kyun soch rahaa hu..........ufaq

by ufaq on June 09, 2012, 03:55:21 AM
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aatish ka shagal shah ko tha soch rahaa hu.
kyun jhoparaa muflis ka jalaa soch rahaa hu.

kyun khelane ki umr men beche hai khilone
kyun ho gayaa bachcha ye badaa soch rahaa hu.

kyun dair haram par ye kalah kar rahe hai hum
har zarre men jab wo hai basaa soch rahaa hu.

ye chamchamaati motaro taameero ka shahar
par khaali hai kaasah e gadaa soch rahaa hu.

yu sochne se kab aye ufaq soorate badlee,
kyun soch rahaa hu main ye kya soch rahaa hu.
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«Reply #1 on: June 09, 2012, 05:08:20 AM »
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bht ache ehsaaso ko alfaaz die h aapne--
daad daad

thodi aur behtar ho sakti thi aapki kalaam

khus rahie
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«Reply #2 on: June 09, 2012, 05:21:37 AM »
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aatish ka shagal shah ko tha soch rahaa hu.
kyun jhoparaa muflis ka jalaa soch rahaa hu.

kyun khelane ki umr men beche hai khilone
kyun ho gayaa bachcha ye badaa soch rahaa hu.

kyun dair haram par ye kalah kar rahe hai hum
har zarre men jab wo hai basaa soch rahaa hu.

ye chamchamaati motaro taameero ka shahar
par khaali hai kaasah e gadaa soch rahaa hu.

mumkin ye nahi sochne se soorate badle
kyun soch rahaa hu jo ufaq soch rahaa hu.

good dude
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«Reply #3 on: June 09, 2012, 05:27:30 AM »
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bahut khoob ufaq bhaai par maqte se qaafiyaa gaayab hai zaraa ek baar fir dekh le to inaayat hogee aapke jazbaat par dheron daad
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«Reply #4 on: June 09, 2012, 05:35:17 AM »
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bahut khoob ufaq bhaai par maqte se qaafiyaa gaayab hai zaraa ek baar fir dekh le to inaayat hogee aapke jazbaat par dheron daad

bahut -2 shukriya aapka janaab.....mujhe correct karne ke liye....
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«Reply #5 on: June 09, 2012, 05:58:14 AM »
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Bahut Umda likha hai aapne

Aagaaj agar ye hai to anjaam khuda jaane..

bahut khoob..jaise jaise aage badhenge, kalaam me aur badhottari hogi.
Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: June 09, 2012, 09:15:58 AM »
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Bahut  khoob  Ufaq  saheb . Khubsurat  ghazal .
4th  sher  zara  dekh  lein .
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«Reply #7 on: June 09, 2012, 09:33:35 AM »
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Beautiful Applause
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«Reply #8 on: June 09, 2012, 11:41:04 AM »
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bahut khub ufaqji
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«Reply #9 on: June 09, 2012, 01:36:22 PM »
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Ufaq Sahaab Aadaab!

Kia baat hai janab kia baat hai behad gazab ki kalaam
kahi hai janab... bade hi gehre aur umdaa khayaaloN ko
piroya hai aapne... Usual Smile

Sabhi ahsaas o khayaal behad khoob hai...
Har ashaar meiN kafi gehrai... Is pur asar aur dilkash
kalaam par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul
kijiye.... Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                   



aatish ka shagal shah ko tha soch rahaa hu.
kyun jhoparaa muflis ka jalaa soch rahaa hu.

kyun khelane ki umr men beche hai khilone
kyun ho gayaa bachcha ye badaa soch rahaa hu.

kyun dair haram par ye kalah kar rahe hai hum
har zarre men jab wo hai basaa soch rahaa hu.

ye chamchamaati motaro taameero ka shahar
par khaali hai kaasah e gadaa soch rahaa hu.

mumkin ye nahi sochne se soorate badle
kyun soch rahaa hu main ye kya soch rahaa hu.
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