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qalb
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I TRIED TO WRITE SOMETHING INSPIRED BY RESPECTED DR. S.K SAINI'S GHAZAL ( INN DINO.N)
hain naazuk halaat inn dino.n.
uthte kayee sawalaat in dino.n.
abb to matlab azaadee ka na raha.
hain khamosh khayalaat inn dino.n.
sunaa thaa aaye gee qayaamat ek din.
hotee usse roz mulaqaat in dino.n.
hain ek hee 'kheme'ke dono magar.
rakhte mokhtalif jawabaat inn dino.n.
daulat ke shor ke aage abb toh.
pahuchtee nahin koee baat inn dino.n.
zindagee ke masle mein aise uljhe.
kat tee nahin koee raat inn dino.n.
naye zamaane ke bachcho ke aage.
hai maamoolee her saugaat inn dino.n.
rahe khushq phir bhee gulistaan apne.
hai kaisee ye barsaat inn dino.n.
lafzo.n ke farq se qatl pe aamaada hue.
rahe kahaan gazal mein jazbaat inn dino.n.
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qalb(HEART)
I.I.T KHARAGPUR ROAD.
INDIA 
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F.H.SIDDIQUI
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2012, 10:26:52 AM » |
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pankajwfs
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2012, 10:39:02 AM » |
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bahut khub kaha qalb ji aapne mujhe bhi kuch kehna hai is par gour farmaiye ga :
AjeemoN ki har baat sar ankho per.
Bade talkh hai unke andaz in dino.
Khatawar hain hum nadaaN hain.
Unki nasihat ke hain talabgaar in dino.
Sahi kehte hai ki nahi jajba koi sukhan me.
Bahut tang hain khayalaat in dino.
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sksaini4
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2012, 11:22:14 AM » |
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aapne meree ghazal se inspire hokar ek talkh sachhaai bayaab kee hai meraa kahnaa kaamyaab hua.aapke is kalaam par dheron daad haazir hain.arz hai apnee pasandeedaa taaliyaan ek baar fir meree post par bajaa deejiye
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sarfira
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2012, 11:34:10 AM » |
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waah qalb ji--
kya kamaal ki ghazal kahi aapne
daad daad daad
ab to mera bhi khoon khaulne laga hai
likh jaana chahta hun kuch baat in dino
tukdon me hans lie bahot magar
miltee nahi ab khairaat inn dino
kaatee hain raaten bahut si tanhaiyon me
dhund raha hoon apno ka saugaat inn dino
taraano me doobte hain beraham bhi
hue patthar se ab pighalte nahi zazbaat inn dino
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iss par bad me kuch try krunga mai
aajkl to kuch likhne ka mnn hi nhi hota
khus rahie
muskurate rahie
likhte rahie
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mkv
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2012, 05:25:30 PM » |
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Bahut khoob qalb ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2012, 06:17:42 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: February 18, 2012, 10:34:39 PM » |
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bahut khoob.
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«Reply #11 on: February 21, 2012, 03:28:41 AM » |
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boht khoob janab
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on eTI community..
