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<>*Ghar ka Chiraag*<>

jis ghar me jab koi chirag jalta hai
har andhera roshan hoga ye aitbaar hota hai

kyun fir ek din wahi chiraag
bati aur tel ko alag kar deta hai

apne mata pita k ghar ko roshan karne k bajye
kyun wo chiraag alag ghar saja leta hai

nahin samjh pai main aaj tak ye baat
kyun jise janm deti hai aurat wahi use saza deta hai

har bar ek naye tarah ka zakhm taiyaar rakhta hai
kabhi baaton se kabhi haalaton se wo waar pe waar karta hai

fir bhi ant samay me awahi hume mukti dega iss aas me
budhaa baap apne nishthur bete ko dua hi bas deta hai....!!!


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Re: <>*Ghar ka Chiraag*<>

«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 07:19:08 PM »

Kasak Jee aapki is kalaam ke ahsaas behad khoob rahe aise chubhe jaise nashtar se kisi ne waar kiya ho dil per.... Khair yeh to Niyati meiN tay hota hai jiske jo hona hai ..... Khuda Kare ke koi bachcha apne maa baap ko chhodker ghar basane ki na soche....


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Re: <>*Ghar ka Chiraag*<>

«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 07:34:02 PM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 15, 2010, 07:19:08 PM

parwaz ji aapne iss dard ko mehsus kiya ye bht badi bat hai...
shukriya ji ise padhne mehsus karne aur sarahne k liye....


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Re: <>*Ghar ka Chiraag*<>

«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 07:57:48 PM »

hmmm.... taarif to main pehle ki kar chuka hoon aapke is kavita ki... ab bas yahi kahunga.. this is TRUE & TOUCHING....

aaj khoon ke rishton ki koi ehmiyat nahi hoti,
budhe maa baap ki santaan kabhi unki apni nahi hoti,

bachpan se jise paal poske bada karte hain,
wahi jarurat ke samay kabhi apni nahi hoti,

khud bhooke rehkar bachcho ko khana khilaate the,
aaj unhi maa baap ke muh me roti tak nahi hoti,

apni khushiyon ko alag rakhkar sab khushiyaan bachchon ko di,
aaj unhi maa baap ke hothon pe muskaan tak nahi hoti,

jis chiraag se apne ghar ko roshan karne ka socha tha,
aaj usi chiraag me unke liye raakh tak nahi hoti,

raaton ko jo jaag jaag kar bachchon ko sulaaya karte the,
aaj unki ki aankhon me chain ki neend tak nahi hoti,

arthi ko kaandha dene ke liye gairon ki madat leni padti hai,
kuch arthiyon ko apne bachchon ke haathon ki aag tak naseeb nahi hoti...


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Re: <>*Ghar ka Chiraag*<>

«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 08:02:25 PM »

Quote from: klaskar on August 15, 2010, 07:57:48 PM

hmmm.... taarif to main pehle ki kar chuka hoon aapke is kavita ki... ab bas yahi kahunga.. this is TRUE & TOUCHING....

ye padhke dil bhar aaya klaskar ji....aur aankhen na chahte hue bhi num ho gai...

sidhe sadhe shabdon me aaj ki hakikat keh gaye aap.....
dil ko chhu k bht gehre ehsas kara gai ye kavita aapki.....


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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2010, 08:07:06 PM »

Ji aaj ki sachchai hai ye to... par mujhe bilkul achcha nahi laga ki aapki aankh bhar aayi... maafi chahunga main... please forgive me.... mera aisa koi intension nahi tha.. main to bas aapke post ka reply dene ki koshish kar raha tha aur kuch jyaada hi depth me chala gaya... I am sorry Kasak ji...!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 15, 2010, 08:02:25 PM

ye padhke dil bhar aaya klaskar ji....aur aankhen na chahte hue bhi num ho gai...

sidhe sadhe shabdon me aaj ki hakikat keh gaye aap.....
dil ko chhu k bht gehre ehsas kara gai ye kavita aapki.....


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Re: <>*Ghar ka Chiraag*<>

«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2010, 07:22:10 AM »

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on August 15, 2010, 06:39:12 PM

Bahut Hi chubta Hua Topic Par Aapne Likha Hia Anamika Ji..

Har Lafz Sach ka Aaena Hai,Aur Aakhri sher mein aapne To Yehi bataya ke chaahe beta kaisa bhi ho, aakhri samay mein baap duawein hi deta hai..Hmmmmm..


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Re: <>*Ghar ka Chiraag*<>

«Reply #7 on: October 31, 2012, 09:11:27 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on August 16, 2010, 07:22:10 AM

khwaish ji.... sach to ye hi hai... beta chaahe jaisa bhi ho... maa baap use kabhi baddua nahin de sakte... aashirwad hi denge..


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