Kharidaar nahi milte

by bekarar on September 24, 2008, 08:38:54 AM
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"sachche soude" ki liye ab yahan, bazar nahi milte,
sachchai aur imandaari ke, kharidaar nahi milte,

mere anjaam se be-khabr, kuch log kah gaye,
ab "ranjha, majnoo" se ishq ke, talab gar nahi milte,

"nav-ratno" ka sa ilm rakhte hai ab bhi log par
unhe akbar jaise shahnshaon ke, darbaar nahi milte,

mai roya shiddat se aur chalka aasman bhi,
log kahte hain ab "baiju bawara" se, funkaar nahi milte

masroof yun rahte hain wo paraye shagal me,
ghar loutate hain to khud ke hi, ghar-baar nahi milte,

beshaq hai kai katlon ka iljaam unke sar,
kaatil jo haathon me liye, tlawar nahi milte,

tirachi nigaah ka asar, ghayal hue kai,
hasinaon ke paas ab ye, hathiyaar nahi milte

us raste ko sahee samjhne ka guman na karna dost
jis rah pe sirf gul milen, aur khwar nahi milte

tasalli si de gaye, dushmano ke ye bayaan
tum jaise raqib jindagi me har-baar nahi milte

sare aam numaish gunahon ki, saaqi-sharab ki
Ab "Bekarar" se sidhe sade, gunahgaar nahi milte
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2008, 10:06:20 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

wah wah wah kaya baat hai Bekarar ji, bahoot khoob
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«Reply #2 on: September 24, 2008, 11:00:54 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Sanjeevji.. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 24, 2008, 01:25:19 PM »
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shukriya pooja ji aur..khwaish ji

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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2008, 07:28:13 PM »
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Masha Allaah... Bahut hi khoob... Sanjeev ji..

Har sher mein tanz hai, zindagi ko bahut khoob jaana, pehchaana hai aapne... Yeh Aapki shayari se saaf jhalakta hai..   notworthy
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«Reply #5 on: September 25, 2008, 07:49:24 PM »
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Masha Allaah... Bahut hi khoob... Sanjeev ji..

Har sher mein tanz hai, zindagi ko bahut khoob jaana, pehchaana hai aapne... Yeh Aapki shayari se saaf jhalakta hai..   notworthy

shukriya ji aapka......aapki nazar
likhne se kiye touba, wo baithe hain sochkar,
ab aap jaise padhne wale dildaar nahi milte,
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«Reply #6 on: September 25, 2008, 08:01:19 PM »
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ha ha ha... Sahi hai... Usual Smile


Bus tanaakashi reh gayi zubaan mein,
Nafrat mein dhal gayi suron ki mehfil,
Ukhdi si dhhun kehti hai aksar humse,
Ab logo ke dilon ke taar nahin milte...
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«Reply #7 on: September 25, 2008, 08:26:49 PM »
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bahoot khoooob shikha...................

aaj bhi taiyaar hai mere desh ke jawan
aivaz me "deshprem" ke mange to lahoo koi,
katra na mil saka to fir kahna pada mujhe
neta ab "subhash chandra bose" se asardaar nahi milte
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«Reply #8 on: September 26, 2008, 12:29:09 PM »
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muskarahen sounp de, badle me dard ke,
ab aise ishq ke talabgaar nahi milte,
galatiyan sare aam jo kahen "bekarar" se,
dushman to milte hain kai par yaar nahi milte



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«Reply #9 on: September 26, 2008, 12:32:17 PM »
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kal kisi dost se phone pe baat ho rahi thi poocha maine kahan ho to jawab aaya "Bazar me" maine kaha bazar me kya kar rahe ho...jawab aaya "bikane ko aaya hun kharidaar nahi milte" khair baat aayi gai ho gai..par baad me is ek line ne kuch uthal puthal si macha di aur likhne baith gaya fir jo samne aaya wo aap logon ki nazar

"sachche soude" ki liye ab yahan, bazar nahi milte,
sachchai aur imandaari ke, kharidaar nahi milte,

mere anjaam se be-khabr, kuch log kah gaye,
ab "ranjha, majnoo" se ishq ke, talab gar nahi milte,

"nav-ratno" ka sa ilm rakhte hai ab bhi log par
unhe akbar jaise shahnshaon ke, darbaar nahi milte,

mai roya shiddat se aur chalka aasman bhi,
log kahte hain ab "baiju bawara" se, funkaar nahi milte

masroof yun rahte hain wo paraye shagal me,
ghar loutate hain to khud ke hi, ghar-baar nahi milte,

beshaq hai kai katlon ka iljaam unke sar,
kaatil jo haathon me liye, tlawar nahi milte,

tirachi nigaah ka asar, ghayal hue kai,
hasinaon ke paas ab ye, hathiyaar nahi milte

us raste ko sahee samjhne ka guman na karna dost
jis rah pe sirf gul milen, aur khwar nahi milte

taS**** si de gaye, dushmano ke ye bayaan
tum jaise log jindagi me har-baar nahi milte

sare aam numaish gunahon ki, saaqi-sharab ki
Ab "Bekarar" se sidhe sade, gunahgaar nahi milte


Sanjeev, maine ye poem OFFLINE reh ke padhi thi aur socha tha jab login karungi tab reply karungi...aur bas reh gaya....

