Bhatka Hua Naavik (Shikha)

by Shikha12 on March 04, 2006, 05:53:26 AM
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Poocha kinare ney badhawaas bhagti lehar sey,
bolo sakhi kiska sandesh layi ho......
boli lehar, bhar aankhon main moti,
jadvat khadey e' kinare,
khojtey hue koi tujhey, phir samundar main kho gaya hai....
kya phir kahogey tum usey, "Bhatka hua navik" koi,
jo tujhey paney ki chahat main zindagi sey hath dho gaya hai....??
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«Reply #1 on: March 05, 2006, 03:10:11 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: March 07, 2006, 05:57:09 PM »
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zindagi mein jaane kya khoj rahe the
jaane kya mil gayaa
pataa nahin maine woh raah kyun chuni
jisne hume gumnaam kar diya.
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«Reply #3 on: March 08, 2006, 07:42:02 AM »
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Thanks for reply.... gumnaam, djpaddystudio7 nice work....

Kho chuki hai shakshiyat pyar ki rahoon mey,
Gumraah jaroor hai, magar gumnaam nahi hai..
Hai kissey meri muhobbat key abhi mehfil mey,
Saaki hath main hai, magar ab jaam nahi hai...
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«Reply #4 on: March 08, 2006, 02:08:25 PM »
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Quote from: "Shikha12"
Thanks for reply.... gumnaam, djpaddystudio7 nice work....

Kho chuki hai shakshiyat pyar ki rahoon mey,
Gumraah jaroor hai, magar gumnaam nahi hai..
Hai kissey meri muhobbat key abhi mehfil mey,
Saaki hath main hai, magar ab jaam nahi hai...
 BAHUT ACHHA LIKHA....                      
             "YE KAFAS HI MUJHKO AJIJ HAI,YAHA JI TO LUGA KARAR SE
    MUJHE AB CHAMAN MEIN NA LE CHALO,MAIN DARA HUA HU BAHAR SE"
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djpaddystudio7
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«Reply #5 on: March 08, 2006, 06:18:57 PM »
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wow shikha this one was really good
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jatin1101
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2006, 05:52:01 AM »
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Bahut achha likha hai... shikha... kya baat hai....
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2006, 12:00:24 PM »
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SHIKHA JI
 bahut bahut khoob.. bahut pyara likha hai aapne..nice..
aur gumnam ji .. dj ji aapne bhi khoob likha hai..
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Shikha12
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2006, 12:09:46 PM »
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Thanks jatin and vicky....
hum bhatke hai manzil sey, sirf apkey pyaar main..
ab to kareeb aa jaaiye, kya rakha hai takraar main
chup ho kyon tum, kuch to baat kijiye apne dil ki..
woh mazaa kaha inkaar main jo hota hai ikraar main....
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Shikha12
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«Reply #9 on: April 10, 2006, 12:16:28 PM »
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Thanks Majid.....
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«Reply #10 on: April 10, 2006, 03:29:05 PM »
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Poocha kinare ney badhawaas bhagti lehar sey,
bolo sakhi kiska sandesh layi ho......
boli lehar, bhar aankhon main moti,
jadvat khadey e' kinare,
khojtey hue koi tujhey, phir samundar main kho gaya hai....
kya phir kahogey tum usey, "Bhatka hua navik" koi,
jo tujhey paney ki chahat main zindagi sey hath dho gaya hai....??


Wonderfull Shikha ji.......ek koshish meri iss topic pe.....

Bhatka hue naavik ne.....
Aaj phir lehron ko ufaan pe paya hai....

Shayad door kahin....
Yaadon ke samander se uske Pyar ka sandesha aya hai.....

Par apne saath woh dard ke siwa kuch na laya hai....
Door rehna apni mahobbat se....
Shayad yahi waqt ki Maya hai....!!!!!!!!!!
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Pooja
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«Reply #11 on: April 11, 2006, 02:37:15 PM »
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good shikha and BS!!
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #12 on: April 11, 2006, 05:09:59 PM »
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Shukriya Pooja ji
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Shikha12
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«Reply #13 on: April 12, 2006, 01:16:00 AM »
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Thanks Pooja ji and Badnaam ji.
BS, U r always great in writing. Bahut achha likha hai...

Lehren ufaanti hai ek baar tufaa ki tarah,
aur phir shaant bhi ho jaati hai,
zindagi mein lagte hai kai mele
aur phir ekaant main so jaati hai..
muhabbat ke samundar main humney doob key dekh liya,
yeh bhatakti kashti bina navik key,
teri bewaafai ki dastan sunaati hai
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«Reply #14 on: April 12, 2006, 10:14:32 AM »
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Thanks Pooja ji and Badnaam ji.
BS, you r always great in writing. Bahut achha likha hai...

Lehren ufaanti hai ek baar tufaa ki tarah,
aur phir shaant bhi ho jaati hai,
zindagi mein lagte hai kai mele
aur phir ekaant main so jaati hai..
muhabbat ke samundar main humney doob key dekh liya,
yeh bhatakti kashti bina navik key,
teri bewaafai ki dastan sunaati hai


Thnx a lot Shikha ji aap bhi kuch kam nahi ho humse.....Wonderfull Reply......
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