Jise samjha apni Dunia

by Pooja on February 07, 2010, 08:38:03 AM
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Berukhi apno se mile to pathar bhi haar jaata hai
dil ka aaina hota hai najuk, ankho mai aai berukhi se bikhar jaata hai

Arzu-e-tamanna kabhi bhi ban nahi sakti haqiqat
jis rishte main ansoo ka baadal bhara chala jaata hai

her teekhi dhoop mai aor badalti hawa mai sath de de
per kaya kare sathi, jab sathi ka rasta he samjh nahi atta hai

ek lahze mai ruthoge, hazar lahazo main mana lege tujhko
ab to is baat se bhi yakin sa uth.ta chala jaata hai

zamane ke kab parwah kari is dil ne
magar afsos, jise samjha apni dunia, wo he insaan badlta jaata hai....
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2010, 09:14:30 AM »
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Berukhi apno se mile to pathar bhi haar jaata hai
dil ka aaina hota hai najuk, ankho mai aai berukhi se bikhar jaata hai

Arzu-e-tamanna kabhi bhi ban nahi sakti haqiqat
jis rishte main ansoo ka baadal bhara chala jaata hai

her teekhi dhoop mai aor badalti hawa mai sath de de
per kaya kare sathi, jab sathi ka rasta he samjh nahi atta hai

ek lahze mai ruthoge, hazar lahazo main mana lege tukhko
ab to is baat se bhi yakin sa uth.ta chala jaata hai

zamane ke kab parwah kari is dil ne
magar afsos, jise samjha apni dunia, wo he insaan badlta jaata hai....

Khoobsurat Pooja Ji, behad achchhe ehsaas...Keep on
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2010, 01:43:18 PM »
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Simply Terrific Pooja di.. Bahoot Bahoot khoob!
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2010, 03:07:24 PM »
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mindblowing pooja di..
 
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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2010, 03:42:27 PM »
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Wah wah kya baat hai Pooja didi.. Applause Applause


Choti koshish.... hamari taraf se. hope u dont mind


Baat meri nahi maani, nahi maani tumne
Jee mein jo baat basi thi vohi taani tumne

Mera kya baat kahi aur lagaa apni raah
Apne aage kisi ki baat na jaani tumne

Baat bigadi to bigadti hi gayi, ban na saki
Tokkar lagaya usne, jisko samja apna tumne

Maan voh vastu nahi hai jo tumhari hi ho,
Aur bi dekhe hai mann ke kayi maani tumne

Saadna kya hai "Malli" ka, tumhe maloom hi hai, Pooja
Dekhte bhi ho, suni bi hai kahani tumne..

 
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«Reply #5 on: February 08, 2010, 08:12:40 AM »
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badhia bahut khoob likha hai Malli ji aapne bhi

shayad tuk na bane par apni samajh ke anusar kuch likh raha hun
zindagi pe as Pooja ji posted in zindagi forum

khush rahte hain hum to gham me rona acha nahi
zindagi me gham hai hi nahi,ise na manna acha nahi


dil ko dard ka daria banana acha nahi
khud ko fizool kosna bhi acha nahi

zindagi me bahut zindagi dikhti hai bus
apna haq apni khushi se hatana acha nahi

apno ko kho dene ka dar ho to phir vo apna kaisa
doston zindagi me dosti se katrana acha nahi

dosti hi to hai jisme hum bhi jhoome tarane bhi
apna dil dukhake doston ka dil dukhana acha nahi

zindagi kya hai sivaay zindadili ke
khushi jo aaye hothon pe use lautana acha nahi


Wah @kaash ji kya baat hai. bahut sahi jawab mila...

mai bi kuch jawab mein pesh karna chahti hu.....  icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: February 08, 2010, 08:17:44 AM »
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Band jeevan yugon ka toota hai
Dil ko to tootna tha toota hai

Khoya kisne kahan-kahan kya-kya
Kisne aage badkar mehfil mein kehta hai

Apna hai maante ho kisko tum
Voh tumhara hi jeevan haraam karta hai

Baat kehne ko keh gaye hum bhi
Peeche chathi ko apni koota hai

Tumse hai aur unse hai jo kadvapan
Baat ka yeh tanaav jhoota hai..

