~ * Do chehre* ~_DeV

by thinkhattk on August 01, 2010, 01:53:38 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1443 times)
thinkhattk
Guest
Reply with quote



Dar dar bhatkati ghum rahi hu me,

kho jati hu apne chehro ki basti me,

kaha mile muje apna chehra yaha,

khud sari basti be-chahera ho gai he....
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
har chehre me by jochahohojayein in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
Uske Chehre Ko Koi Na Dekhe by Devdas_online in Shayeri for Dard -e- Bewafai
Haste hue Chehre.... :-) by badnaam_shayar in Shayri-E-Dard
ye chehre by bekarar in Shairi - E - Zindagi « 1 2  All »
tere chehre pe by saahill in Share:Love Poetry
KOYAL46
Guest
«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2010, 12:03:48 PM »
Reply with quote
Wah baku good one.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ruhon kee bastee main sakhee bhatak gayee hai tu
Yahaan hote nahi koi chehre bas rehti hain ruhein

Kyu sakhee itne mukhote pehne ghum rahi hai tu
K ab khud ko bhi nahi pehchaan paa rahi hai tu





Dar dar bhatkati ghum rahi hu me,

kho jati hu apne chehro ki basti me,

kaha mile muje apna chehra yaha,

khud sari basti be-chahera ho gai he....


Logged
Rajesh Harish
Guest
«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2010, 03:04:44 PM »
Reply with quote
Good one Deevangi Ji
N Equally good response Koyal Ji
Logged
thinkhattk
Guest
«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2010, 07:46:19 AM »
Reply with quote
thanku so much....
lovely reply koyal.... Applause   Applause
Logged
ANAAMIKA
Guest
«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2010, 07:52:18 AM »
Reply with quote
nice lines Devangi-ji.....good picture also... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
VERY GOOG RESPONCE kOYAL..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




Dar dar bhatkati ghum rahi hu me,

kho jati hu apne chehro ki basti me,

kaha mile muje apna chehra yaha,

khud sari basti be-chahera ho gai he....
Wah baku good one.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ruhon kee bastee main sakhee bhatak gayee hai tu
Yahaan hote nahi koi chehre bas rehti hain ruhein

Kyu sakhee itne mukhote pehne ghum rahi hai tu
K ab khud ko bhi nahi pehchaan paa rahi hai tu




Logged
thinkhattk
Guest
«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2010, 07:58:43 AM »
Reply with quote
sukriya anaamika ji....
Logged
~Hriday~
Poetic Patrol
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 114
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
101 days, 3 hours and 14 minutes.

kalam k chalne ko zamaana paagalpan samajhta hai.

Posts: 16240
Member Since: Feb 2010


View Profile WWW
«Reply #6 on: August 03, 2010, 10:03:23 PM »
Reply with quote
 Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Khoob Devangi ji...!!!
Logged
thinkhattk
Guest
«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2010, 09:25:05 AM »
Reply with quote
sukriya...klaskar ji...
Logged
*KasaK*....Dil Ki
Poetic Patrol
Umda Shayar
*

Rau: 19
Offline Offline

Gender: Female
Waqt Bitaya:
67 days, 3 hours and 39 minutes.

"I hv a prsnality wch evrybdy cn't handle

Posts: 5596
Member Since: Jun 2010


View Profile
«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2010, 01:09:04 PM »
Reply with quote
khud se khud ko chhupa rahi hun
main khud hi khud me sama rahi hun
aaj paya hai jab se tumko
main apne aap me itra rahi hun......
Logged
KOYAL46
Guest
«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2010, 01:41:24 PM »
Reply with quote
Chhuyee-muyee si kyu simmatt rahi ho
Kyu khudse aaj khud ko chhupa rahi ho

Aaj jo bhee aaya hai saathee wo khaas hai
Janti hu Mann hi mann tum muskuraa rahi ho
Logged
thinkhattk
Guest
«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2010, 01:50:13 PM »
Reply with quote
bahot khoob kasak n koyal.... Clapping Smiley  Applause
Logged
KOYAL46
Guest
«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2010, 02:36:22 PM »
Reply with quote
thanks baku jamwa jaau chhu....
Logged
SURESH SANGWAN
Guest
«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2010, 08:09:04 AM »
Reply with quote
bahut khoob devangi ji.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley and koyal ji responded in a well skilled and prompt ly. very good.
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Dar dar bhatkati ghum rahi hu me,

kho jati hu apne chehro ki basti me,

kaha mile muje apna chehra yaha,

khud sari basti be-chahera ho gai he....
Logged
thinkhattk
Guest
«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2010, 08:45:27 AM »
Reply with quote
sukriya suresh ji....


bahut khoob devangi ji.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley and koyal ji responded in a well skilled and prompt ly. very good.
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
June 05, 2020, 09:42:25 PM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[June 05, 2020, 08:03:46 PM]

[June 05, 2020, 08:00:36 PM]

[June 05, 2020, 07:58:25 PM]

[June 05, 2020, 07:56:33 PM]

[June 05, 2020, 07:55:50 PM]

[June 05, 2020, 07:52:35 PM]

[June 05, 2020, 01:58:35 PM]

[June 05, 2020, 01:56:47 PM]

[June 05, 2020, 01:55:17 PM]

[June 05, 2020, 01:53:52 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.238 seconds with 25 queries.
[x] Join now community of 14002 Real Poets and poetry admirer