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by bekarar on September 27, 2008, 09:31:51 AM
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khushboo si fir aane lagi, sukhe gulab me,
dekha hai maine aaj use, shab-e-mahtaab me,

ashqon ka mere wo jab, hisaab puchne laga,
aur ek aansun dhalka, iske jawab me,

mere gumon ke kisse, aur muskaan sitamgar ki,
mai bhi hans diya fir iske jawab me,

kaisi wafadaari aur kaise ehasaan miyan,
chounka diya mujhe, usake jawab ne,

mai khaak chanta raha, jiski talash me
mere hi dil me mil gaya, ek din sabab me
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«Reply #1 on: September 27, 2008, 09:50:17 AM »
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wah kaya baat hai, bahoot khoob Bekarar ji!!
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2008, 09:58:46 AM »
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shukriya pooja ji....lagta hai aaj bhi jaldi me hain aap....kuch do char line likh detin
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2008, 10:16:11 AM »
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wo aaya to gile bhul gaya, shikwe nahi rahe,
soch tha ab na aaunga mai, uske ruaab me,

ruthe hi rahte wo gar, na kahta unse mai,
har raat wo aate rahe hain, mere khwab me,

ab unka jikr kya karun, kya unpe mai kahun,
rusva kare jo ishq ko, doobo ke sharab me
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2008, 10:38:37 AM »
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chup rahta mai bhi to kabhi lagti nahi khabar
wo sab jo wo suna gaya, mujhko jawab me,

jo rahnuma bane hain tere, kabhi mere saath the,
beparda ho chuke hain, aaj baithe naqab me


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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2008, 10:41:55 AM »
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wah wah wah kaya baat hai Bekarar ji bahoot khoob!!! bahoot acha likh rahe hai app!!!
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2008, 10:44:31 AM »
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 Thankyou !
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2008, 10:57:02 AM »
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 Applause   Applause  Applause
BAHUT KHOOB BROTHER...
SACH ME KYA BAHUT UMDA LINES LIKHTE
HAI AAP...
BY. K.SHAEL

USNE POOCHA JAB HAAL-E-DIL MERA,
KHOON KE AANSOO BAHA DIYE JAWAB ME,

POOCHI JO USNE MERE KHAWABO KI RAWANI,
CHAND KI TARAF UNGLI KAR KAHA ISSE BAAT
KARKE GUJAR RAHI HAI MERI JAWANI...
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2008, 10:59:37 AM »
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shukriya shally
aur bahoot khoob likha tumhe bhi..


har panne pe hai dard aur kissa-e-bewafai
sab kuch milega mere, dil ki kitaab me,

na poocho ki ye dard kaisa, ye muskaane kiski,
kamjor hi raha hua mai, thoda hisaab me
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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2008, 11:01:35 AM »
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Bahut Bahut khoob Bekararji.. Applause Applause

Bhool Jaao hume,
khush rehna seekhlo tanhai me

Do Aansu hum bhi ro lenge
Waqt ki iss bewafai me

Dard is baat ka nahi ke,
hum saath na reh sake,
Dil toothta hai uss waqt,
jab pyaar ka gharonda bikhra
Gairo ke aashnai me..
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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2008, 11:04:12 AM »
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SHUKRIYA BROTHER...
& BAHUT AACHA LIKHA KHAWAISH JI,


KHOOL KAR RAKHI JO DIL KI KITAAB
SAMNE USKE,KEHNE LAGE YE LAGTA HAI
BHEEGI HUI HAI ISKE PANNO ME HAI
JAISE THEHRA PAANI...

MUSKURA KAR RO-BRO KARWAYA UNHE APNE
AANSOO SE, JINHE KEH RAHE THE WO PAANI,

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«Reply #11 on: September 27, 2008, 11:13:20 AM »
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Bahut Bahut khoob Bekararji.. Applause Applause

Bhool Jaao hume,
khush rehna seekhlo tanhai me

Do Aansu hum bhi ro lenge
Waqt ki iss bewafai me

Dard is baat ka nahi ke,
hum saath na reh sake,
Dil toothta hai uss waqt,
jab pyaar ka gharonda bikhra
Gairo ke aashnai me..


shukriya khwaish ji,
aapne bhi khoob likha.....

SHUKRIYA BROTHER...
& BAHUT AACHA LIKHA KHAWAISH JI,


KHOOL KAR RAKHI JO DIL KI KITAAB
SAMNE USKE,KEHNE LAGE YE LAGTA HAI
BHEEGI HUI HAI ISKE PANNO ME HAI
JAISE THEHRA PAANI...

MUSKURA KAR RO-BRO KARWAYA UNHE APNE
AANSOO SE, JINHE KEH RAHE THE WO PAANI,



again good one shally..wah

aashiyana funka mera, mai boot bana raha
humdardon ne madad ka mujhe haath na diya,
meri hansi se hairan, unko khabar hai kya
dil roya bahoot, ashqon ne mera saath na diya
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«Reply #12 on: September 27, 2008, 11:16:51 AM »
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SHUKRIYA BROTHER...
KYA KHOOB LINES LIKHI HAI
AAPNE...

AASHIAANE KO THOKAR DI WO BIKHAR
GAYA,SOCHA KAASH MUJHE BHI U EK
THOKAR DETE TO BIKHAR JATI,NA U
UNKE INTZAAR ME PAL-PAL MARTI NA
U TANHAI ME DIL KE GAMO KO GUNGUNATI...
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«Reply #13 on: September 27, 2008, 11:24:59 AM »
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once again nice one shally...

mai chup hi rah gaya, wo bolta raha,
raz-e-ishq sar-e-aam kholta raha,
bada pakka nikla, wo kambakht hisaab me,
mere ashqon ko, apni hansi se tolata raha
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«Reply #14 on: September 27, 2008, 11:32:49 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB BROTHER,
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YE LINES TO DIL KO CHOO GAYI,

GUNNAH KARKE WO KHUD HAME GUNEHGAAR
BATA GAYA,DEKHO TO ZARA MERE YAAR KI
KI KAMYAABI WO DIL PAIROON SE TOD KAR
HAATH ME PAKDA GAYA...
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