~ *Khamoshi* ~_DeV

by thinkhattk on August 05, 2010, 08:41:17 AM
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Chen se soo raha he jamana, our ham khamosh he,

Iman par he nishana, our ham khamosh he,

Julm ke samane he zukav, our ham khamosh he,

Marr gaya he aadmi, our ham khamosh he....
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2010, 09:18:35 AM »
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Devangi ji... bahut khoob...!!!

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khaamoshi ka hi ye asar ho raha hai,
zinda hai aadmi, imaan mar raha hai,
imaan ko kaudiyon ke bhaaw bekh ke,
aadmi hi hai jo mauj kar raha hai...

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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2010, 09:32:36 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2010, 12:23:49 PM »
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Bahot khoob Think ji. Achhi poem likhi hai. (duplicate post are merged)
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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2010, 01:12:46 PM »
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khaamosh rehna aaj ki majburi hai
ye har aadmi ki kamjori hai
kuchal rahe hain bete maa baap k armaan
fir bhi mata pita ka khamosh rehna laazmi hai
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2010, 01:54:03 PM »
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sabhi tahe dil se bahot bahot sukriya.... notworthy
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«Reply #7 on: August 06, 2010, 01:28:10 PM »
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WAH WAH WAH....Su waat chhe Dev...Bahuj saras... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Khamosh Rehke Khamoshiyo Ne
Hum sab Se Kuch Keh Diya
Tu Bhi Sakhee khamosh Thee
Hum Bhee sab khamosh Rahe 
Par Haste Haste aaj 'DEV'
Dekh sakhee Tune Kya Keh diya.....





Chen se soo raha he jamana, our ham khamosh he,

Iman par he nishana, our ham khamosh he,

Julm ke samane he zukav, our ham khamosh he,

Marr gaya he aadmi, our ham khamosh he....
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«Reply #8 on: August 06, 2010, 05:23:05 PM »
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 hello :thumbup:welldon you righting is very well i hope you always written sayri ok bay and good night. love9 love4 Feared. icon_flower
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«Reply #9 on: August 07, 2010, 08:40:23 AM »
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thanku

hello :thumbup:welldon you righting is very well i hope you always written sayri ok bay and good night. love9 love4 Feared. icon_flower
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«Reply #10 on: August 07, 2010, 11:53:30 AM »
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Chen se soo raha he jamana, our ham khamosh he,

Iman par he nishana, our ham khamosh he,

Julm ke samane he zukav, our ham khamosh he,

Marr gaya he aadmi, our ham khamosh he....


BAHUT KHOOB THK
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«Reply #11 on: August 07, 2010, 12:32:44 PM »
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sukriya....k_a ji...


BAHUT KHOOB THK
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«Reply #12 on: August 18, 2010, 10:38:24 AM »
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Wah wah thinkhattk ji, aik achchhi tehreer se nawaaza aapne, paRhkar fikr ko taazgi mili. Daad qubul kijiye.

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Chen se soo raha he jamana, our ham khamosh he,

Iman par he nishana, our ham khamosh he,

Julm ke samane he zukav, our ham khamosh he,

Marr gaya he aadmi, our ham khamosh he....
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«Reply #13 on: August 18, 2010, 10:41:24 AM »
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su vaat chhe boss, ek dam saras lakhyu chhe... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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