duniya yaad rakhti hai

by pritam tripathi on November 05, 2012, 05:07:58 PM
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bahut kam aata hoon
bahut kam milta hoon
bahut kam bolta hoon
bahut kam likhta hoon
par pata nahi kya khoobi hai
ki duniya yaad rakhti hai


jab bhi aata hoon
jab bhi milta hoon
mohabt me bolta hoon
mohabt me likhta hoon
shayad yahi meri khoobi hai
jise duniya yaad rakhti  hai


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«Reply #1 on: November 05, 2012, 05:32:27 PM »
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Good......
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«Reply #2 on: November 05, 2012, 06:53:17 PM »
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bahut kam aata hoon
bahut kam milta hoon
bahut kam bolta hoon
bahut kam likhta hoon
par pata nahi kya khoobi hai
ki duniya yaad rakhti hai


jab bhi aata hoon
jab bhi milta hoon
mohabt me bolta hoon
mohabt me likhta hoon
shayad yahi meri khoobi hai
jise duniya yaad rakhti  hai



waah waah sir kya khubi hai aapki,very good
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«Reply #3 on: November 06, 2012, 02:55:05 AM »
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BAHUT KHUB JANAB BAHUT BDHIYA
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bahut khooooob...
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«Reply #5 on: November 06, 2012, 04:03:37 AM »
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very nice
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«Reply #6 on: November 06, 2012, 04:09:54 AM »
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nice one
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«Reply #7 on: November 06, 2012, 04:07:39 PM »
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gayatri ji thanks
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soudagar ji shukriya
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