MASHGOOL JAHAN

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MASHGOOL JAHAN

Jab se parikshaa waalee zindgi poori huee hai...
Tab se hee zindgi kee parikshaa shuru huee hai!


Ek din jo main ne apnaa mobil milaayaa...
To apnee zindgi kee dor ko busy paayaa,
yaanee ke aap kee line wayast hai

Auron se milney mein sab jahan yahan masat hai,
Magar khud se milney waqt…
Har bashar yahan wayast hai!
Koi naa degaa saath teraa yahan…
Har koi khud mein hee mashgool hai!
Zindgi kaa ek hee asool hai yahan…
Tujhe girnaa bhi khud hai,
Aur sambhalnaa bhi khud hai !!


Parikshaa = examination; life of a student;
Wayast = busy; mashgool;
Zindgi kee dor = Mobil phone;

( Recomposed original idea not mine. )
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«Reply #1 on: May 28, 2015, 05:01:03 PM »
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MASHGOOL JAHAN

Jab se parikshaa waalee zindgi poori huee hai...
Tab se hee zindgi kee parikshaa shuru huee hai!


Ek din jo main ne apnaa mobil milaayaa...
To apnee zindgi kee dor ko busy paayaa,
Yaanee ke aap kee line wayast hai!

Auron se milney mein sab jahan yahan masat hai,
Magar khud se milney waqt…
Har bashar yahan wayast hai!
Koi naa degaa saath teraa yahan…
Har koi khud mein hee mashgool hai!
Zindgi kaa ek hee asool hai yahan…
Tujhe girnaa bhi khud hai,
Aur sambhalnaa bhi khud hai !!


Parikshaa = examination; life of a student;
Wayast = busy; mashgool;

( Recomposed original idea not mine. )
Surindar. N

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«Reply #2 on: May 28, 2015, 06:53:50 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: May 28, 2015, 08:13:37 PM »
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MASHGOOL JAHAN

Jab se parikshaa waalee zindgi poori huee hai...
Tab se hee zindgi kee parikshaa shuru huee hai!


Auron se milney mein sab jahan yahan masat hai,
Magar khud se milney waqt…
Har bashar yahan wayast hai!
Koi naa degaa saath teraa yahan…
Har koi khud mein hee mashgool hai!
Zindgi kaa ek hee asool hai yahan…
Tujhe girnaa bhi khud hai,
Aur sambhalnaa bhi khud hai !!


Parikshaa = examination; life of a student;
Wayast = busy; mashgool;

( Recomposed original idea not mine. )
Surindar. N



haan ji sahi farmayaa aur acha kiya ke aap ne words ki meaning bhi likh di warna main aap ke iss kalaam ko skip kar deti mujhe hindi samjh nahin aati hai siwaa uss word ke jo urdu mein bola jataa hai iss wajha se hindi ki likhi kisi bhi composition ko kyaa kahoon aur mushkil hindi bhi nahin aati hai isliye koi poem english ke font mein ho aur saare words difficult hindi ho wo bhi skip kar jaati hoon  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #6 on: May 29, 2015, 12:59:48 PM »
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bahut shukria Ravindera Jee.
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haan ji sahi farmayaa aur acha kiya ke aap ne words ki meaning bhi likh di warna main aap ke iss kalaam ko skip kar deti mujhe hindi samjh nahin aati hai siwaa uss word ke jo urdu mein bola jataa hai iss wajha se hindi ki likhi kisi bhi composition ko kyaa kahoon aur mushkil hindi bhi nahin aati hai isliye koi poem english ke font mein ho aur saare words difficult hindi ho wo bhi skip kar jaati hoon  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
  Sheba Sahiba main ne jaan bhooj kar hindi kaa word vayast use kiyaa thaa, kyun kee yeh sound se hee busy lagtaa hai. Lafz mushgool kuchh yun lagtaa hai ke ek daaerye mein ghoomte raho, kuchh uselessly goomte raho lagtaa hai.
bahut shukria daad ke liye Sheba Sahiba.
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«Reply #8 on: May 30, 2015, 12:55:17 PM »
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bahut shukria Saini Sahib.
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