GAR TUM MANAA LO TO ...............................saru

by SURESH SANGWAN on September 15, 2017, 01:50:50 PM
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गर  तुम  मना  लो तो रूठना  चाहती हूं
कुछ  लुत्फ़-ए-ज़िंदगी  लूटना चाहती हूँ

इक दौर था जब अच्छे लगा करते थे
अब इन झमेलों  से छूटना  चाहती हूं

कितनी थकाऊ है ये जवानी ए बचपन
तेरी   गलियों   में  लौटना  चाहती  हूं

जाता नहीं हर नक्श-ए-पा जानिब-ए-मंज़िल
रस्ते  कुछ  ख़ास  अब  छांटना  चाहती हूं

या तो उठा लोगे या चुभा कर रखोगे
मैं  काँच  की  तरह  टूटना  चाहती हूं

होगा नहीं यूँ भी के खुदकॅशी कर लें
जैसे  कटे सफ़र काटना चाहती हूं


---सुरेश सांगवान 'सरु'
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