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«Reply #7 on: February 08, 2010, 03:38:37 PM »
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BAHUT KHUB POOJA JI

BAHUT SUNDER RESPONSE MALLI JI AND KASH JI
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«Reply #8 on: February 11, 2010, 03:52:23 AM »
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Berukhi apno se mile to pathar bhi haar jaata hai
dil ka aaina hota hai najuk, ankho mai aai berukhi se bikhar jaata hai

Arzu-e-tamanna kabhi bhi ban nahi sakti haqiqat
jis rishte main ansoo ka baadal bhara chala jaata hai

her teekhi dhoop mai aor badalti hawa mai sath de de
per kaya kare sathi, jab sathi ka rasta he samjh nahi atta hai

ek lahze mai ruthoge, hazar lahazo main mana lege tujhko
ab to is baat se bhi yakin sa uth.ta chala jaata hai

zamane ke kab parwah kari is dil ne
magar afsos, jise samjha apni dunia, wo he insaan badlta jaata hai....


Very sad and touching creation Pooja...Har lafz se dard chalak raha hai aur dil ko chhu raha hai.
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«Reply #9 on: February 11, 2010, 03:53:51 AM »
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Very good work Roja dear and Kaash Ji
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«Reply #10 on: February 11, 2010, 03:55:56 AM »
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Bahut bahut khoob Pooja ji.really touched.lovely creation.great lines by Kaash ji n Mali ji.excellent
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«Reply #11 on: April 29, 2010, 12:27:53 PM »
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Berukhi apno se mile to pathar bhi haar jaata hai
dil ka aaina hota hai najuk, ankho mai aai berukhi se bikhar jaata hai

Arzu-e-tamanna kabhi bhi ban nahi sakti haqiqat
jis rishte main ansoo ka baadal bhara chala jaata hai

her teekhi dhoop mai aor badalti hawa mai sath de de
per kaya kare sathi, jab sathi ka rasta he samjh nahi atta hai

ek lahze mai ruthoge, hazar lahazo main mana lege tujhko
ab to is baat se bhi yakin sa uth.ta chala jaata hai

zamane ke kab parwah kari is dil ne
magar afsos, jise samjha apni dunia, wo he insaan badlta jaata hai....


Bahut bahut Khoob Pooja..

Dil Ko Chuu lene Wale Jazbaat Hai Aapke Iss Peshkash Mein..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: May 22, 2010, 05:38:02 PM »
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Berukhi apno se mile to pathar bhi haar jaata hai
dil ka aaina hota hai najuk, ankho mai aai berukhi se bikhar jaata hai

Arzu-e-tamanna kabhi bhi ban nahi sakti haqiqat
jis rishte main ansoo ka baadal bhara chala jaata hai

her teekhi dhoop mai aor badalti hawa mai sath de de
per kaya kare sathi, jab sathi ka rasta he samjh nahi atta hai

ek lahze mai ruthoge, hazar lahazo main mana lege tujhko
ab to is baat se bhi yakin sa uth.ta chala jaata hai

zamane ke kab parwah kari is dil ne
magar afsos, jise samjha apni dunia, wo he insaan badlta jaata hai....


wah wah pooja ji
khoobsurat panktiyaan...
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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2010, 06:17:02 PM »
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Berukhi apno se mile to pathar bhi haar jaata hai
dil ka aaina hota hai najuk, ankho mai aai berukhi se bikhar jaata hai

Arzu-e-tamanna kabhi bhi ban nahi sakti haqiqat
jis rishte main ansoo ka baadal bhara chala jaata hai

her teekhi dhoop mai aor badalti hawa mai sath de de
per kaya kare sathi, jab sathi ka rasta he samjh nahi atta hai

ek lahze mai ruthoge, hazar lahazo main mana lege tujhko
ab to is baat se bhi yakin sa uth.ta chala jaata hai

zamane ke kab parwah kari is dil ne
magar afsos, jise samjha apni dunia, wo he insaan badlta jaata hai....


bahut hi umda likha hai apne pooja ji...
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