GHAR SE BHAAG JANE PE.......K@HIN@@R

by Kohinoor on June 24, 2012, 12:33:32 PM
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Wo kehta hai...
chlo yahaan se door chlte hain...
Hum kahin pe bhaag chalte hain..
Jahaan rausan njare hon...
Sitare hi sitare hon...
Wahaan kahin jheel kinare pe...
Ek aasiyaan ho hmara to...
Bahut hi khush rahenge hum..
Ek dooje k sng sdiyon ji lenge hum...
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Mgar nhi jaanta hai wo..
Aise door jane se
ghar se bhaag jane pe...
Bahut tkleef hoti hai...
Maa-baap ki aankhen to aansu khoon k roti hain...
Ghar ki laadli beti
mai sbko jaan se pyari...
Mohabbat ki to hai tumse
magar apno k pyar se hari...
Jra beemar jo ho jaun
mai agar chupchaap so janun..
To maa ko tkleef hoti hai...
Bdi muskil raat hoti hai..
Mujhe sine se chipkakar
mere mathe ko sehlakar...
Maa halke se kehti hain.
Bitiya theek ho jaao
chalo ab hske  dikhlaao...
To dil ko aaraam milta hai..
Bahut sukoon pati hoon
papa ki fikrmndi se..
Bhai k khyaal rkhne se...
Kbhi ldne jhagadne se..
Behan k sath milkar kitchen me khana bnate wqt
hzaron sararaten krna...
Baaton k beech me ldkar
ek dooje k chehre pe aata lga dena
aur fir der tk hsna
bda sukoon deta hai...
.
Bhla kaise mai chorun?
Ye riste jo hain pyare...
Chlna sikha hai mene,
jinki ungli k sahare...
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Mohabbat ka ye nhi mtlb
k ghar se bhaag hi jao..
Jinhone pala hai bchpn se,
unko chot pahunchao...
Mohabbat hogi agar sacchi
to mil hi jayenge...
Haan jheel kinare fir
hum apna aashiyana bnayenge...
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2012, 01:40:10 PM »
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Khoobsurat khayalaat aur bayaanee.
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«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2012, 01:49:35 PM »
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Bahut hi besqeemti aur khubsurat kalaam hai aapka dhero daad aur mubarakbad kohinoor jo...... Aur is rachna ke liye aaapko ek rau bhi.... icon_salut icon_salut
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«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2012, 02:00:18 PM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2012, 02:51:11 PM »
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bahut achha likah hai Kohinoor ji.
BARHE ACHHE SE BAYAN KI HAI KIYA HOTI HAIN BETIYAN
PARHKAR HAR MAAN BAAP KO ZAROOR YAAD AYENGI BETIYAN
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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2012, 03:06:20 PM »
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bahut sahi aur accha likha hai aapne kohinoor jee
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«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2012, 05:35:50 PM »
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waah waah waah waah waah wwah waah

samjh nahi aa raha kis shabd mai tarif karun
bohot KHOBSORRAT
sach mai dil se
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2012, 01:39:12 AM »
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Bohut khoob kohinoor jee achchi rachna hai. aaj kal naujwano ko zarur padhni chahiye ,,, Mubarakbad aur Daad qubool kijiye
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2012, 02:44:00 AM »
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BAhut Khub Kohinoor g Aache Khyaal Hain Mubarak ho
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2012, 05:24:52 AM »
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bahot hi umda khayaal hai, aksar jawaan log ishq ke sajeele andhepan me in zazbaaton ko tak par rakh kar nadaani kar lete hain aur baad me sochte hain ki ye humne kya kiya... bhala maa baap ka kya kasoor hai, unko sazaa kyun mile wo bhi sirf is lie ki unhone aapka saathi dhoondhne me itni der kar di ki aap pehle usko dil me panaah de baithe. well done !
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2012, 05:42:32 AM »
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god bless you my dear.
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2012, 06:19:56 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Kohinoor ji....!!!
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«Reply #12 on: July 24, 2012, 01:07:47 PM »
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Congratulation,

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