~ * Do chehre* ~_DeV

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Dar dar bhatkati ghum rahi hu me,

kho jati hu apne chehro ki basti me,

kaha mile muje apna chehra yaha,

khud sari basti be-chahera ho gai he....
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«Reply #1 on: August 02, 2010, 05:33:48 PM »
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Wah baku good one.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ruhon kee bastee main sakhee bhatak gayee hai tu
Yahaan hote nahi koi chehre bas rehti hain ruhein

Kyu sakhee itne mukhote pehne ghum rahi hai tu
K ab khud ko bhi nahi pehchaan paa rahi hai tu





Dar dar bhatkati ghum rahi hu me,

kho jati hu apne chehro ki basti me,

kaha mile muje apna chehra yaha,

khud sari basti be-chahera ho gai he....


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«Reply #2 on: August 02, 2010, 08:34:44 PM »
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Good one Deevangi Ji
N Equally good response Koyal Ji
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«Reply #3 on: August 03, 2010, 01:16:19 PM »
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thanku so much....
lovely reply koyal.... Applause   Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 03, 2010, 01:22:18 PM »
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nice lines Devangi-ji.....good picture also... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
VERY GOOG RESPONCE kOYAL..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley




Dar dar bhatkati ghum rahi hu me,

kho jati hu apne chehro ki basti me,

kaha mile muje apna chehra yaha,

khud sari basti be-chahera ho gai he....
Wah baku good one.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Ruhon kee bastee main sakhee bhatak gayee hai tu
Yahaan hote nahi koi chehre bas rehti hain ruhein

Kyu sakhee itne mukhote pehne ghum rahi hai tu
K ab khud ko bhi nahi pehchaan paa rahi hai tu




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«Reply #5 on: August 03, 2010, 01:28:43 PM »
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sukriya anaamika ji....
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«Reply #6 on: August 04, 2010, 03:33:23 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Khoob Devangi ji...!!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 04, 2010, 02:55:05 PM »
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sukriya...klaskar ji...
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2010, 06:39:04 PM »
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khud se khud ko chhupa rahi hun
main khud hi khud me sama rahi hun
aaj paya hai jab se tumko
main apne aap me itra rahi hun......
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«Reply #9 on: August 05, 2010, 07:11:24 PM »
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Chhuyee-muyee si kyu simmatt rahi ho
Kyu khudse aaj khud ko chhupa rahi ho

Aaj jo bhee aaya hai saathee wo khaas hai
Janti hu Mann hi mann tum muskuraa rahi ho
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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2010, 07:20:13 PM »
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bahot khoob kasak n koyal.... Clapping Smiley  Applause
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2010, 08:06:22 PM »
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thanks baku jamwa jaau chhu....
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«Reply #12 on: August 07, 2010, 01:39:04 PM »
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bahut khoob devangi ji.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley and koyal ji responded in a well skilled and prompt ly. very good.
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



Dar dar bhatkati ghum rahi hu me,

kho jati hu apne chehro ki basti me,

kaha mile muje apna chehra yaha,

khud sari basti be-chahera ho gai he....
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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2010, 02:15:27 PM »
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sukriya suresh ji....


bahut khoob devangi ji.
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley and koyal ji responded in a well skilled and prompt ly. very good.
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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