"Khwaish" Woh jeena Bhi Aakhir Kya Jeena Hai!!!!! -Panna 2:Shairi - E

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«Reply #15 on: January 08, 2011, 08:24:11 AM »

bahottttttt hi dil ko chhuti aur zindagi k sach ko saamne laati hui poem hai ye aapki khwaish ji...

dil me jo feelings aai wo yahan likhi hain dekhiye zara

http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/miscellaneous-shayri/khoti-rahi-main-t60825.0.html;new#new


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Re: "Khwaish" Woh jeena Bhi Aakhir Kya Jeena Hai!!!!!

«Reply #16 on: January 08, 2011, 12:32:04 PM »

Badi sunder rachna hai aapki Khwaish ji....
Shikhshaprad...dil ko kachot-ti hui...mast..

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Re: "Khwaish" Woh jeena Bhi Aakhir Kya Jeena Hai!!!!!

«Reply #17 on: January 08, 2011, 12:51:42 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on January 05, 2011, 02:50:00 PM

Phool Se Khusboo, Labon Se Muskurahat Cheen Li
Meri khwaisho Ne Meri Khilkilahat Cheen Li..

Bahut sahee kahaa hai aapney! Khwaahishoun ki koyee 'seemaa' nahin hotee! Par, yah bhi sach hai, ki, 'khwaahisheyn' na hoteen, to, aaj insaan jis maqaam par jaa pahunchaa hai, kabhee bhi na pahunch paataa! Khwaahisheyn zindagee mein rawaanagee laateen hain, taazagee laateen hain! Unhain 'disciplined' karney ki zaroorat hameyshaa rahtee hai: nahin to mushkilen hi mushkileyn hain! Aapney 'mukt chhand' mein khoob likhaa hai; aur beshqeematee likhaa hai!

- abd bundeli

Abd Ji, Aapka Teh Dil Se Dhanyawaad Jo Aapne Meri kavita ko apna waqt diya..aapke Comments mere Liye Bahut Anmol Hai,Jinhe mein Lafzon mein Zaahir Nahi Kar Sakta ..Thanks A Million Sirji!!!

Abd Ji, Insaan Agar Zindagi mein Apne Dil mein Khwaishe Naa Paale To Vakkai Zindagi mein Koi Rawaangi, Koi Taazgi Naa Hogi par Kabhi-Kabhi Hadd se Zyaada Khwaishe Yaa Sapne Dekhne Se Insaan Apni Roz-aana Zindagi Ko Khushi Se Jeena Bhool Jaata Hai, Yahan Main Khud-Beeti baat kar Raha Hoon..Kayi Baar Aisa Hota Hai Ke Kuch Paane Ki umeed mein Jo Aapke Paas Hai, Aap usse Bhi Kho Dete ho..


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«Reply #18 on: January 09, 2011, 07:36:45 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on January 08, 2011, 12:51:42 PM

aapkaa 'swagat' hai, khwahish ji! aapney thheek kahaa hai! aapki nigaah shaayad meyree is laain par naheen parhee hai, "Unhain 'disciplined' karney ki zaroorat hameyshaa rahtee hai: nahin to mushkilen hi mushkileyn hain!": kyounki ismein bhi wahee kahaa gayaa hai jo aapney kahaa hai! Aapney jo 'samaanjanak shabd' meyrey liye isteymaal kiye hain, unkey liye shukraguzaar huun!

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Re: "Khwaish" Woh jeena Bhi Aakhir Kya Jeena Hai!!!!!

«Reply #19 on: January 13, 2011, 08:06:36 AM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on January 09, 2011, 07:36:45 AM

Ji Abd Ji, Aapne Bilkul Durust Faramaya, Hum Apni Tamanayen, Apni khwaisho ko Disciplined Tareeke Se Hi Zindagi Mein dhaalna Hoga..

Aapka Phir Se Teh Dil Se Shukriya Sirji


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«Reply #20 on: January 13, 2011, 11:35:07 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on January 13, 2011, 08:06:36 AM

Ji Abd Ji, Aapne Bilkul Durust Faramaya, Hum Apni Tamanayen, Apni khwaisho ko Disciplined Tareeke Se Hi Zindagi Mein dhaalna Hoga..

Aapka Phir Se Teh Dil Se Shukriya Sirji

You're most welcome khwaish ji!

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Re: "Khwaish" Woh jeena Bhi Aakhir Kya Jeena Hai!!!!!

«Reply #21 on: January 15, 2011, 11:02:13 AM »

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on January 05, 2011, 06:03:58 PM

waah khwaishji mazaa aa gaya par ek baat mere mann mein bhi aa rahi hai.

gareebi mein kaisi masti.
ghat jati hai neend,badh jati hai bhookh.
nadiya ,saagar,jheel jharne to kya.
aankhon ka pani bhi jata hai sookh.

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Sabse pehle To sureshji, bahut Khoob!!!

bahut hi gehra sher arz kiya hai aapne..

Aur Bilkul Sahi Sureshji, Maine Bhi kahi Baar Apni Poetries mein yeh baat kahi hai Ke "Aaj Ke Daur Main, Gareebi Se Badi Koi saza Nahi"

Par Yeh bhi Sach Hai Ke Insaan Jab Kuch Paa Leta Hai To Usse Naa Khone Ke Liye Din raat Ek Kar Deta Hai Jisme Woh Apni Zindagi Ko Bhaag-daud mein Laga Deta Hai..Uss Disha Par Yeh Soch Thi..