ek kavita un par bhee.....

by Prateek Mardia on April 03, 2008, 04:33:45 PM
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chor kar apne avashyak kaam adhure,
unke saadharan kaam karvaye pure
is tarh kayi baar hamne apna samay lagaya
farz tan-man se nibhaya!
zarrorat parne par hamne be farmaaya,
par unhone vyast-ta mein  shayad
kaam mera bhulaya!

unka varnan kuch is tarh he-
bhagya aur ishwar mujhse zyada unke paksh mein he!
weh mere aadarniye he
unke sab gun anukarniye he
daulat shohrat unki zyada,
zyada mujhse wh umra nein he!
unke zyada charche-chaile,
unko padte zyada salaam!
unka zyada rutba-rassokh,
shayad yada unka sukh!

kher maine fir se unse sampark saadha,
apni keh hi paaya tha aadha
unhone fir se mujhko aazmaya
apna kuch aur karya bataya!

an-mane man se sahi
par mein fir bhee
unke kaam aaya!
saath aaya ek ehsaas--
pakshpaati ishwar nahi he,,
mujh par bhee to kripa rahi he,
paas mere waqt faalto be-hisaab
unke paas fursat nahi he!

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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2008, 05:17:12 PM »
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Prateek

Excellent ! Behtareen khayal ! Applause Applause Applause

Bahut he sachai se bharpoor !

Keep writing !
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2008, 05:17:54 PM »
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bahoot khoob Prateek ji!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2008, 07:39:59 PM »
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Rajbir ji,

isi tarh nazre inayat rakhiyega!shukriya.
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2008, 07:41:26 PM »
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Pooja ji,

hausla afzahi ka shukriya.
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2008, 07:58:57 PM »
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Bohot khoob Prateek...bohot khoob Applause
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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2008, 08:04:43 PM »
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celmira ji,

Aapko kavita pasand aayi--shukragzar hu.
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«Reply #7 on: April 07, 2008, 06:01:14 PM »
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bahut khoob praatek bro..acha likha hai aapne.
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«Reply #8 on: April 13, 2008, 03:55:46 PM »
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khwaish ji,

aapki sarahana ka dil se shukriya.
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«Reply #9 on: April 14, 2008, 12:32:05 PM »
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Wow .. prateek its realy meaning ful poetry.. keep writing ..
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«Reply #10 on: April 14, 2008, 01:55:22 PM »
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thank you sophi ji for praising.
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2008, 01:03:04 PM »
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wah!!

Insaani fidrat hai yah, badal sakta nahi koi
Koi komal hirdaye ka, kathor hirdye liye koi
Samye hai kis ke pass, yah jaane her koi
Jo nikale samye insaan ke liye, ajkal hai wo koi koi!!

Aoro ko kar ke istemaal, samjhe aoro ko toocch praani jo koi
Samye dikhata unko bhi waqat, bach na paata hai yaha koi
Karmo ka hai chakkar, karmo se bach na paata koi
Jaisa kiya waisa paaya, yah bhi samjhe koi koi!!!!!
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«Reply #12 on: May 06, 2008, 01:05:01 PM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai sarthika..Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: May 06, 2008, 02:20:41 PM »
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saarthika ji,

bahut khoob.kafi dilchasp.jis baat ko mein parda-daari se keh raha tha--aapne khule aam goonj ki he.
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«Reply #14 on: October 22, 2010, 10:14:50 AM »
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Wah wah wah Prateekji behad khoobsurat hai aapki ye kavita......Dil ko chhu gayee....
Dard ka aabaas hai.....rab se shikaayat hai....zindagi ki pehchaan hai......
sachhayi....kitni hai aur kalpana kitni....ye tou aap he jaante ho......achhi hai ji.....

Hum tou pure-k-pure he they unke liye he
Par wo tukdo tukdo me mujhe maangte rahe......


Quote from: Prateek Mardia on April 03, 2008, 04:33:45 PM
chor kar apne avashyak kaam adhure,
unke saadharan kaam karvaye pure
is tarh kayi baar hamne apna samay lagaya
farz tan-man se nibhaya!
zarrorat parne par hamne be farmaaya,
par unhone vyast-ta mein  shayad
kaam mera bhulaya!

unka varnan kuch is tarh he-
bhagya aur ishwar mujhse zyada unke paksh mein he!
weh mere aadarniye he
unke sab gun anukarniye he
daulat shohrat unki zyada,
zyada mujhse wh umra nein he!
unke zyada charche-chaile,
unko padte zyada salaam!
unka zyada rutba-rassokh,
shayad yada unka sukh!

kher maine fir se unse sampark saadha,
apni keh hi paaya tha aadha
unhone fir se mujhko aazmaya
apna kuch aur karya bataya!

an-mane man se sahi
par mein fir bhee
unke kaam aaya!
saath aaya ek ehsaas--
pakshpaati ishwar nahi he,,
mujh par bhee to kripa rahi he,
paas mere waqt faalto be-hisaab
unke paas fursat nahi he!

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