Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!

by abdbundeli on February 24, 2011, 04:37:27 PM
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(Yah shaayad aik gazal kee shuruaat hai; par, na jaaney kyon in teen asha'ar key ba'ad hi qalam ruk gayee hai!)

Ye rah-e-zeest hai, miltey hain kayee anjaaney!
Gair kyaa, dost bhi jaatey nahin hain pahichaaney!!

Log jo ishq key baagoun mein qadam rakhtey hain:
Bagtatan saamney paatey hain khuley weeraaney!

Zouq-o-gam saath-saath bhee nazar mein aatey hain,
Shadeed kyun hai ye muaamlah, khudaa jaaney?

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«Reply #1 on: February 24, 2011, 06:17:06 PM »
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BAhut Khub Abd Ji
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«Reply #2 on: February 24, 2011, 06:24:34 PM »
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BAhut Khub Abd Ji

Shukriyah Rishi ji!

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«Reply #3 on: February 24, 2011, 06:33:23 PM »
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ABD ji jitna bhi likha he wo bada katil likha he......

agey aur kya bacha....bahot khub sahab .....hajaro daad apke is kalaam per......
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ABD ji jitna bhi likha he wo bada katil likha he......

agey aur kya bacha....bahot khub sahab .....hajaro daad apke is kalaam per......

Shukriyah 'Matrix Guy' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2011, 07:43:32 PM »
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Bundeli sirji--aapki kalam isslie ruk gai kynki--iske aage kuch bacha hi nhi tha likhne ko.
ek sampurn ghazal likha apne--
jesa ki Matrix yara ne kaha bada qatil likha he--bilkul shi kaha.
apki yhi to khasiyat he ek line b complete hota he apka:)
behad umda or kamal ka likha he aapne:
apki lekhni ka b koi jawab nhi Sirji.
dad k lie shabd nahi hote mere pas. just hats off to u
Atlaaf Raja ki ek sher yad ai aapk ise parhne ke baad--
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tere ishq me is qadar deewane hue
ab to pechane nhi jaaate pehchane hue!
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2011, 08:18:12 PM »
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bht khoob abd ji....
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2011, 08:27:02 PM »
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Bundeli sirji--aapki kalam isslie ruk gai kynki--iske aage kuch bacha hi nhi tha likhne ko.
ek sampurn ghazal likha apne--
jesa ki Matrix yara ne kaha bada qatil likha he--bilkul shi kaha.
apki yhi to khasiyat he ek line b complete hota he apka:)
behad umda or kamal ka likha he aapne:
apki lekhni ka b koi jawab nhi Sirji.
dad k lie shabd nahi hote mere pas. just hats off to u
Atlaaf Raja ki ek sher yad ai aapk ise parhne ke baad--
"
tere ishq me is qadar deewane hue
ab to pechane nhi jaaate pehchane hue!
 "

Bahut-bahut shukriyah Nirala ji!
 
Aik dariyaa hun, magar, dhaar to kyaa, aab nahin!
Aap kahtey hain, 'abd' kaa koyi jawaab nahin!!


Bahut hi pyaaraa sher share kiyaa hai aapney! Shukriyah!

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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2011, 08:28:32 PM »
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bht khoob abd ji....

Shukriyah 'Manzil' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

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