Bohot hi khoob...behad baareeki se likha gaya hai..aur padhne waale pe apna asar chorh jaata hai. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: September 26, 2008, 01:24:09 PM »
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bahoot khoooob shikha...................

aaj bhi taiyaar hai mere desh ke jawan
aivaz me "deshprem" ke mange to lahoo koi,
katra na mil saka to fir kahna pada mujhe
neta ab "subhash chandr boss" se asardaar nahi milte


muskarahen sounp de, badle me dard ke,
ab aise ishq ke talabgaar nahi milte,
galatiyan sare aam jo kahen "bekarar" se,
dushman to milte hain kai par yaar nahi milte





Waah... Bahut sahi kaha aapne... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: September 26, 2008, 01:45:17 PM »
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qalaam ne aapke, kuch aisa asar chhoda
ki tareef mein lafz bhi do-chaar nahi milte..
aap jaise dil se likhne waalon ki kami jo hai
aaj kal toh aap se shayar 'bekaraar' nahi milte..
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«Reply #12 on: September 26, 2008, 01:49:27 PM »
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qalaam ne aapke, kuch aisa asar chhoda
ki tareef mein lafz bhi do-chaar nahi milte..
aap jaise dil se likhne waalon ki kami jo hai
aaj kal toh aap se shayar 'bekaraar' nahi milte..


Kya baat hai... Sanya.. Applause
Bahut sahi kaha tumne.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: September 26, 2008, 01:54:17 PM »
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qalaam ne aapke, kuch aisa asar chhoda
ki tareef mein lafz bhi do-chaar nahi milte..
aap jaise dil se likhne waalon ki kami jo hai
aaj kal toh aap se shayar 'bekaraar' nahi milte..


oye hoye mai mar jaawan..kya baat hai, drunken_smilie drunken_smilie
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«Reply #14 on: October 17, 2008, 10:25:18 AM »
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kal kisi dost se phone pe baat ho rahi thi poocha maine kahan ho to jawab aaya "Bazar me" maine kaha bazar me kya kar rahe ho...jawab aaya "bikane ko aaya hun kharidaar nahi milte" khair baat aayi gai ho gai..par baad me is ek line ne kuch uthal puthal si macha di aur likhne baith gaya fir jo samne aaya wo aap logon ki nazar

"sachche soude" ki liye ab yahan, bazar nahi milte,
sachchai aur imandaari ke, kharidaar nahi milte,

mere anjaam se be-khabr, kuch log kah gaye,
ab "ranjha, majnoo" se ishq ke, talab gar nahi milte,

"nav-ratno" ka sa ilm rakhte hai ab bhi log par
unhe akbar jaise shahnshaon ke, darbaar nahi milte,

mai roya shiddat se aur chalka aasman bhi,
log kahte hain ab "baiju bawara" se, funkaar nahi milte

masroof yun rahte hain wo paraye shagal me,
ghar loutate hain to khud ke hi, ghar-baar nahi milte,

beshaq hai kai katlon ka iljaam unke sar,
kaatil jo haathon me liye, tlawar nahi milte,

tirachi nigaah ka asar, ghayal hue kai,
hasinaon ke paas ab ye, hathiyaar nahi milte

us raste ko sahee samjhne ka guman na karna dost
jis rah pe sirf gul milen, aur khwar nahi milte

taS**** si de gaye, dushmano ke ye bayaan
tum jaise log jindagi me har-baar nahi milte

sare aam numaish gunahon ki, saaqi-sharab ki
Ab "Bekarar" se sidhe sade, gunahgaar nahi milte


Bekarar aapk Kalaam Ne To Be'karar Kardiya...
Kaafi arsa e daraz k baad pahucha hun,,kya karun Yo.pe aane ka mann nahi karta..

kuch aapk puraane paane ultaaye..behtrin ash'aar padhne ko mile..badhiya si reply bhi dete ho aap..ye bhi dekha.
100% shayar hi aise kalaam likh sakta hai..har lafz bareeqi se juda hua hai..
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