its ok

by killbill on November 27, 2010, 09:35:14 AM
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bahte ashq ab
sukh chale hain
       apne saare wo
       ruth chale hain
bhari nehfil me
tanha hue
        ghanto me ik
         lamha hue
ik sachh ki murat thi
wo bhi fareb ki surat hue
     zidd thi akele
     ladne ki
     zid thi akele
      chalne ki
                 zidd se ziddi
                 bahut ziddi hue
   bhatak gaye ab
   raahon me
   hawa bhi na aye
   ab bahon me
        kami sabhi ki
        khalti hai ab
        saaya bhi saath
         na chalti hai ab
behte ashq ab
sukh chle h    
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«Reply #1 on: November 27, 2010, 09:47:03 AM »
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 sad5 sad5 sad11 sad11 sad5 sad5
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«Reply #2 on: November 27, 2010, 09:58:21 AM »
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khoob...kb ji... likhet rahiye..

dher saari daad~
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«Reply #3 on: November 27, 2010, 10:01:09 AM »
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Its ok....
Jaan lo tum jeevan ki yahi sachai hai.....
Har dil mai basi yahi tanhaayi hai....

Tu kya yahaan
Har shaqs ne dee dard kee duhaayi hai....
Birle hain jinko mohbbat raas aayi hai....

Tu naa kar gam apne sukhe ashqon ka....
Kar intezaar bahaaron k laut aane ka....
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«Reply #4 on: November 27, 2010, 10:09:02 AM »
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Abhi ji, Koyal ji aap dono ka behad sukriya or koyal ji aapne kya khoob kha ' intezaar kar baharon ke laut aane ka'...bhot shukriya.
Kasak ji...aapko kya ho gay?Huh?
thanx for ur Taaliyan
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2010, 12:02:50 PM »
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Abhi ji---aapne ab tak hume Gur-e-gyan likhne ka nhi dia..

very bad..
sad5sad5sad5
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