khali jeb

by bekarar on May 05, 2011, 07:52:37 AM
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faka-kashi me bhi housale jawan rakhte hain,
khali jebon me bhar ke aasman rakhte hain,

khone ke liye kuch bhi ab paas nahi jinke,
wahi sirfire thokron me ye jahan rakhte hain

फाका-कशी मे भी हौसले जवान रखते हैं,
खाली जेबों मे भर के आसमान रखते हैं,

खोने के लिए कुछ भी अब पास नही जिनके,
वही सिरफिरे ठोकरों मे ये जहान रखते हैं
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«Reply #1 on: May 05, 2011, 08:09:53 AM »
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faka-kashi me bhi housale jawan rakhte hain,
khali jebon me bhar ke aasman rakhte hain,

khone ke liye kuch bhi ab paas nahi jinke,
wahi sirfire thokron me ye jahan rakhte hain

फाका-कशी मे भी हौसले जवान रखते हैं,
खाली जेबों मे भर के आसमान रखते हैं,

खोने के लिए कुछ भी अब पास नही जिनके,
वही सिरफिरे ठोकरों मे ये जहान रखते हैं


bahut khoob . ise ek moqammal ghazal ki shakal dein to aur bhi acha
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«Reply #2 on: May 05, 2011, 08:48:26 AM »
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bekarar bhai…
kya kamaal ki baat kahi aapne…
jabardast ……
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«Reply #3 on: May 05, 2011, 08:55:03 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Sanjeev Bro..
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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2011, 06:51:38 PM »
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shukriya sheba ji, KB aur khwaish bro  Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2011, 09:15:39 AM »
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faka-kashi me bhi housale jawan rakhte hain,
khali jebon me bhar ke aasman rakhte hain,

khone ke liye kuch bhi ab paas nahi jinke,
wahi sirfire thokron me ye jahan rakhte hain

फाका-कशी मे भी हौसले जवान रखते हैं,
खाली जेबों मे भर के आसमान रखते हैं,

खोने के लिए कुछ भी अब पास नही जिनके,
वही सिरफिरे ठोकरों मे ये जहान रखते हैं


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