GULSHAN BANA DIYA : ZARRAA

by zarraa on May 24, 2014, 09:25:03 AM
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jaur-o-jafa ne dil ko jab aahan* bana diya
phir aatishoN ko hum ne bhi dhadkan bana diya

taareeki*-e-safar ne banaaya tha rehnuma
noor-e-maqaam ne unheiN rehzan bana diya

neeyat badal n jaaye jo munsif* ki ab kaheeN
daar-o-rasan pe hum ne nasheman bana diya

apni nazar se apni jo dekhi barahnagi*
apne hi pairahan ko ik utaran bana diya

maqtal si koyee jaa* meri hasti meiN thi nihaaN
aaNchal se kis ne poNchh ke aaNgan bana diya

chhorha n haajatoN ne bhi naata koyee nafees
dushman ko dost dost ko dushman bana diya

mushtaaq*-e-deed-e-jalwa thiiN aaNkheiN bahaut magar
mizhghaaN* ko us ke husn ne chilman bana diya

khilte haiN yooN to gul kayee fasl-e-bahaar meiN
ik baaghbaan ne unheiN gulshan bana diya

jaisa bhi tha wo wahm-o-gumaaN se to door tha
naaseh ne qaif-e-rind ko uljhan bana diya

"zarraa" hai chaak chaak garebaan apna par
ashqoN ke taar taar se daaman bana diya


- zarraa


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aahan = iron
taareki = darkness
munsif = judge
barahnagi = nakedness
jaa = place
mushtaaq = eager
mizhghaaN = eyelashes
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2014, 09:42:40 AM »
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Bahut Umda.
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2014, 04:31:38 PM »
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waah waah bohut umda daaad
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2014, 05:22:59 PM »
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waah waah bhot he umda
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«Reply #4 on: May 24, 2014, 07:14:57 PM »
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Waah janab. Khubsurat shairy ki misaal is ghazal ke liye dheron daad aur mubarakbaad . In ashaar ke liye khusoosi  mubarabaad :

neeyat badal n jaaye jo munsif* ki ab kaheeN
daar-o-rasan pe hum ne nasheman bana diya

chhorha n haajatoN ne bhi naata koyee nafees
dushman ko dost dost ko dushman bana diya

jaisa bhi tha wo wahm-o-gumaaN se to door tha
naaseh ne qaif-e-rind ko uljhan bana diya

 
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«Reply #5 on: May 24, 2014, 10:16:41 PM »
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JUST EXCELLENT waah waah
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«Reply #6 on: May 24, 2014, 10:19:38 PM »
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jaur-o-jafa ne dil ko jab aahan* bana diya
phir aatishoN ko hum ne bhi dhadkan bana diya

manzil ne raah-e-teera* ko roshan bana diya
aur rehbar-e-safar ko bhi rehzan bana diya

neeyat badal n jaaye jo munsif* ki ab kaheeN
daar-o-rasan pe hum ne nasheman bana diya

apni nazar se apni jo dekhi barahnagi*
apne hi pairahan ko ik utaran bana diya

maqtal si koyee jaa* meri hasti meiN thi nihaaN
aaNchal se kis ne poNchh ke aaNgan bana diya

chhorha n haajatoN ne bhi naata koyee nafees
dushman ko dost dost ko dushman bana diya

mushtaaq*-e-deed-e-jalwa thiiN aaNkheiN bahaut magar
mizhghaaN* ko us ke husn ne chilman bana diya

khilte haiN yooN to gul kayee fasl-e-bahaar meiN
ik baaghbaan ne unheiN gulshan bana diya

jaisa bhi tha wo wahm-o-gumaaN se to door tha
naaseh ne qaif-e-rind ko uljhan bana diya

"zarraa" hai chaak chaak garebaan apna par
ashqoN ke taar taar se daaman bana diya
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behatreen peshkash zarra ji
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad kubool karein
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«Reply #7 on: May 25, 2014, 01:24:38 AM »
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mushtaaq*-e-deed-e-jalwa thiiN aaNkheiN bahaut magar
mizhghaaN* ko us ke husn ne chilman bana diya

Bahut badhiya Zarra saheb
lajavaab ghazal
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Bahut Umda.


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waah waah bohut umda daaad

Shukriya Jeet Jainam ji
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waah waah bhot he umda

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«Reply #12 on: May 27, 2014, 09:57:23 PM »
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Hasan sahab, aap ki mohabbat aur khuloos se bhari pazirai ka behad mashqoor o mamnoon hoon. aap ki hausla afzai se iraadon ko taaqat miltee hai. Aap ka tah e dil se shukrguzaar hoon.


Quote from: F.H.SIDDIQUI on May 24, 2014, 07:14:57 PM
Waah janab. Khubsurat shairy ki misaal is ghazal ke liye dheron daad aur mubarakbaad . In ashaar ke liye khusoosi  mubarabaad :

neeyat badal n jaaye jo munsif* ki ab kaheeN
daar-o-rasan pe hum ne nasheman bana diya

chhorha n haajatoN ne bhi naata koyee nafees
dushman ko dost dost ko dushman bana diya

jaisa bhi tha wo wahm-o-gumaaN se to door tha
naaseh ne qaif-e-rind ko uljhan bana diya

 
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JUST EXCELLENT waah waah




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