apna kehke mujhe baad me paraya banaya hai.......

Bhatakta raahgir nahi main jo raah bhatak jaonga......
Tum jab karogi samander paar toh Sahilon ko haath me thaame main tumhe nazar aonga.......

Darr hai tumhara isse tumhe khud hee ladna hoga......
Jee ke mere sung....Dard-O-Gum ka katl karna hoga.....!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #29 on: May 26, 2006, 07:03:05 AM »
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Wah kya Likha hai bahut acche......

Tumne bhi baaton ka kya karvaan banaya hai.....
Pehle apna kehke mujhe baad me paraya banaya hai.......

Bhatakta raahgir nahi main jo raah bhatak jaonga......
Tum jab karogi samander paar toh Sahilon ko haath me thaame main tumhe nazar aonga.......

Darr hai tumhara isse tumhe khud hee ladna hoga......
Jee ke mere sung....Dard-O-Gum ka katl karna hoga.....!!!!!!!!!!



Aapney bhi bahut achaa likha hai...Gaurav
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