Har baarish ki bund uski yad dilta hai...

by brokenbyluv on April 03, 2010, 01:29:12 PM
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Dil mein ek hulchul si hai jaani pehchaani si,
ek dhadkan ho rahi diwani si,

kiski yad se in ankho mein barsaat ho rahi hai,
jaise kahiin door merri jaan ro rahi hai,

kyun dil men reh reh kar ek dard uthta hai,
kyun merre dil ka kona kona dukhta hai,

kahiin merra pyar udaas tou nhi,
merre aane ki kisi ko aas tou nhi,

dil ki gehraiyo mein uski yade ubharti hai,
aur inhi yado mein zindgi guzarti hai,

dil ko behelane k liye cheeze tou bahut khaas hai,
magar dukh iss baat ka hai ki kambakht dil tou uske paas hai,

dil k bina shayad ji lenge,
zindgi ka zeher pi lenge,

vo naa mila tou marr jayenge,
uski chaht k liye kya kuch naa kar jayenge,

uski ankho mein naa gussa hai naa pyar hai,
naa inkar hai naa ikraar hai,
naa vo dushman hai naa yaar hai,

din mahine saal guzaare nhi guzarte,
jane kya baat hai unme vo hamare dil se nhi utarte,

jitni chaho kam karne ki mhbt badhti hi jati hai,
har baarish ki bund uski yad dilati hai,

dil ko samjhana hai per kaise,
use bhulana hai per kaise,
chalo maana k use bhool bhi gye tou bhi..
YE SAB MITANA HAI PER KAISE?....?


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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2010, 01:34:28 PM »
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"Dil Ko Behlaane Ke Liye Cheeze To bahut Khaas Hai
magar Dukh To iss Baat ka Hai Ke kambakth Dil To uske Paas Hai"...

Waah Waah Waah.....

Bahut bahut Khooob Geetji..Bahut Hi khooobsurat peshkash..

Tooooo Goood Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2010, 02:05:31 PM »
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Tahe dil se shukriya khwaish ji n shihab ji...
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2010, 04:20:27 PM »
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Bahut sunder kavita likhi hai Geet ji. Dard ki intiha ismein numaaya.n hoti hai. Nice creation. Ye do lines mujhe sabse achhi lagi.n.

kyun dil men reh reh kar ek dard uthta hai,
kyun merre dil ka kona kona dukhta hai,
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2010, 05:08:53 PM »
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WAhh Khwish ji Gud reply !!!!
"Dil Ko Behlaane Ke Liye Cheeze To bahut Khaas Hai
magar Dukh To iss Baat ka Hai Ke kambakth Dil To uske Paas Hai"...

Waah Waah Waah.....

Bahut bahut Khooob Geetji..Bahut Hi khooobsurat peshkash..

Tooooo Goood Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2010, 05:10:38 PM »
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Very nyc creation..... Gud work!!!!!!!
Dil mein ek hulchul si hai jaani pehchaani si,
ek dhadkan ho rahi diwani si,

kiski yad se in ankho mein barsaat ho rahi hai,
jaise kahiin door merri jaan ro rahi hai,

kyun dil men reh reh kar ek dard uthta hai,
kyun merre dil ka kona kona dukhta hai,

kahiin merra pyar udaas tou nhi,
merre aane ki kisi ko aas tou nhi,

dil ki gehraiyo mein uski yade ubharti hai,
aur inhi yado mein zindgi guzarti hai,

dil ko behelane k liye cheeze tou bahut khaas hai,
magar dukh iss baat ka hai ki kambakht dil tou uske paas hai,

dil k bina shayad ji lenge,
zindgi ka zeher pi lenge,

vo naa mila tou marr jayenge,
uski chaht k liye kya kuch naa kar jayenge,

uski ankho mein naa gussa hai naa pyar hai,
naa inkar hai naa ikraar hai,
naa vo dushman hai naa yaar hai,

din mahine saal guzaare nhi guzarte,
jane kya baat hai unme vo hamare dil se nhi utarte,

jitni chaho kam karne ki mhbt badhti hi jati hai,
har baarish ki bund uski yad dilati hai,

dil ko samjhana hai per kaise,
use bhulana hai per kaise,
chalo maana k use bhool bhi gye tou bhi..
YE SAB MITANA HAI PER KAISE?....?



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«Reply #6 on: April 03, 2010, 06:11:36 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya neel ji n riyaz ji...
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«Reply #7 on: April 03, 2010, 11:51:14 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Geet ji. Bahut dard hai isme. Jo tadap hai is kavita me use main apne shabdon me bata nahi sakta. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Koshish ki hai maine bhi do chaar panktiyaan likhne ki...

mitana to hai par asaan na hoga mohabbat mitana,
samjhega ye dil nahi aur na aasaan hoga tujhe bhulana,

is ghadi tujhe yaad karke aa raha hai humko to rona,
aaj teri yaad me hai ho raha ye dil deewana,

kaash tu ne ek baar mujhse kaha hota rukne ko,
aa main jaata paas tere hota na koi bahana,

tab tujhe ehsaas na tha, pyaar kya hai na ye pata tha,
aaj jab meri hai nahi tu, gunaah hai tera yaad aana,

dard leke dil diya tha, pyaar bas tujhi se kiya tha,
chhod k tu gayi hai jabse, sunsaan lagta hai zamana,

isliye to kehta hoon aaj, baahon me mere tu aaja,
rok na khud ko tu yun, main hoon tera ashiq purana,

dil hai mera, dard mera, ghum hain mere, hum hain tere,
laut aa mere paas tu, chhod de mujhko satana...
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2010, 09:14:27 AM »
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Bahut khoob bbl ji......behad pyari peshkash...... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Khwaish ji khoob kha aapne....... Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2010, 09:21:07 AM »
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Bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Geet ji. Bahut dard hai isme. Jo tadap hai is kavita me use main apne shabdon me bata nahi sakta. Bahut khoob likha hai aapne.  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Koshish ki hai maine bhi do chaar panktiyaan likhne ki...

mitana to hai par asaan na hoga mohabbat mitana,
samjhega ye dil nahi aur na aasaan hoga tujhe bhulana,

is ghadi tujhe yaad karke aa raha hai humko to rona,
aaj teri yaad me hai ho raha ye dil deewana,

kaash tu ne ek baar mujhse kaha hota rukne ko,
aa main jaata paas tere hota na koi bahana,

tab tujhe ehsaas na tha, pyaar kya hai na ye pata tha,
aaj jab meri hai nahi tu, gunaah hai tera yaad aana,

dard leke dil diya tha, pyaar bas tujhi se kiya tha,
chhod k tu gayi hai jabse, sunsaan lagta hai zamana,

isliye to kehta hoon aaj, baahon me mere tu aaja,
rok na khud ko tu yun, main hoon tera ashiq purana,

dil hai mera, dard mera, ghum hain mere, hum hain tere,
laut aa mere paas tu, chhod de mujhko satana...

Bahut khoob likha klaskar ji......bahut khoob.... Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2010, 09:26:30 AM »
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Too good Geet ji and Kapil ji.really touched.great creation.excellent. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2010, 10:06:35 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley  Applause  Applause  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2010, 07:15:25 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya Nikhaar ji...!!!

Bahut khoob likha klaskar ji......bahut khoob.... Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2010, 07:16:04 PM »
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Thanx a lot Madhu ji... many many thanx...!!!

Too good Geet ji and Kapil ji.really touched.great creation.excellent. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: April 04, 2010, 07:16:49 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kaash ji...!!!

bahut khoob likha hai BBL ji  Applause Applause Applause Applause
Klaskar ji nice lines  Applause Applause Applause
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