KWAISH (CSET)

by MANOJ6568 on May 21, 2010, 06:26:09 AM
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BADE HOKAR BHI KYU HUM BADE NAHI BAN PAATE HAI
VICHAAR AKSAR AISE MERE DIMAAG MEI AATE HAI
KYU SHOHARAT AMITAAB JAISI PA PAATE HAI
PAISA AMBANI JAISA KYU NAHI BANA PAATE HAI
SOCH KAR APNI KISMAT PER AANSU BAHATE HAI
GAALIYA KHUDA TO  BHI BAHUT SUNATE HAI
EK DIN KHUDA KE SAAME KHUD KO HUM PAATE HAI
HAME DEKH WO MAND MAND MUSKATE HAI
KYA HAI MERI TAMNA WO JAANNA CHAHATE HAI
ALGE JAANM ME HUM KYA BANNA CHAHATE HAI
 KUCH SOCH KE HUM CHUP RAH JAATE HAI
KHAYAAL UNKI JINDGI KE PHIR DIMAAG MEI AATE HAI
KYA YE BADE LOG KHUDA KE DARH KAR PAATE HAI
KYA YE BADE LOG DARD LOGO KA SAMJH PAATE HAI
FURSAT KABHI NAHI APNI JINDGI MEI YE PAATE HAI
JEENA TO CHODO,CHAIN SE BHI NAHI MAR PAATE HAI
KIYE JAANE,ANJAANE HAMNE KUCH AISE ACCHE KARAM
KHUDA TAK DAR PER MERE KWAISH PUCHANE AATE HAI
AISI KISMAT HAR KOI KAHA CHAH KAR BHI PA PAATE HAI
YEHI SOCH HUM BUS CHUP SE HO JAATE HAI
AGLE JANAM MEI MANOJ HE BANNA CHAHTE HAI



YAHI SOCH AB HUM CHUP SE RAH JAATE HAI
ALGE JANAM ME HUM MANOJ HE BANNA CHAHTE HAI
SABKUCH HOTE HUE BHI NAHI CHAIN SE WO RAH PAATE HAI




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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2010, 06:45:16 AM »
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Wah wah Manoj ji,ek alag soch ke saath apne ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se likha.mindblowing creation.keep up the good work icon_salut Hats off to you! Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause icon_thumleft
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2010, 06:49:26 AM »
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thanx for liking
mujse laaga shayed ye na kisi ko samjh aayegi,na pasand ayegi,phir bhi bahut himmat kar ke likhi hai
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2010, 06:56:26 AM »
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Aisa mat soch Manoj ji aapne apne dil ke jazbaato ko likha hai.bahut khoob
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2010, 09:02:56 AM »
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Bahut achchhi peshkash hai Manoj Ji
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2010, 12:02:54 PM »
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Moved to appropriate section!

Thnx!
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2010, 05:05:07 PM »
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BULANDI DER TAK KIS SHAKHS KE HISSE ME RAHTI HAI
BAHUT OONCHI EMARAT HAR GHADI KHATARE ME RAHTI HAI

BAHUT ACHCHE MANOJ JI.
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«Reply #7 on: May 22, 2010, 05:44:20 PM »
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Arey bhai manoj ji bahut kuchh likh dala aapne, poora ehsaas bhar diya, bahut khub...

Ham chamaktey huye suraj pe nazar rakhtey hain,
Tum samajhtey ho sitaron se bahal jayenge..!! (-NM-)
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«Reply #8 on: May 22, 2010, 06:21:02 PM »
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DR PANDAY G
Arey bhai manoj ji bahut kuchh likh dala aapne, poora ehsaas bhar diya, bahut khub...

Ham chamaktey huye suraj pe nazar rakhtey hain,
Tum samajhtey ho sitaron se bahal jayenge..!! (-NM-)

Arey bhai manoj ji bahut kuchh likh dala aapne, poora ehsaas bhar diya, bahut khub...

Ham chamaktey huye suraj pe nazar rakhtey hain,
Tum samajhtey ho sitaron se bahal jayenge..!! (-NM-)


HAUSLA AFSAI KE LIYE SHUKARIKA

CHAND LOG HE JAJBA DIL KA SAMJH PAATE HAI
UN CHAND LOGO ME NAAM HUM AAPKA BHI PAATE HAI
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2011, 06:25:13 PM »
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o god!…
itni umda soch!
behtareen soch aur khubsurat bayani…
lajawaab peshkash manoj ji…

aapki soch ko maan gaye hum
aap kya chij ho jaan gaye hum
khud ko na sahi
aapko to pehcaan gaye hum

bahot ooncha to mai bhi uda
ab jaminiyat ko bhh pehchaan gaye hum
mahal bana li ummeedo ki lekin
bethe hain raakh par ye bhi to jaan gaye hum!!!
””
kamaal ki post dear
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MANOJ6568
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2011, 03:23:46 AM »
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thanx
utne acche dhang se nahi likh paaya,jitne acche dhang se sochi thi
aapki shayeri ka ,aur daad dene kav tarika lajawab hai
o god!…
itni umda soch!
behtareen soch aur khubsurat bayani…
lajawaab peshkash manoj ji…

aapki soch ko maan gaye hum
aap kya chij ho jaan gaye hum
khud ko na sahi
aapko to pehcaan gaye hum

bahot ooncha to mai bhi uda
ab jaminiyat ko bhh pehchaan gaye hum
mahal bana li ummeedo ki lekin
bethe hain raakh par ye bhi to jaan gaye hum!!!
””
kamaal ki post dear
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nirala
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«Reply #11 on: May 18, 2011, 03:31:58 AM »
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thanx
utne acche dhang se nahi likh paaya,jitne acche dhang se sochi thi
aapki shayeri ka ,aur daad dene kav tarika lajawab hai
thanx…
par aapne jesa likha wo hi behtareen hai…
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«Reply #12 on: October 01, 2013, 03:20:52 AM »
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thanx…
par aapne jesa likha wo hi behtareen hai…

happy3 Winking happy3
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«Reply #13 on: October 05, 2013, 03:59:16 AM »
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wah  wah, bohut he ahm aur acha mozoo he. Daad qabool kijye.
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«Reply #14 on: October 08, 2013, 03:23:23 AM »
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wah  wah, bohut he ahm aur acha mozoo he. Daad qabool kijye.
THX
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