mai.........sirf mai....

by akela on July 18, 2005, 07:36:08 PM
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akela
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goya rota kaun hai yaha,
                             bus hansee phutthi hi nahi hai,
                             haa mauke tho aaye bahoot magar
                             bahar ki koi umeed uutthi hi nahi hai

sharab....ek dost hai...yaara,
yeh chutthi hi nahi hai..
saanso ki door kamjor hai
kambakht par tutthi hi nahi ha
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Ghazal
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«Reply #1 on: July 19, 2005, 04:21:29 AM »
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ishq hota hai zamane mein sabko
hum nahi kahte key ishq mat karo

ishq hai wo samnder gehra
jismey ek baar jaker koi wapes nahi aata

iss samnder mein jaaney sey pahle
pyaar ki gahraaiya to samjho

umeed choodne sey accha hai
tufaan ko paar karo
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Meena
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«Reply #2 on: July 20, 2005, 04:09:40 PM »
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very nice akhela and ghazal ji!!

sanson ki door toot bhi jaaye to kya,
humari to rooh bhi unse mohabbat karti hai,
lak koshishe kar li unko bhulane ki humne,
par yeh ishq ki aag jo hai, rokhne se aur bhi bharti hai!
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Ghazal
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«Reply #3 on: July 21, 2005, 11:34:35 AM »
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whaa

kya khoob kaha hai meena

ishq ko aag kahta hai
fer bhi loog  usmey jalte hai
ishq woo tapan hai
jisey paani nahi bukhata
or her koi jhal bhi nahi pata
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akela
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«Reply #4 on: July 21, 2005, 03:28:21 PM »
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cool...........both of u.....
 
aawargi mai maine sab bhula diya
humne rone mai saara waqt gujar diya,
             chalo ek ahsaan aaj khuda ne kiya
              jab duniya ne mera naam mita diya
mai leta tha oode kafan majar pe
uff kisne tumhe mera pata bata diya
              aaur yu muskara diya berahmi se ussne
               ek bijali giri aaur mera saara kafan jala diya.
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Meena
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«Reply #5 on: July 21, 2005, 03:36:55 PM »
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thank u ghazal ji and akhela ji... dono ne bohot acha likha!!!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #6 on: July 21, 2005, 03:52:46 PM »
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shukariya aapka............................................ ................................... Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Usual Smile  Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: July 21, 2005, 04:51:05 PM »
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Very nice work akela ji and ghazal and meena sis Usual Smile !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 22, 2005, 08:52:13 AM »
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thxx or shukriya app sab kaa

both of very good

app sab ney bohot accha likha hai
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