kirdaar..........A.B

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                          wo baad ghooroob-e-aaftaab   nikle...,
                          jaise  ki   hamesha  mahtaab nikle...,

                          samajh kar insaa.n main paas gaya...,
                          wo   to   saraapa  sharaab  nikle...,

                          shakal sawaab ki aisi dikhaya usne...,
                          baad  maut  ke  sab  aazaab  nikle...,

                          mokhtasar  si  neend se kya haasil...,
                          taabir  nikle   na  khawaab  nikle...,

                          teri  joostjoo  teri  aarzoo  mein...,
                          ash'aar   dil  se  be-hisaab nikle...,

                          kirdaar sahej ke jo rakhe the bechain...,
                          naye zamaane mein saare kharaab nikle...,




                 ghooroob-e-aaftaab -sunset

                 sawaab-------------gift,

                 mahtaab-----------chaand
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«Reply #1 on: October 05, 2013, 01:02:02 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: October 05, 2013, 01:40:02 AM »
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                          wo baad ghooroob-e-aaftaab   nikle...,
                          jaise  ki   hamesha  mahtaab nikle...,

                          samajh kar insaa.n main paas gaya...,
                          wo   to   saraapa  sharaab  nikle...,

                          shakal sawaab ki aisi dikhaya usne...,
                          baad  maut  ke  sab  aazaab  nikle...,

                          mokhtasar  si  neend se kya haasil...,
                          taabir  nikle   na  khawaab  nikle...,

                          teri  joostjoo  teri  aarzoo  mein...,
                          ash'aar   dil  se  be-hisaab nikle...,

                          kirdaar sahej ke jo rakhe the bechain...,
                          naye zamaane mein saare kharaab nikle...,




                 ghooroob-e-aaftaab -sunset

                 sawaab-------------gift,

                 mahtaab-----------chaand

Waah Waah,Kya Bat Bahut Khoob.
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«Reply #3 on: October 05, 2013, 03:19:17 AM »
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bohut khoob. nice poem.
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«Reply #4 on: October 05, 2013, 08:37:33 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: October 05, 2013, 08:51:12 AM »
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mokhtasar  si  neend se kya haasil...,
taabir  nikle   na  khawaab  nikle...,

teri  joostjoo  teri  aarzoo  mein...,
ash'aar   dil  se  be-hisaab nikle...,

EK RAU ke saath dheron daad
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«Reply #6 on: October 05, 2013, 02:16:09 PM »
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ek rau to bnta hai boss
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Behad khoobsurat ghazal se nawaza hai aapne adil ji.. bahut khoob.. khaas yeh do ashaar bahut pasand aaye.. dheron dheron daaaaaad..

 teri  joostjoo  teri  aarzoo  mein...,
 ash'aar   dil  se  be-hisaab nikle...,

 kirdaar sahej ke jo rakhe the bechain...,
 naye zamaane mein saare kharaab nikle...,
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2013, 05:37:52 PM »
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kya baaat hai...
mokhtasar  si  neend se kya haasil...,
taabir  nikle   na  khawaab  nikle...,
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                          samajh kar insaa.n main paas gaya...,
                          wo   to   saraapa  sharaab  nikle...,

                          shakal sawaab ki aisi dikhaya usne...,
                          baad  maut  ke  sab  aazaab  nikle...,

                          mokhtasar  si  neend se kya haasil...,
                          taabir  nikle   na  khawaab  nikle...,



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Waah Waah,Kya Bat Bahut Khoob.

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bohut khoob. nice poem.


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