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Har Koi Banna Chahe Uska Apna
Wo Har Shaqs Par Meharbaan Si Lagti He
Kabhi Hasati Kabhi Rulati
Wo Ek Gudiya Nadaam Si Lagti He
Use Chukar Har Rang Nikhar Ata He
Kbhi Gul Kabhi Gulshan Kabhi Gulfaam Si Lagti He
Bikhri Zulfe Surkhi Labo Par
Ankhe Chalakte Jam Si Lagti He
Jis Naam Se Chahe Use Pukaro
Anu Kaho Ya Anamkia
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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2010, 07:06:35 AM » |
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Harpal Mahakti Sham Si Lagti He
Thahre Pani Me Toofaan Si Lagti He
Dil Me Liye Hajaro Dua Sab Ke Liye
Khuda Ka Koi Farmaan Si Lagti He
Har Koi Banna Chahe Uska Apna
Wo Har Shaqs Par Meharbaan Si Lagti He
Kabhi Hasati Kabhi Rulati
Wo Ek Gudiya Nadaam Si Lagti He
Use Chukar Har Rang Nikhar Ata He
Kbhi Gul Kabhi Gulshan Kabhi Gulfaam Si Lagti He
Bikhri Zulfe Surkhi Labo Par
Ankhe Chalakte Jam Si Lagti He
Jis Naam Se Chahe Use Pukaro
Anu Kaho Ya Anamkia
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2010, 07:19:03 AM » |
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aapko ab kya kahun  .....
no words ji...... 
thnx nahin keh sakti....... 
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2010, 04:00:18 PM » |
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Maan gaye  anu ji  Sahi likha Matrix bhayyeee 
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«Reply #5 on: August 21, 2010, 06:57:52 PM » |
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Maan gaye anu ji Sahi likha Matrix bhayyeee |
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«Reply #6 on: August 21, 2010, 06:59:32 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: August 21, 2010, 08:39:22 PM » |
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Bilkul sahi farmaya hai aap ne Matrix Ji
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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2010, 08:07:29 AM » |
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Harpal Mahakti Sham Si Lagti He
Thahre Pani Me Toofaan Si Lagti He
Dil Me Liye Hajaro Dua Sab Ke Liye
Khuda Ka Koi Farmaan Si Lagti He
Har Koi Banna Chahe Uska Apna
Wo Har Shaqs Par Meharbaan Si Lagti He
Kabhi Hasati Kabhi Rulati
Wo Ek Gudiya Nadaam Si Lagti He
Use Chukar Har Rang Nikhar Ata He
Kbhi Gul Kabhi Gulshan Kabhi Gulfaam Si Lagti He
Bikhri Zulfe Surkhi Labo Par
Ankhe Chalakte Jam Si Lagti He
Jis Naam Se Chahe Use Pukaro
Anu Kaho Ya Anamkia
Wo To Bas Kasak – Dil – E – Aam Si Lagti He
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob matrix sahab aapne to KASAK KO DIL HI MEIN UTAAR DIYA.....BEHTEEN TAARIF KA ANDAZ- E- BAYAAN...!! |
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«Reply #10 on: August 26, 2010, 08:44:08 AM » |
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Harpal Mahakti Sham Si Lagti He
Thahre Pani Me Toofaan Si Lagti He
Dil Me Liye Hajaro Dua Sab Ke Liye
Khuda Ka Koi Farmaan Si Lagti He
Har Koi Banna Chahe Uska Apna
Wo Har Shaqs Par Meharbaan Si Lagti He
Kabhi Hasati Kabhi Rulati
Wo Ek Gudiya Nadaam Si Lagti He
Use Chukar Har Rang Nikhar Ata He
Kbhi Gul Kabhi Gulshan Kabhi Gulfaam Si Lagti He
Bikhri Zulfe Surkhi Labo Par
Ankhe Chalakte Jam Si Lagti He
Jis Naam Se Chahe Use Pukaro
Anu Kaho Ya Anamkia
Wo To Bas Kasak – Dil – E – Aam Si Lagti He
WAH JI WAH SACH BAHUT KHUB TAREEF KI APNE APKA ANDAZ KAAFI ACHHA THA..... |
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MG ji aapko meri anu-di ayise lagti hai.....Badi achhi lagti hai.....  :icon_queen Bataaun mujhe kaise lagti hai...... Mujhe tou patton pe thehri shabnam lagti hai
Usha ki lalima si roshan chirag lagti hai...
Sab k chehre pe muskaan bikherti
Mamta ki wo anokhi muurat lagti hai...
Bachcho key saath bachchi lagti hai
Ye saawli-saloni surat sachi lagti hai
Prem sudha ke ras ki ye samunder lagti hai
Har mausam mai pyaar barsaati Yo ki jaan lagti hai
Bhaav aur shabdo ki ye tou khaan lagti hai
Yo kay ess manch ki mujhe shaan lagti hai
Kasak ban k dil ki kitne dewaano ki jaan lagti hai
Annu-Anaamikaa tu kavita kee pehchaan lagti hai
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«Reply #12 on: September 01, 2010, 04:32:32 PM » |
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Koyal ji...
bahut masoom sa ...
bahut pyaara sa ...
bahut khoobsurat sa ...
bahut apna sa....
likha hai aapne....
sach ab tak jitne logon ne aapki Di ke baare me likha hai... mujhe sabse pyaari aapki kavita lagi.. aur ye baat main strainght from the heart keh raha hoon... bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut bahut....(infinity times)... pyaari moorat banayi hai aapne apne di ki aur ek dum jaisi hai wo bilkul waisi banayi hai.... i have no words to appreciate this poem... i am speechless....
 to you...!!!
and  for such a nice poem... thanks a lot....!!!Bataaun mujhe kaise lagti hai......
Mujhe tou patton pe thehri shabnam lagti hai
Usha ki lalima si roshan chirag lagti hai...
Sab k chehre pe muskaan bikherti
Mamta ki wo anokhi muurat lagti hai...
Bachcho key saath bachchi lagti hai
Ye saawli-saloni surat sachi lagti hai
Prem sudha ke ras ki ye samunder lagti hai
Har mausam mai pyaar barsaati Yo ki jaan lagti hai
Bhaav aur shabdo ki ye tou khaan lagti hai
Yo kay ess manch ki mujhe shaan lagti hai
Kasak ban k dil ki kitne dewaano ki jaan lagti hai
Annu-Anaamikaa tu kavita kee pehchaan lagti hai
- KOYAL
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«Reply #13 on: September 01, 2010, 05:02:32 PM » |
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MG ji aapko meri anu-di ayise lagti hai.....Badi achhi lagti hai..... :icon_queen Bataaun mujhe kaise lagti hai...... Mujhe tou patton pe thehri shabnam lagti hai
Usha ki lalima si roshan chirag lagti hai...
Sab k chehre pe muskaan bikherti
Mamta ki wo anokhi muurat lagti hai...
Bachcho key saath bachchi lagti hai
Ye saawli-saloni surat sachi lagti hai
Prem sudha ke ras ki ye samunder lagti hai
Har mausam mai pyaar barsaati Yo ki jaan lagti hai
Bhaav aur shabdo ki ye tou khaan lagti hai
Yo kay ess manch ki mujhe shaan lagti hai
Kasak ban k dil ki kitne dewaano ki jaan lagti hai
Annu-Anaamikaa tu kavita kee pehchaan lagti hai
TU SHAITANI KARTI HI ACHCHI LAGTI HAI YE SENTI AND EMOTIONAL BAATEIN KARTI NAHIN.....
SAMJHI NA.......MMMUUUAAAHHHHHH.....LOVE U  |
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